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== Your recent WWII edits == |
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We need to check [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=World_War_II&curid=32927&diff=845856445&oldid=845854212 this], because you removed commas between two independent clauses. As far as I understand, in English, when two independent clauses are joined by connectors such as and, or, but, etc., a comma should be at the end of the first clause. For example, " The proposal was rejected" and "Hitler ordered an immediate offensive against France" are two independent clauses, so it seems you introduced a grammar errors that I am carefully trying to fix. |
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I also have some concern about the image choice. You are changing them unilaterally, which is hardly be seen positively by other users. I propose to discuss it on the talk page first, because other users may have different ideas. You also cited my opinion in an edit summary, which is a little bit misleading, because people may think we discussed these concrete images, and I supported you. However, we didn't. I personally would support some photo of Finnish solders, because their bitter resistance deserve attention in this article. --[[User:Paul Siebert|Paul Siebert]] ([[User talk:Paul Siebert|talk]]) 16:35, 14 June 2018 (UTC) |
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You may want to enable the option of other editors being able to send you email. Public discussions are of course the best, but there may be circumstances when people want to send you an 'eyes only' communique. Just a thought. Cheers, --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:32, 6 June 2018 (UTC)
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Your recent WWII edits
We need to check this, because you removed commas between two independent clauses. As far as I understand, in English, when two independent clauses are joined by connectors such as and, or, but, etc., a comma should be at the end of the first clause. For example, " The proposal was rejected" and "Hitler ordered an immediate offensive against France" are two independent clauses, so it seems you introduced a grammar errors that I am carefully trying to fix.
I also have some concern about the image choice. You are changing them unilaterally, which is hardly be seen positively by other users. I propose to discuss it on the talk page first, because other users may have different ideas. You also cited my opinion in an edit summary, which is a little bit misleading, because people may think we discussed these concrete images, and I supported you. However, we didn't. I personally would support some photo of Finnish solders, because their bitter resistance deserve attention in this article. --Paul Siebert (talk) 16:35, 14 June 2018 (UTC)