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"It made it Pop Smoke's" → "It became Pop Smoke's"
"The song then rose" → "The former then rose"
"number 22 on the chart." → "number 22 on the Hot 100."
Not done --K. Peake 06:08, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Remove usage of US before Rhythmic since you don't need it twice in one sentence
"after selling 1,000,000 units, making it Pop Smoke's first song to go platinum" → "for pushing 1,000,000 certified units, making it Pop Smoke's first song to achieve the certification"
"of over 2,000,000 units." → "of 2,000,000 units in the US."
"The song was certified silver" → "The song was later certified silver"
A lot of the following sentences are not backed up by [52] and [54]
"and cuts to black." → "before cutting to black."
Remove wikilink on Meet the Woo and italicise the title
Remove the YouTube views sentence, as that is unsourced
"A secondary video shot by GoddyGoddy (director of "Welcome to the Party")" → "A secondary video, shot by GoddyGoddy (director of "Welcome to the Party"),"
Cite the URL that leads directly to Pop Smoke's Global 200 chart history for ref 91
Cite hitparade.ch as publisher instead for ref 105
Final comments and verdict
On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but honestly the main problem was original research for this one. --K. Peake 14:38, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Kyle Peake sorry about the delay. It was very hard trying to edit with my parents around... And sorry for the original research. A newbie editor added all those unreliable sources and redundant info. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 04:31, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The Ultimate Boss It is fine about the delay and the OR, you missed a few things sadly which I have pointed out above. --K. Peake 06:08, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The Ultimate Boss You missed the opening sentence fix and moving the Variety ref like I said. --K. Peake 07:46, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
✓Pass since it is only two changes so I implemented them which is acceptable in the context of the user indicating at a lack of interest in editing this site. --K. Peake 07:57, 9 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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He cool 41.114.147.48 (talk) 14:56, 4 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]