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This article is a real mess. The first few sentences are poorly written run-ons. I've tried to help, but there are ownership issues at work unfortunately. [[User:ChildofMidnight|ChildofMidnight]] ([[User talk:ChildofMidnight|talk]]) 17:03, 24 June 2009 (UTC) |
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Editing and clean-up
This article is a real mess. The first few sentences are poorly written run-ons. I've tried to help, but there are ownership issues at work unfortunately. ChildofMidnight (talk) 17:03, 24 June 2009 (UTC)