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:* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Matters that are acceptable: Nominator is exempt from having to perform a QPQ review, per [https://tools.wmflabs.org/betacommand-dev/cgi-bin/dyk.py?user=Gunkarta QPQ check results], all paragraphs/sections in the list areas of the article have inline citations. I removed some content that consisted of copyright violation and close paraphrasing, after which, the article clears checks for copyvio (e.g. [https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Aviation+in+Indonesia&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1]), image is properly licensed. |
:* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Matters that are acceptable: Nominator is exempt from having to perform a QPQ review, per [https://tools.wmflabs.org/betacommand-dev/cgi-bin/dyk.py?user=Gunkarta QPQ check results], all paragraphs/sections in the list areas of the article have inline citations. I removed some content that consisted of copyright violation and close paraphrasing, after which, the article clears checks for copyvio (e.g. [https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=Aviation+in+Indonesia&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1]), image is properly licensed. |
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::There are problems in the hook and alts, as per my comments directly above. In the interest of moving forward, I have provided an alt below to replace the close paraphrasing in ALT1, and |
::There are problems in the hook and alts, as per my comments directly above. In the interest of moving forward, I have provided an alt below to replace the close paraphrasing in ALT1, and two to replace erroneous content in the initial hook. ALT2 could work, but its content is not backed by an inline citation to a reliable source in the article. <span class="smallcaps" style="font-variant:small-caps;">[[User:Northamerica1000|North America]]<sup>[[User talk:Northamerica1000|<font size="-2">1000</font>]]</sup></span> 09:31, 12 December 2015 (UTC) |
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:*'''ALT3''': ... that '''[[aviation in Indonesia]]''' is predicted to become the world's sixth largest air travel market by 2034? |
:*'''ALT3''': ... that '''[[aviation in Indonesia]]''' is predicted to become the world's sixth largest air travel market by 2034? |
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:* '''ALT4''': ... that between 2009 and 2014 the number of '''[[Aviation in Indonesia|Indonesia's air passengers]]''' increased by over 23 million, from 70,912,258 to 94,504,086? |
:* '''ALT4''': ... that between 2009 and 2014 the number of '''[[Aviation in Indonesia|Indonesia's air passengers]]''' increased by over 23 million, from 70,912,258 to 94,504,086? |
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:* '''ALT5''': ... that between 2009 and 2014 the number of '''[[Aviation in Indonesia|Indonesia's air passengers]]''' increased by over 23 million? |
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Aviation in Indonesia
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that between 2009 and 2014 the number of Indonesia's air passengers increased more than threefold, from 27,421,235 to 94,504,086?
- ALT1:
... that by 2034 Indonesia is expected to be the world's sixth largest market for air travel, with 270 million passengers? - ALT2:... that Indonesia is an emerging market for air travel in the region?
- ALT1:
Created/expanded by Gunkarta (talk). Self nominated at 06:09, 7 November 2015 (UTC).
- There are multiple paragraphs without any inline citations. DYK requires at least one citation per paragraph. Best.4meter4 (talk) 06:55, 27 November 2015 (UTC)
- Full review needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 15:55, 8 December 2015 (UTC)
- Struck ALT1 above. Close paraphrasing from this source. North America1000 08:50, 12 December 2015 (UTC)
- Struck hook. Per this source, the actual figures are 70,912,258 (1996–2000) and 94,504,086 (2011–2015). North America1000 08:59, 12 December 2015 (UTC)
- Matters that are acceptable: Nominator is exempt from having to perform a QPQ review, per QPQ check results, all paragraphs/sections in the list areas of the article have inline citations. I removed some content that consisted of copyright violation and close paraphrasing, after which, the article clears checks for copyvio (e.g. [1]), image is properly licensed.
- There are problems in the hook and alts, as per my comments directly above. In the interest of moving forward, I have provided an alt below to replace the close paraphrasing in ALT1, and two to replace erroneous content in the initial hook. ALT2 could work, but its content is not backed by an inline citation to a reliable source in the article. North America1000 09:31, 12 December 2015 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that aviation in Indonesia is predicted to become the world's sixth largest air travel market by 2034?
- ALT4: ... that between 2009 and 2014 the number of Indonesia's air passengers increased by over 23 million, from 70,912,258 to 94,504,086?
- ALT5: ... that between 2009 and 2014 the number of Indonesia's air passengers increased by over 23 million?