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I am afraid this 'devastating' opposition of Sarmila Bose (which comes, unsurprisingly and understandably, from chiefly Indian and Bangladeshi sources) is also met with praise from neutral Western academics for Bose's work. |
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‘The “Events of 1971”, as the International Commission of Jurists called its report on the subject, have been an enduring source of agonized contestation in South Asia for forty years. Subject to endless mythmaking and exaggerations in Pakistan, Bangladesh and their diasporas, all too rarely have these events been considered with the non-partisan care they deserve. Sarmila Bose’s stunning Dead Reckoning is the first book-length study that meticulously reconstructs the violence based on actual evidence. By showing how the terror of rape and massacre cut across many more cleavages of East Pakistani society than Pakistani and Bengali nationalists like to admit, her book is at once a correction of the record and a tribute to the virtues of humanistic scholarship. Written with courage and searing honesty, it will set anew the terms of debate about this dark chapter in the region’s history.’ — A. Dirk Moses, Professor at the European University Institute, Florence and Associate Professor, University of Sydney |
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‘Combining rigorous scholarship and a passionate interest in setting the record straight, Dead Reckoning is the finest study yet of the social, cultural and political meaning of the 1971 East Pakistan/Bangladesh war, one of the major events of the twentieth century. Dr. Bose writes in the service of the truth, we are in her debt.’ — Stephen Cohen, author of The Idea of Pakistan |
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‘I have felt the need for a dispassionate account of the Bangladesh war ever since witnessing that triumph of faith over fact, the Mujibnagar independence ceremony. No one can take on that challenge better than Sarmila Bose, whose courage, disregard for orthodoxy and meticulous research make her the enfant terrible of Indian historians.’ — Sunanda K. Datta-Ray, columnist and author of Waiting for America: India and the United States in the New Millennium |
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‘History emerges only slowly from the passion-filled context of contemporary events. Sarmila Bose’s book sets Bangladesh’s struggle for liberation at the start of this long passage.’ — David Washbrook, Trinity College, Cambridge |
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‘Sarmila Bose’s powerful and poignant retelling of the birth of Bangladesh exposes the wounds of civil war and international conflict in a way that has not been done before. This is history as told by participants at the grass roots and it dispels many myths that have been fed by faulty memories of the so-called elites in Pakistan and Bangladesh. Her book should help the people of both countries accept the facts of that tragic and bloody separation of 1971 and to take responsibility for the war that stained the verdant Bengali countryside red.’ — Shuja Nawaz, Director, South Asia Center, The Atlantic Council in Washington DC and author of Crossed Swords: Pakistan, Its Army, and the Wars Within |
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‘Bose has written a book that should provoke both fresh research and fresh thinking about a fateful turning point in the history of the subcontinent.’ — Martin Woollacott, Guardian |
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‘A significant intervention into the historiography of the Bangladesh War of 1971.’ — Amber Abbas, H-Memory |
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‘Dead Reckoning is a useful resource for students of the region … the reasoning is open and clear [and the] descriptive analysis makes for grim and startling reading.’ — Politics, Religion & Ideology |
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And I would doubt the credibility of Nayanika Mokherjee's words (to whom Sarmila Bose responded in a Guardian article here: |
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#REDIRECT [[http://www.theguardian.com/world/2011/jun/30/the-bangladesh-war-1971-book?INTCMP=SRCH]] especially when Sarmila Bose, who is after all a reputable academic, uncovers that Mokherjee has falsely quoted Professor Willan Va Sendel against her, when it turns out that the Professor had not even reviewed Bose's book. |
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Also there is no proof that 'most' scholars are against Bose's views. Thats an unsubstantiated clam. Her criticism comes mainly from Bangladesh and India.[[User:TalhaZubairButt|TalhaZubairButt]] ([[User talk:TalhaZubairButt|talk]]) 22:53, 4 April 2016 (UTC) |
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Religious reaction
- The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section. A summary of the conclusions reached follows.
- The section has been deleted
@TalhaZubairButt:, Regarding these edits, I am not sure why this section is needed. There is nothing religious about the Bangladesh Liberation War. So, why are you highlighting a "religious" reaction? Also, why is 90% of this section devoted to the views of one religious cleric?
