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This article is written in fairly poor language, and the content seems to dart from one point to another mid scentance. I wouldn't be surprised if Syed had written it himself :P |
This article is written in fairly poor language, and the content seems to dart from one point to another mid scentance. I wouldn't be surprised if Syed had written it himself :P |
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if you feel that way please be bold and help us by re wording the article :) [[User:Benon|Benon]] 16:27, 11 May 2006 (UTC) |
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i think this article could be expanded, the person i question has a reasonably high profile at the moment with tv coverage in the uk Benon 22:26, 26 April 2006 (UTC)
Is an appearance on a TV reality show notable enough? Saga City 14:34, 27 April 2006 (UTC) yes but hes was on a tv show on the 27th and sayes we should see more of him in the future plus im doing more researsch on him15:29, 28 April 2006 (UTC)
Expanded Enought?
Is it ok now can we take the banner away now.Bobo6balde66 15:25, 5 May 2006 (UTC)
Picture
Can anyone help me get a better picture of SyedBobo6balde66 14:22, 6 May 2006 (UTC)
Poor language
This article is written in fairly poor language, and the content seems to dart from one point to another mid scentance. I wouldn't be surprised if Syed had written it himself :P {{subst:usnsigned|82.7.74.130}}
if you feel that way please be bold and help us by re wording the article :) Benon 16:27, 11 May 2006 (UTC)