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Reviewer: Novice7 | Talk 16:47, 27 December 2010 (UTC)
I'll be reviewing the article. Novice7 | Talk 16:47, 27 December 2010 (UTC)
Very good. Just minor issues.
Lead
- The album is not upcoming.
- Done
Background and composition
- "It was also revealed that The-Dream will also not feature on the album version of the song when the.." – Maybe, "The-Dream will not be featured on the album version of the song.."?
- Done
- The last sentence may need some tense fixes.
Reception
- About the A-side for Gimmie Dat, I guess it should be something like this – "The song was featured as the one of the A-sides for "Gimmie Dat", in the UK pressing, where the latter peaked at number 111 on the UK Singles chart." or similar.
Others are very good. Just these issues. Novice7 | Talk 16:47, 27 December 2010 (UTC)