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Hi there. I see you've put Townsville up for nomination at [[WP:GAN]]. I haven't read it properly, but it looks in the right ballpark. One thing you're likely to come up against, though, is that the referencing isn't in great shape. The weblinks should ideally have something that identifies the publisher / source, and a retreival date, if nothing else. A lot of them only have the title of the webpage. For example, footnote 11 - the history from the Thuringowa City Council site - is in good shape, whereas most from number 38 onwards lack enough detail. I hope you'll be able to improve them. Ping me at my talk page if you have any questions. It'll probably be several weeks before a review comes along to do a proper review, so you've got a bit of time! regards, [[User:Hamiltonstone|hamiltonstone]] ([[User talk:Hamiltonstone|talk]]) 23:41, 19 September 2009 (UTC) |
Hi there. I see you've put Townsville up for nomination at [[WP:GAN]]. I haven't read it properly, but it looks in the right ballpark. One thing you're likely to come up against, though, is that the referencing isn't in great shape. The weblinks should ideally have something that identifies the publisher / source, and a retreival date, if nothing else. A lot of them only have the title of the webpage. For example, footnote 11 - the history from the Thuringowa City Council site - is in good shape, whereas most from number 38 onwards lack enough detail. I hope you'll be able to improve them. Ping me at my talk page if you have any questions. It'll probably be several weeks before a review comes along to do a proper review, so you've got a bit of time! regards, [[User:Hamiltonstone|hamiltonstone]] ([[User talk:Hamiltonstone|talk]]) 23:41, 19 September 2009 (UTC) |
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== [[Tom Harley]] == |
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I must disagree with your assessment of this article. Instead of expanding it to an article of the same quality as [[Joel Selwood]] (the only featured article for Wikiproject AFL), I contend that your edits are stubbing it down. The introduction is meant to be a summation of the entire article body. The body of the article itself is a work in progress, which you could have perhaps looked into through the article history instead of cutting it all out in one edit. I'm not quite sure of your issue with the possessions table, as its presence in football player articles has been a non-issue in many other articles. |
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Perhaps next time it would be best to raise your concerns through the discussion section of the article instead of undoing a good portion of the article. Cheers, [[User:Boomtish|Boomtish]] ([[User talk:Boomtish|talk]]) 12:16, 22 September 2009 (UTC) |
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Hi there. I see you've put Townsville up for nomination at WP:GAN. I haven't read it properly, but it looks in the right ballpark. One thing you're likely to come up against, though, is that the referencing isn't in great shape. The weblinks should ideally have something that identifies the publisher / source, and a retreival date, if nothing else. A lot of them only have the title of the webpage. For example, footnote 11 - the history from the Thuringowa City Council site - is in good shape, whereas most from number 38 onwards lack enough detail. I hope you'll be able to improve them. Ping me at my talk page if you have any questions. It'll probably be several weeks before a review comes along to do a proper review, so you've got a bit of time! regards, hamiltonstone (talk) 23:41, 19 September 2009 (UTC)
Hi there,
I must disagree with your assessment of this article. Instead of expanding it to an article of the same quality as Joel Selwood (the only featured article for Wikiproject AFL), I contend that your edits are stubbing it down. The introduction is meant to be a summation of the entire article body. The body of the article itself is a work in progress, which you could have perhaps looked into through the article history instead of cutting it all out in one edit. I'm not quite sure of your issue with the possessions table, as its presence in football player articles has been a non-issue in many other articles.
Perhaps next time it would be best to raise your concerns through the discussion section of the article instead of undoing a good portion of the article. Cheers, Boomtish (talk) 12:16, 22 September 2009 (UTC)