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Reviewer: Steelkamp (talk · contribs) 03:25, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
Hello. I will be reviewing this article. Steelkamp (talk) 03:25, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- I've made some minor changes to the article myself. I hope your fine with them. Steelkamp (talk) 06:52, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
- Hi Steelkamp, really appreciate your detailed review of the article and the tweaks you made. Sorry for the delay - I'll be leaving my responses and changes to the article within a day. Aranya (talk) 17:53, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
- I am still concerned that the article does not meet the requirements for being broad in coverage. Therefore, I will fail this good article review. Steelkamp (talk) 11:36, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
- Hi Steelkamp, I totally agree with your reasoning in failing. If you don't mind I'll still leave the replies I was intending to before, since I still want to address your points. Thanks again for doing this review and my apologies for drawing this process out. Aranya (talk) 19:35, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
- I am still concerned that the article does not meet the requirements for being broad in coverage. Therefore, I will fail this good article review. Steelkamp (talk) 11:36, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
- Hi Steelkamp, really appreciate your detailed review of the article and the tweaks you made. Sorry for the delay - I'll be leaving my responses and changes to the article within a day. Aranya (talk) 17:53, 15 August 2021 (UTC)
- Why doesn't the article use DMY date format? The subject has strong national ties to Australia. Steelkamp (talk) 06:52, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
- Having many short paragraphs inhibits the flow of the text. Some paragraphs there can be combined together. Steelkamp (talk) 06:52, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
- The sentence on her youtube channel could be higher in the article, because it has been active since 2012, and the surrounding paragraphs are about late 2020. Steelkamp (talk) 06:52, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
- What is Funhaus? What type of videos does it make? Reviews? General gaming? I ask this because Inside Gaming is specified as a news program, and I think the same can be done for Funhaus. Steelkamp (talk) 06:52, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
She left Rooster Teeth in October 2020.
– This sentence can be expanded to sayShe left Rooster Teeth in October 2020, saying she has another opportunity she "couldn't say no to."
Steelkamp (talk) 06:52, 7 August 2021 (UTC)- Source 11 states that she has 102,000 Twitch followers, but the page does not mention Twitch at all. Steelkamp (talk) 06:52, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
- Source 4 says "But running her own channel gave her the opportunity to hone her video production skills, get comfortable speaking on camera, and share her thoughts and feelings about games." I reckon the paragraph on her youtube channel can be elaborated on. Steelkamp (talk) 06:52, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
- I was thinking somewhere along the lines of "Running a YouTube channel has enabled her to practice video production and how to speak on camera." Even though it's a pretty reasonable claim, I'm not too comfortable adding it with the given SVG.com article though, since it's not a quote from Pearce herself and I'm not sure how the author came to that conclusion. Aranya (talk) 19:35, 22 August 2021 (UTC)
- More can be elaborated on her move to the United States. Source 4 has some information there. Write the reason she moved there, her visa issues prior to getting a job at IGN and her temporary move back to Australia. Steelkamp (talk) 06:52, 7 August 2021 (UTC)
- Article has 1 image, which appears to be licensed correctly. Search on google reveals no other creative commons licensed images of Alanah Pearce, plus 1 image is adequate for an article of this size anyway. The image criteria is passed. Steelkamp (talk) 06:52, 7 August 2021 (UTC)