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Hello. I am new around here. First of all thank you for taking the time to edit Wikipedia. In reviewing your some of your edits a question arose. On this edit: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:MobileDiff/713537787
You stated trimming promo, conform to sources. Those two statements were in the associated sources. As a noob what should one know to understand why those statements were removed? Thank you.
- Welcome to Wikipedia, and thanks for reaching out! You're correct, "Brown said that NAGR launched a campaign to help the bill pass using email, direct mail, telephone calls and social media to reach 80,000 Kansans" is in this source. I removed it because it felt somewhat promotional to me, as it was Brown, the head of the organization, making the report on numbers. If a third-party source had made the claim or corroborated it in their own voice, I'd feel better about it. The second portion of the paragraph I removed was "The bill passed the state legislature and Governor Sam Brownback signed the bill into law on April 2nd, making Kansas the sixth state allowing constitutional carry." I removed that because the way it appeared in the article, along with the other information in the paragraph, made it look to me like our Wikipedia article was giving credit to NAGR for the bill passing. This source says NAGR was a proponent of the bill, but it also mentions other groups like the NRA. So it seemed to be inappropriate to appear to "give credit" to the NAGR when in fact NAGR was apparently acting as part of a coalition of groups in support of the bill. I'm sure there are ways to rewrite this information to address these concerns, and I'd be happy to work with you on the article's talk page. Thanks! Safehaven86 (talk) 16:15, 13 April 2016 (UTC)
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Please comment on Talk:Ooty
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Would you please review this
[[1]] Springee (talk) 15:20, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
- Springee, I have nothing to add. It's only a matter of time before he hangs himself with his own rope. Safehaven86 (talk) 04:05, 29 April 2016 (UTC)
Please comment on Talk:Princess Beatrice of York
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Stop sending me messages
Hi and thanks for using Wikipedia! I have not done anything wrong, and I am not intimidated by your "warnings". I suggest you review the page on User space harassment. Have a great day. Theknightswhosay (talk) 04:28, 24 May 2016 (UTC)
- It's ironic that you're suggesting to me that I read a page that you're clearly not familiar with. See the section WP:NPLT at Wikipedia:Harassment, which clearly says you should not accuse other editors of libel, which, bizarrely, you did. Safehaven86 (talk) 15:17, 24 May 2016 (UTC)
Please comment on Template talk:Marriage
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Please comment on Talk:Duke Ellington
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