GA Review
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Reviewer: Adabow(complain) 05:35, 15 July 2010 (UTC)
The article is very close to GA standard, with just the referencing of certifications stopping it from passing. I have also mentioned some minor prose problems, but if they are not fixed the article will still pass GA. I will allow seven days for improvements to be made.
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance:
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Prose
- Opening sentence (and rest of lead) changes tense: "...is the third live album...and was available on DVD...", pick one tense and stick with it.
- 'Background' section: "The show was broadcast on VH1 on April 2, 2010 for the last time, just a few days after the official release" – this is a bit unclear; what show?
- "...promotional campaign for the release, giving an autographed DVD..." maybe giving away?
- 'Critical reception' section: "Mikael Wood from Entertainment Weekly gave the video a B+ and commented, "[T]his live CD-DVD", per MOS:QUOTE, the 'T' in 'This' doesn't need to be enclosed in square brackets
- 'Chart performance': the position of the charting of the Blu-Ray release should be included
- I was referring to the prose section
- New Zealand Album chart → [[Recording Industry Association of New Zealand|New Zealand Albums Chart]]
- 'Track listing' section: maybe rename as plural (Track listings), given the several listings
- Instead of breaking up the different listings with level three headers, why not include them as the
headline
parameter in the{{tracklist}}
template? The multiple headers also clog up the ToC
- Instead of breaking up the different listings with level three headers, why not include them as the
- Sure
References
- The Greek and Mexican certs are not in refs
- OK, all good
- 'Charts': for charts that use the Hung Medien archive (those with ref 26), please use the individual pages for each country. You can find these by clicking on the flag of each country