The source you have used, Naim (1999), is quite excellent and covers the reactions in the Muslim Press in both India and Pakistan. An accurate and comprehensive summary of all the content in the Naim article, as well as other related sources that cover the Muslim reactions in the subcontinent such as this, would be welcome. - Kautilya3 (talk) 22:38, 3 March 2016 (UTC)
- @TalhaZubairButt:, @Kautilya3:Whereas I agree that there's no need for a whole section on this topic, but we all know that it was religion alone that kept the two wings (East and West Pakistan) together. So, I dont think there's any harm in adding some info on this, albeit with brevity. —TripWire ʞlɐʇ 18:03, 4 March 2016 (UTC)
- No, we don't know what kept the two wings together. The views documented here were those of an Indian Muslim cleric, who doesn't have anything to do with the conflict as far as I can see. We are not going to have a Mullah Raj on Wikipedia. On the other hand, please feel free to document the Muslim reactions all over the subcontinent, which is what the Naim (1999) article is about. - Kautilya3 (talk) 19:20, 4 March 2016 (UTC)
- I'd suggest that you keep your Mullah Raj theory with you and act maturely. You have enough edits under you belt to understand this, I am sure. Thanks—TripWire ʞlɐʇ 20:15, 4 March 2016 (UTC)
- You know, it's probably not a good idea to jump right back into a topic area you were banned from just as that ban has expired and make controversial edits/remarks.Volunteer Marek (talk) 21:11, 4 March 2016 (UTC)
- I'd suggest that you keep your Mullah Raj theory with you and act maturely. You have enough edits under you belt to understand this, I am sure. Thanks—TripWire ʞlɐʇ 20:15, 4 March 2016 (UTC)
- No, we don't know what kept the two wings together. The views documented here were those of an Indian Muslim cleric, who doesn't have anything to do with the conflict as far as I can see. We are not going to have a Mullah Raj on Wikipedia. On the other hand, please feel free to document the Muslim reactions all over the subcontinent, which is what the Naim (1999) article is about. - Kautilya3 (talk) 19:20, 4 March 2016 (UTC)
POV again
[1] - Come on, this edit pretends that Operation Searchlight was launched because of "persecution of Bihari minority" rather than because Bangladesh wished to secede. This is POV nonsense obtained from a peculiar interpretation of sources.
And User:TripWire, like I said elsewhere, you just got off a topic ban on this subject like two days ago, so you should really avoid starting edit wars or making highly POV edits. We can discuss it if you want though unless the text is seriously modified I don't see it making into the article.Volunteer Marek (talk) 02:22, 5 March 2016 (UTC)
- First, I did not 'just got off a topic ban on this subject like two days ago.' As you seem quite fond of keeping a track on others, you must be knowing that that ban ended 3 months back and since then I am active on many other projects. So please stop it. Second, the edits were made by TalhaZubairButt, not me. And I reverted you because it was sourced info that you removed. If you had noted or had cared to note, I did not revert this edit of yours as I agree that it was WP:OR. However, the info which you claim to be 'peculiar interpretation of sources' is actually not and the source says it clearly. That's the only argument here.—TripWire ʞlɐʇ 02:32, 5 March 2016 (UTC)
- The issue is that the phrasing tries to make it seem like Operation Searchlight was launched because of violence against Biharis, rather than in order to suppress the Bangladeshi independence movement and aspirations. The source most certainly does not say that.
- Also, TalhaZubairButt, I find your edit summary here peculiar [2]. You say you brought this up on talk but I don't see your name here anywhere. Are you sure you're not confusing yourself with someone else? Volunteer Marek (talk) 02:46, 6 March 2016 (UTC)
- I couldnt rumage through the entire info added by TZB, but as regards his following addition:
I did find that the source 'most certainly' say the following:"The war began after the Pakistani military junta based in West Pakistan launched Operation Searchlight against the people of East Pakistan, ....on the basis of violence against the Bihari ethnic minority by Bengali mobs.[1]"
So I feel that the info by TZB is not entirely incorrect, may be a rewording would do?"...however, the Biharis, who had been the Urdu-speaking community of East Pakistan, faced mass Bengali outrage. After Yahya Khan postponed the promised National Assembly on 1 March 1971, the Biharis began to be targeted as symbols of Pakistani domination. Early in March 1970, 300 Biharris were killled by mob attacks in Chittagong, following which the Pakistani government used the 'Bihari massacre' to justify deploying its military on 25 March - eventually, ofcourse, leading to the 1971 conflict[2]."
