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Hi, I am nominating this article which has been coordinated by me but loads of others have chipped in. I believe it is comprehensive, has a lead summarising the article in 3 paras, is comprehensively referenced and the licencing for images is in order. The prose has been massaged by a few experienced copyeditors and is succinct ''(which it needs to be given the size of the article!)''. Drop my and let me know how I can improve it.cheers, [[User:Casliber|Casliber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Casliber|contribs]]) 09:24, 17 September 2007 (UTC) |
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:Regarding the length, I'm thinking that we could consider spinning "captivity" and "behaviour/biology" into subarticles. Those are the two main sections whose lengths make subarticles workable. Some stuff from "Cultural depictions" might be movable to the subarticle too. It's a very busy section. I'll try to review an convert the untemplated references at some point. [[User:Circeus|Circeus]] 04:36, 18 September 2007 (UTC) |
:Regarding the length, I'm thinking that we could consider spinning "captivity" and "behaviour/biology" into subarticles. Those are the two main sections whose lengths make subarticles workable. Some stuff from "Cultural depictions" might be movable to the subarticle too. It's a very busy section. I'll try to review an convert the untemplated references at some point. [[User:Circeus|Circeus]] 04:36, 18 September 2007 (UTC) |
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::This is tricky; luckily there is already a [[Cultural depictions of lions]] daughter article, though both sections you mention <s>are already in a summary style</s> as succinctily as I could make 'em. I'm wondering what could be trimmed without losing info. As a contrast for length, [[schizophrenia]] was a recently kept Featured Article, and [[Jerusalem]] a recent successful candidate, which are a little longer.cheers, [[User:Casliber|Casliber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Casliber|contribs]]) 06:36, 18 September 2007 (UTC) |
::This is tricky; luckily there is already a [[Cultural depictions of lions]] daughter article, though both sections you mention <s>are already in a summary style</s> as succinctily as I could make 'em. I'm wondering what could be trimmed without losing info. As a contrast for length, [[schizophrenia]] was a recently kept Featured Article, and [[Jerusalem]] a recent successful candidate, which are a little longer.cheers, [[User:Casliber|Casliber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Casliber|contribs]]) 06:36, 18 September 2007 (UTC) |