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Hi TipsyElephant,
When you have the time, could you please take a look at the updated draft for Draft:David_E._Olson? I tried to address all your original comments for declining the submission.
Thank you in advance for your time. --HHA LTP (talk) 21:52, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
- @HHA LTP: I'll take a look at it right now and let you know what I think. TipsyElephant (talk) 12:18, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
- @HHA LTP: the draft definitely looks better than it did, but before proceeding you'll need to disclose any conflicts of interest on the talk page. TipsyElephant (talk) 13:01, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
- @HHA LTP: I'm not entirely sure what you mean by "writing such a section". I need you to go to Draft talk:David E. Olson and respond to the questions I asked regarding your connection to David E. Olson and the status of your current account so that we can assess how to proceed with your drafts. TipsyElephant (talk) 17:16, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
- Hi @TipsyElephant. I tried my best to respond to your various concerns on my talk page at https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft_talk:David_E._Olson. Hopefully I didn't miss anything and that it helps to clarify. Thanks, HHA LTP (talk) 02:25, 14 June 2022 (UTC)
- @HHA LTP: I'm not entirely sure what you mean by "writing such a section". I need you to go to Draft talk:David E. Olson and respond to the questions I asked regarding your connection to David E. Olson and the status of your current account so that we can assess how to proceed with your drafts. TipsyElephant (talk) 17:16, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
Request on 21:19:30, 12 June 2022 for assistance on AfC submission by Wicontrib22
- Wicontrib22 (talk · contribs)
- Draft:Ali bin Samikh Al Marri ( | talk | history | links | watch | logs)
Thank you TipsyElephant for your feedback.
Please clarify concretely what is needed. I checked the references and footnotes and everything seems correct.
Wicontrib22 (talk) 21:19, 12 June 2022 (UTC)
- Hello Wicontrib22, I declined your draft for a couple reasons. First of all, you haven't addressed the previous commenter's concerns that the education and career sections are unsourced. In addition, the entire blockade section is unsourced, and the rest of the sections contain lists of claims about the person that are unsourced as well. WP:BLPs generally adhere to the WP:MINREF guidelines more strictly than other articles. Personally, I would simply remove the lists and replace them with prose supported by reliable sources and remove any material that can't be supported by reliable sources. If you want more info on lists you could give WP:LISTDD a quick read. TipsyElephant (talk) 01:22, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
- Hello TipsyElephant, Many thanks for your clarification. I will fix this. Wicontrib22 (talk) 21:04, 13 June 2022 (UTC)
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