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GA Review
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Solo (concert residency)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: ZooBlazer (talk · contribs) 22:28, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
I've done DYK, FLC, and FAC reviews involving your articles, so I figured I might as well complete the foursome (is that the right word?) by doing a GA review. I should have my comments posted later today or tomorrow. -- ZooBlazer 22:28, 15 March 2024 (UTC)
- Pseud 14 Just some small things to clean up and then I'll do spotchecks. -- ZooBlazer 00:30, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not) |
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Lead
Comprising six shows
--> Should it be comprising of six shows?
- This edit actually suggests that comprise of is poor phrasing in Wikipedia. So I changed it to consisting of. (A patrol editor had fixed that before)
receiving praise for its theme and Velasquez's vocal abilities and connection with the audience
--> Comma after "abilities"
- Done
Background and development
On August 3, 2022, Velasquez
--> Velasquez should be linked as it's the first mention of her outside the lead.
- Linked. Wrote her full name on first instance
she would be performing a concert residency
--> also link concert residency for the same reason as above
- Linked
- I'll leave it up to you, but social media accounts could be linked as well, but I could see an argument for WP:OVERLINK.
- That makes sense, I've linked
announced that Solo will be staged
--> should it be would be staged now that everything is past tense? I notice you use was in the next sentence for promotion.
- You're right, as this was in the past. Changed.
- Are ticket prices necessary to include?
- I've removed its mention
Concert synopsis
- Is the synopsis written in present or past tense? Is starts out past tense, then it becomes present tense. Then switches back to past tense.
- My bad. Missed to changed those instances. Should be in the past tense now.
Madonna's "Crazy for You" which
--> add a comma before "which"
- Done
She proceeded with
andShe then started
--> Maybe adjust the wording of one of these sentences to not both start with "she" back to back.
- Revised
Critical response
In a review of the opening night, Leah Salterio writing for ABS-CBNnews.com highly praised
--> I think there should be a comma after .com- Also should ABS-CBNnews.com be in italics?
- Delink the site as well, as it is a WP:DUPLINK
- All done
Images
- For the infobox image, can you link a source where iMusic Entertainment posted it?
- I have added the link to its Facebook page where the poster was taken
Spotchecks
Using this version of the article:
- [1] - Looks good
- [5] - Looks good
- [8] - Looks good
- [10] - Looks good
- [11] - Looks good
Spotchecks all support the information the refs are used for in the article. Earwig picked up no major issues.
Discussion
@ZooBlazer: Thank you as always for reviewing my nomination. All comments actioned and look forward to the rest. Pseud 14 (talk) 01:49, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
- Happy with the changes. Spotchecks look good and no issues detected by earwig. Happy to pass! -- ZooBlazer 02:04, 16 March 2024 (UTC)