GA Review
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Reviewer: HueSatLum (talk · contribs) 19:50, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
I will make my first batch of comments and questions below. Don't hesitate to tell me if you disagree. HueSatLum 19:50, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
- It contains some dab links which should be fixed.
- Little was born in Newburyport, Massachusetts...opening a brokerage in 1834 is a long sentence; perhaps it should be separated.
- The "Market operations" section is rather long; it should probably be broken up into several subsections.
- Just a note: "Morris Canal and Banking Company" redirects to Morris Canal
- Is "their lasting outrage" referring to the Bostonian traders?
- "protege" → "protégé"
- The New York Times should be italicised
- He is missing persondata
- One more thing: "...making his fortune by leveraging both short sales and short sellers" – "short sellers" still links to a disambiguation page, but it appears to be the same as "short sales". Once this is cleared up, it should be good to go. HueSatLum 00:16, 19 March 2013 (UTC)
Criteria
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- well-covered by reliable sources
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- covers the major aspects of his life
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- fairly represented
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- no vandalism
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Images are all PD
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall: