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GA Review
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Debra Miceli/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
I shall be reviewing this page against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status. Jezhotwells (talk) 19:51, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
Quick fail criteria assessment
- The article completely lacks reliable sources – see Wikipedia:Verifiability.
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- The topic is treated in an obviously non-neutral way – see Wikipedia:Neutral point of view.
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- There are cleanup banners that are obviously still valid, including cleanup, wikify, NPOV, unreferenced or large numbers of fact, clarifyme, or similar tags.
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- The article is or has been the subject of ongoing or recent, unresolved edit wars.
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- The article specifically concerns a rapidly unfolding current event with a definite endpoint.
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No problems encountered when checking against the quick fail criteria, on to substantive review. Jezhotwells (talk) 19:54, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
Checking against GA criteria
- It is reasonably well written.
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Lead: two successive sentences start with She later...;'Early career: six sentences start with She..., consider using her family name or varying the sentence structure to improve readability. This fault is common throughout the article.Personal life: She also worked at Arby's ... I know that you have wikilinked Arby's but it would be better to explain e.g. She worked at an Arby's restaurant. I don't think that chain is quite as famous as MacDonalds. ...she released a CD of her singing in Japanese. Clumsy, suggest something like ...she released a CD of songs sung in Japanese.Suggest a thorough copy-edit. Jezhotwells (talk) 20:44, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
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- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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- I fixed one deadlink using CheckLinks. References check out. Jezhotwells (talk) 20:44, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
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- b (citations to reliable sources):
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- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
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- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
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- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
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OK, the prose as noted above needs copy-editing. On hold for seven days. Jezhotwells (talk) 20:44, 28 July 2009 (UTC)- Wow! Much improved. I am happy to confirm that this article deserves Ga status. Thanks for your hard work. Jezhotwells (talk) 16:05, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
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Thanks for the review. I have copyedited the article, specifically focusing on sentence structure. Is it sufficient? Nikki♥311 02:51, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
Real name
Debra Miceli's real name seems to be Debra Lewandowsky. Do we have to redirect the page?? Jeangabin (talk) 01:06, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
- Do you have some reliable proof? It still isn't her WP:COMMONNAME so no redirect needed. Nikki♥311 03:12, 12 September 2009 (UTC)
Odd. This says "Debra Lewandowsky NOT Debra Ann Miceli", and her website (linked in the article as ref) says Debrah, not Debra. While they might not be reliable sources, there are not many reliable sources in this area, I guess. Comments? Materialscientist (talk) 13:00, 28 February 2011 (UTC)
Madusa and the LPWA
How come there is nothing in this Madusa article about her time in the Ladies Professional Wrestling Association (aka the LPWA)? 94.14.97.110 (talk) 15:54, 11 March 2015 (UTC)
- If you can provide a [[WP:RS|reliable source] with this information, it can be added. Nikki♥311 20:22, 11 March 2015 (UTC)
Requested move 22 April 2016
Debrah Miceli → Madusa – The current location of the article is suspect as it's clearly not her most common name. It appears on its face that Madusa is the most common name due to the length of her career under that ring name as well as plenty of reliable sources who still refer to her under that name, but I would also like to hear arguments for "Alundra Blayze", especially since she was recently inducted in the Hall of Fame under that name. Feedback 19:52, 22 April 2016 (UTC)