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At this time, it seems to me that content on the video has passed [[WP:UNDUE|the undue weight threshold]]. Suggest cutting it down considerably and creating a new article from the content rather than bloating this article with it. -- <span style="text-shadow: 4px 4px 15px #0099FF, -4px -4px 15px #99FF00;">[[User:Winkelvi|WV]]</span> ● <span style="text-shadow: 4px 4px 15px #FF9900, -4px -4px 15px #FF0099;">[[User_talk:Winkelvi|✉]] [[Special:Contributions/Winkelvi|✓]]</span> 17:23, 20 January 2015 (UTC) |
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:{{ping|Winkelvi}} Are you suggesting [[Lips Are Movin (Music video)]]'s creation? [[User:MaranoFan|<span style="font-family: DokChampa Print;color:brown"> '''MaRAno'''</span>'']] [[User talk:MaranoFan|<sup><span style="font-family: Westminster;color:navyblue"> FAN</span></sup>]] 17:28, 20 January 2015 (UTC) |
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:: I agree; if enough information is founded, its own article could be created. However, placing in mass amount of detail, especially in the opening lead, is uncalled upon. '''[[User:livelikemusic|<small><span style="color:#ab83ab">livelikemusic</span></small>]]''' [[User talk:livelikemusic|<sup><span style="color:CadetBlue">my talk page!</span></sup>]] 17:28, 20 January 2015 (UTC) |
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:::No. The section is a lot smaller than [[Single Ladies (Put a Ring on It)#Music video]] and [[Diamonds (Rihanna song)#Music video]]. It doesn't warrant it's own article yet. [[User:MaranoFan|<span style="font-family: DokChampa Print;color:brown"> '''MaRAno'''</span>'']] [[User talk:MaranoFan|<sup><span style="font-family: Westminster;color:navyblue"> FAN</span></sup>]] 17:34, 20 January 2015 (UTC) |
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::::It matters not what other articles look like if those articles are examples of bloat and undue weight, as well. As it is, I think there needs to be an article on the video (creating an article on a notable subject is a positive, not a negative) after removing much of the bloat and excessive detail along with the trivia in the video section. This article is about the song, not the video. -- <span style="text-shadow: 4px 4px 15px #0099FF, -4px -4px 15px #99FF00;">[[User:Winkelvi|WV]]</span> ● <span style="text-shadow: 4px 4px 15px #FF9900, -4px -4px 15px #FF0099;">[[User_talk:Winkelvi|✉]] [[Special:Contributions/Winkelvi|✓]]</span> 18:19, 20 January 2015 (UTC) |
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:::::Both the examples listed above are FAs and certainly not UNDUE. [[User:MaranoFan|<span style="font-family: DokChampa Print;color:brown"> '''MaRAno'''</span>'']] [[User talk:MaranoFan|<sup><span style="font-family: Westminster;color:navyblue"> FAN</span></sup>]] 18:29, 20 January 2015 (UTC) |
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For reasons that remain unclear to me, [[User:MaranoFan|MaranoFan]] has started an article on the video after protesting such an article. In light of this, the huge, undue weight-laden section on the video in this article is no longer necessary. I have trimmed it down considerably and left the salient points. -- <span style="text-shadow: 4px 4px 15px #0099FF, -4px -4px 15px #99FF00;">[[User:Winkelvi|WV]]</span> ● <span style="text-shadow: 4px 4px 15px #FF9900, -4px -4px 15px #FF0099;">[[User_talk:Winkelvi|✉]] [[Special:Contributions/Winkelvi|✓]]</span> 16:59, 21 January 2015 (UTC) |
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Opening para wording
I have made some wording changes to the lead, they were reverted. While I did restore those wording changes, I'm more than willing to discuss why the changes would be seen as detrimental to the article. -- WV ● ✉ ✓ 22:29, 1 May 2015 (UTC)
- Your "changes" introduced deliberate factual errors to the article, which are allowed to be reverted more than 3 times. You wrote that "has performed" falls in the past tense but not just "performed", what? You said that the song reached three positions on the Hot 100, each respectively, what? You added strange wording which was ambiguous and the wording in earlier revisions was more preferable. Yet I am willing to discuss. All About That Bass (A word?? / Stalking not allowed...) 02:43, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
- I reworded, I didn't change the statistics and cited facts. There was nothing strange about the wording. At all. But hey, if you want juvenile prose rather than something that looks like a grownup wrote it, knock yourself out. -- WV ● ✉ ✓ 07:10, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
- Good. :) Leave the "juvenile" prose as it is. All About That Bass (A word?? / Stalking not allowed...) 11:24, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
- I reworded, I didn't change the statistics and cited facts. There was nothing strange about the wording. At all. But hey, if you want juvenile prose rather than something that looks like a grownup wrote it, knock yourself out. -- WV ● ✉ ✓ 07:10, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
Have decided that for the sake of the article, the encyclopedia, as well as the reader, the wording improvements should be restored. The wording improvements do not change the stats regarding the song/album rankings. If there are issues with the rankings as presented currently, then let's work on that. The wording, however, does not change what was already present prior to the prose improvements. -- WV ● ✉ ✓ 19:15, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
- Although, even despite your utter ignorance, what is good about your prose? It is messed up, doesn't flow well. And perhaps the biggest thing is what is so wrong with the prose I wrote that you keep adding yours? All About That Bass (A word?? / Stalking not allowed...) 20:45, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
Point by point specifics would be helpful, rather than generalizations. Thanks. -- WV ● ✉ ✓ 21:25, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
- OK! Here's what's going to happen, I am not going to let your theory succeed. I am leaving your problematic edits in the article, when I send it to GA. That way, the reviewer will point out for you, what is wrong, and
mythe article won't be gotten unstable. HA! All About That Bass (A word?? / Stalking not allowed...) 05:40, 3 May 2015 (UTC)
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No apostrophe in article title?
It looks like the name of this song has an apostrophe at the end, but the article title does not match that format. Should it be moved? – Jonesey95 (talk) 17:54, 30 July 2020 (UTC)