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* ... that the Iranian oil tankers '''[[2020 Iran gasoline export to Venezuela|carrying Iranian gasoline to Venezuela]]''' were escorted by the Venezuelan navy? <small>[https://www.al-monitor.com/pulse/originals/2020/05/fourth-iran-fuel-tanker-venezuela-us-pressure.html][https://www.cnbc.com/2020/06/02/treasury-sanctions-entities-supporting-venezuelas-oil-sector.html]</small> |
* ... that the Iranian oil tankers '''[[2020 Iran gasoline export to Venezuela|carrying Iranian gasoline to Venezuela]]''' were escorted by the Venezuelan navy? <small>[https://www.al-monitor.com/pulse/originals/2020/05/fourth-iran-fuel-tanker-venezuela-us-pressure.html][https://www.cnbc.com/2020/06/02/treasury-sanctions-entities-supporting-venezuelas-oil-sector.html]</small> |
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Revision as of 06:16, 27 July 2020
2020 Iran gasoline export to Venezuela
- ... that the Iranian oil tankers carrying Iranian gasoline to Venezuela were escorted by the Venezuelan navy? [1][2]
- Reviewed: Wilson Armistead
Created by Mhhossein (talk). Self-nominated at 21:25, 4 June 2020 (UTC).
- The page is tagged with a move request. Meanwhile, there is no QPQ and the hook has too much repetition in it ("Iranian"..."Iranian"...""Venezuela"..."Venezuelan"). Yoninah (talk) 20:46, 22 June 2020 (UTC)
- Yoninah: Thanks for the review. You're clearly right with regard to the repetition. As for the move, we should wait for the result. But, meanwhile, what happens if the article is moved and filled with more general materials? --Mhhossein talk 13:06, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
- @Mhhossein: you can always suggest a new hook based on additional material. If the page is moved, please don't move this template; I'll take care of the re-formatting. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 13:12, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: Ok I will not touch it. --Mhhossein talk 13:38, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
- The move discussion has closed with no consensus. We can continue. Please provide a QPQ and new hook wording. Yoninah (talk) 22:52, 11 July 2020 (UTC)
- Yoninah: How about the following:
- ALT1: ... that the Iranian oil tankers carrying gasoline from Iran to Venezuela were escorted by the country's navy? [3]
- -- Mhhossein talk 07:15, 12 July 2020 (UTC)
- I looked at the article in order to suggest a better hook and found a lot of editorial issues there. I edited the article for English grammar and also added numerous tags calling for elucidation of the text. There is also the matter of 5 tankers being mentioned in the lead but the arrivals of only 4 described in the article. Please take care of these issues, including a dead link, and then we can work on a better hook. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 11:06, 12 July 2020 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: Ok I will not touch it. --Mhhossein talk 13:38, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
- Yoninah: Thanks for the review. You're clearly right with regard to the repetition. As for the move, we should wait for the result. But, meanwhile, what happens if the article is moved and filled with more general materials? --Mhhossein talk 13:06, 23 June 2020 (UTC)