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Khan mentions America sexual torture in relation to rape and murder by army, police and para-military in J & K, this article also quotes US government's allegations of rape by army. How is that irrelevant? Behaviour of security forces when dealing with "terrorists" and the civilian population of the field of operation of terrorists. [[User:Yogesh Khandke|Yogesh Khandke]] ([[User talk:Yogesh Khandke|talk]]) 19:35, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
:I am not going to revert DS, though if American sources are considered reliable when contradicting Indian government sources regarding an internal issue, America can be referred in the same article on terrorism and the military response. [[User:Yogesh Khandke|Yogesh Khandke]] ([[User talk:Yogesh Khandke|talk]]) 19:46, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
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What should have been a decent article has now become a POV hellhole. Darkness Shines (talk) 21:27, 12 March 2012 (UTC)
- Could this not be merged into Human rights abuses in Jammu and Kashmir? Whenaxis talk · contribs | DR goes to Wikimania! 00:25, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
- See my comments on that article talk. This is a spin off. It should contain a small summary there with main article link to this. --lTopGunl (talk) 00:39, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
- Who cares? This article is fubar now. Darkness Shines (talk) 00:41, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
- There's no that much content to work with on this page, so I think it can easily be moved to Human rights abuses in Jammu and Kashmir, unlike Rape during the Bangladesh Liberation War... which DarknessShines has just brought up some good points. Regards, Whenaxis talk · contribs | DR goes to Wikimania! 00:53, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
- This article was just started. I think it can grow into an article as good. Unlike Bangladesh war, this is a current issue and is likely to develop further continuously in addition to the same reasons for keeping that article. If at a later point it is evident that there isn't enough material for this article to be a stand alone and that it wont make that article too long, we can probably merge it. But at the moment, I think its growing at a high rate. Is that reasonable? --lTopGunl (talk) 00:59, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
- Ok. We'll give it sometime since it was just started and it's concerning recent events. Whenaxis talk · contribs | DR goes to Wikimania! 01:16, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
- Recent events my ass, it's been ongoing for twenty years. [1] This is were I had gotten to in the last couple of days. I have of course removed all that content now. Like i said, this could have been an excellent article, now it is a stick to beat India with. Darkness Shines (talk) 01:20, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
- Good enough. --lTopGunl (talk) 01:25, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
- Ok. We'll give it sometime since it was just started and it's concerning recent events. Whenaxis talk · contribs | DR goes to Wikimania! 01:16, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
- This article was just started. I think it can grow into an article as good. Unlike Bangladesh war, this is a current issue and is likely to develop further continuously in addition to the same reasons for keeping that article. If at a later point it is evident that there isn't enough material for this article to be a stand alone and that it wont make that article too long, we can probably merge it. But at the moment, I think its growing at a high rate. Is that reasonable? --lTopGunl (talk) 00:59, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
- There's no that much content to work with on this page, so I think it can easily be moved to Human rights abuses in Jammu and Kashmir, unlike Rape during the Bangladesh Liberation War... which DarknessShines has just brought up some good points. Regards, Whenaxis talk · contribs | DR goes to Wikimania! 00:53, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
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Lead is supposed to be a summary of the article, currently the lead contains different content which should be probably a section. How about moving this content to a background section (or something similar) and adding only the main parts of it and other sections to the lead? --lTopGunl (talk) 17:39, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
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Khan mentions America sexual torture in relation to rape and murder by army, police and para-military in J & K, this article also quotes US government's allegations of rape by army. How is that irrelevant? Behaviour of security forces when dealing with "terrorists" and the civilian population of the field of operation of terrorists. Yogesh Khandke (talk) 19:35, 13 March 2012 (UTC)
- I am not going to revert DS, though if American sources are considered reliable when contradicting Indian government sources regarding an internal issue, America can be referred in the same article on terrorism and the military response. Yogesh Khandke (talk) 19:46, 13 March 2012 (UTC)