GA Review
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Reviewer: --Legolas (talk2me) 04:27, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
Hi all. I will be reviewing this article against the GA criterias.
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
OK first of all, rest aside, my main issue with this article is that its incomplete. The lead states that it is the third single, which the infobox contradicts. There is no info regarding the song composition, the credits. There is WP:MOS issues in the language. The part about the background is WP:OR. I have the iTunes booklet and nowhere it says all of that. I can't give more than two days for concerned editors to rectify these, so that normal review can start. --Legolas (talk2me) 11:39, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
- Fixed lead. There is no information readily available about composition although there are hints in the critical reception section. However I don't understand why you labeled the background original research as the infobox plainly states the producers and where producing, recording and mixing took place. Candyo32 (talk) 20:14, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
- Since reviews have already hinted at what kinda song "Love Me" is, you can easily have an essence of what should be the composition of this song. Before working with Bieber, DJ Frank E had recently produced songs such as Flo Rida & Kesha's "Right Round" and was also working on Madonna & Lil Wayne's "Revolver". + The song was the only song from My World to have no recording or production to take place in Georgia, the base of Bieber's career. — These lines are clearly WP:OR as it is not supported in the source, ie the iTunes booklet. Also it is WP:UNDUE as to what he has worked on previously, to be included. --Legolas (talk2me) 06:56, 3 May 2010 (UTC)
Good job, I am gonna pass this article now. Congratulations. --Legolas (talk2me) 03:46, 7 May 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks!! Only one more article to try to GA and I can try to fix up My World as a good topic!!! :) Candyo32 (talk) 03:54, 7 May 2010 (UTC)
Should we include his video for love me? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6FyW8J48As4 Crazychrisr92 (talk) 20:14, 2 August 2010 (UTC)