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*"The Scotch Horn Centre provides both an aerobic exercise and a free weights gym, as well as squash courts, and room for other indoor sports, but not a swimming pool. Nailsea does not have a public swimming pool despite a long running campaign by the Nailsea Swimming Pool Interest Group to build one." That ought to be moved and integrated into the Sports section. |
*"The Scotch Horn Centre provides both an aerobic exercise and a free weights gym, as well as squash courts, and room for other indoor sports, but not a swimming pool. Nailsea does not have a public swimming pool despite a long running campaign by the Nailsea Swimming Pool Interest Group to build one." That ought to be moved and integrated into the Sports section. |
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*:I have replaced the sentence into the Sports section. [[User:Jaguar|Jaguar]] ([[User talk:Jaguar|talk]]) 13:59, 22 May 2011 (UTC) |
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*"Scotch Horn Leisure Centre contains a gym, badminton clubs, and a 20-metre (66 ft) swimming pool." That seemed like an usual size for a swimming pool so I checked the web site given in the citation, which makes no mention at all of a swimming pool. Added to which the Culture and community section very explicitly says that "Nailsea does not have a public swimming pool". |
*"Scotch Horn Leisure Centre contains a gym, badminton clubs, and a 20-metre (66 ft) swimming pool." That seemed like an usual size for a swimming pool so I checked the web site given in the citation, which makes no mention at all of a swimming pool. Added to which the Culture and community section very explicitly says that "Nailsea does not have a public swimming pool". |
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*:You're right - Nailsea doesn't have a swimming pool. The reference came from the 'Aquazone' in Bristol, not Nailsea. I have removed the setence and replaced it with the other one from the Culture and community seciton. [[User:Jaguar|Jaguar]] ([[User talk:Jaguar|talk]]) 13:59, 22 May 2011 (UTC) |
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Reviewer: Malleus Fatuorum 12:32, 22 May 2011 (UTC)
- Culture and community
- "The Scotch Horn Centre provides both an aerobic exercise and a free weights gym, as well as squash courts, and room for other indoor sports, but not a swimming pool. Nailsea does not have a public swimming pool despite a long running campaign by the Nailsea Swimming Pool Interest Group to build one." That ought to be moved and integrated into the Sports section.
- Sports
- "Scotch Horn Leisure Centre contains a gym, badminton clubs, and a 20-metre (66 ft) swimming pool." That seemed like an usual size for a swimming pool so I checked the web site given in the citation, which makes no mention at all of a swimming pool. Added to which the Culture and community section very explicitly says that "Nailsea does not have a public swimming pool".