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Please do not use my talk page for conflicting opinions about the above article. Denisarona (talk) 11:10, 17 September 2011 (UTC)
- i'm sorry. dbigxray is spreading lies about me. i had to respond.-- mustihussain (talk) 11:12, 17 September 2011 (UTC)
ISI
Hey. Could you please comment on this part of ISI talk page? This user is trying to push some POV. He's started a reliable sources dispute to deviate from the topic (as visible from the discussion on that talk page mentioned). [1]. --lTopGunl (talk) 16:35, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
- that article has several and more serious issues (possible copyright violations, wp:or, wp:coatrack) and needs a full overhaul. you can start with going through content that you suspect is copy-pasted and check with the sources. if copyright violations are found, tag the section. the "activities in balochistan"-section looks like a copyright violating-festered hole. i would also say it is a WP:COATRACK-attempt. try to investigate these issues first. read the wp:coatrack policy.-- mustihussain (talk) 16:49, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
- but fix your edit at "operation trident"-page first.-- mustihussain (talk) 17:23, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
- good, much better. continue to work with yourself and your edits. just a few comments. make the following changes: destroyed-> destroying, loss->losses. also just delete the "to missile boats by moving them away from the obvious targets"-sentence. redundant and repetitive. cite both of your sentences.-- mustihussain (talk) 17:46, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
- Fixed the grammar. The source is the same for the whole paragraph, so at the end. --lTopGunl (talk) 17:56, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
- still, it's better to cite more than less. it's a good habit to have. better safe than sorry. also, you need to use indentation-marks more.-- mustihussain (talk) 17:59, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
- Fixed the grammar. The source is the same for the whole paragraph, so at the end. --lTopGunl (talk) 17:56, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
You've been mentioned
You've been mentioned in one of the defending comments on this complaint section against User:Swift&silent. Perhaps it is of your concern, so thought of notifying you. See [2] --lTopGunl (talk) 12:01, 17 October 2011 (UTC)
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I noticed you've been continuously defending against POVs and preventing vandalism and hate speach and bias against Pakistan. :) lTopGunl (talk) 06:54, 12 October 2011 (UTC) | ||
this WikiAward was given to Mustihussain by lTopGunl (talk) on 06:54, 12 October 2011 (UTC) |