- Also, as it seems nothing can be added/removed (including sourced content as seen from the above discussion) from the article without discussion on this talk page, I'd suggest @Vinegarymass911: if you too can discuss your additions ([3], [4]) here before hand. Thanks—TripWire ʞlɐʇ 06:26, 6 March 2016 (UTC)
- The problem is with the phrase "on the basis of". Yes, there was violence against Biharis prior to OpSL. Yes, OpSL was launched after this happened and Pakistani military used it as a pretext. But it's POV and original research to say that OpSL happened *because of* it. Post hoc ergo propter hoc. And original research.Volunteer Marek (talk) 18:06, 6 March 2016 (UTC)
- @TripWire:Consensus is a normal and usually implicit and invisible process across Wikipedia. Any edit that is not disputed or reverted by another editor can be assumed to have consensus. Should that edit later be revised by another editor without dispute, it can be assumed that a new consensus has been reached. In this way, the encyclopedia is gradually added to and improved over time. An edit which is not clearly an improvement may often be improved by rewording. If rewording does not salvage the edit, then it should be reverted. Are you against my additions, if yes why? Cheers.Vinegarymass911 (talk) 09:13, 6 March 2016 (UTC)
- Not exactly against your edits in particular, sir. But what I wanted to point out by asking you here is already happening: A stray Indian IP is already pinging Indian editors ([5], [6]} against the already reverted edits of @TalhaZubairButt:. That's what I and other builders of WP should be against.—TripWire ʞlɐʇ 10:00, 6 March 2016 (UTC)
- Also, as it seems nothing can be added/removed (including sourced content as seen from the above discussion) from the article without discussion on this talk page, I'd suggest @Vinegarymass911: if you too can discuss your additions ([3], [4]) here before hand. Thanks—TripWire ʞlɐʇ 06:26, 6 March 2016 (UTC)
Recent IP disruption
- The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section.
119.30.32.202 and 119.30.35.9 belong to the same IP range of a telecom carrier in Bangladesh. They are repeatedly removing referenced text related to Sarmila Bose and Rudolph Rummel. Kautilya3 does a great job by welcoming them. That's your job, right? Welcoming only selective IPs based on your prejudiced POV. The recent edit summaries by the IPs include: In 1962, there were 500,000 Biharis in East Pakistan, according to Wikipedia itself. If 500,000 Biharis were killed in the war, then how come more than are 270,000 Biharis still living in Bangladesh? (figures taken from wikipedia itself, If this is true, why isn't a single name of any those Bengali officers given here? Mention them in the article. and Why is only Bose's reference is given in all matters? Add some other researcher's views. @TalhaZubairButt, I have decided not to pursue an edit-war with these IPs operated by a single user who loves logging out. We will try to settle the matter here. Besides, I have requested temporary semi-protection of the article. Faizan (talk) 11:41, 30 March 2016 (UTC)
- Regarding the first edit, what is your source for the 1962 Population of Biharis to be equal to 500,000? Why did you remove the entire text "Rudolph Rummel estimated that 150,000 non-Bengalis were massacred, with a low estimate of 50,000 and a high estimate of 500,000."? Regarding the second edit summary, it is a far cry from logic. If there are no names of the Bengali officers given, does that falsify the claim automatically? Regarding your third edit, where you removed the entire text regarding Persecution of Biharis just because it was attributed to Bose is again illogical. We have a complete article here, Persecution of Biharis in Bangladesh that you need to visit. Please elucidate your edits here. Faizan (talk) 11:50, 30 March 2016 (UTC)
- It;s just a bait to edit-war—TripWire ︢ ︢ ︡ ︢ ︡ ︢ ︡ ︢ ︡ ︡ ︢ ︡ ʞlɐʇ 21:27, 30 March 2016 (UTC)
- Regarding the first edit, what is your source for the 1962 Population of Biharis to be equal to 500,000? Why did you remove the entire text "Rudolph Rummel estimated that 150,000 non-Bengalis were massacred, with a low estimate of 50,000 and a high estimate of 500,000."? Regarding the second edit summary, it is a far cry from logic. If there are no names of the Bengali officers given, does that falsify the claim automatically? Regarding your third edit, where you removed the entire text regarding Persecution of Biharis just because it was attributed to Bose is again illogical. We have a complete article here, Persecution of Biharis in Bangladesh that you need to visit. Please elucidate your edits here. Faizan (talk) 11:50, 30 March 2016 (UTC)
Persistent POV pushing
@TalhaZubairButt: Now that your Indian protagonist is out on leave, I am getting to see your edits and I am sorry to say I am highly disappointed. This edit of yours oozes bias in my view.
- This article is on Bangladesh liberation. So, what exactly is Indira Gandhi as Durga doing here?
- And, how exactly did you find this interpretation of Indira Gandhi being compared to Durga? If I do Google Books search for "Indira Gandhi Durga" [7], this source is nowhere to be found. Did you look at any of the other sources?
- I have earlier objected to your addition of a Religious reaction section, but commended the source Naim (1999) and recommended that you provide a comprehensive summary. This is a 17 page article. How exactly did you decide on this particular quote (a WP:PRIMARY source) to include?
- Why not this one for example:
The people of Pakistan proved themselves unworthy of the boon they had received. No matter what kind of government is formed in East Bengal it will remain for all purposes a Muslim majority country.
- Do you see the problem with such cherry-picking?
- Why didn't you use this article for documenting the reactions in West Pakistan?
As editors, it is our responsibility to maintain neutrality according to WP:NPOV, which means we should provide a fair and accurate summary of all scholarly viewpoints found in reliable sources. Cherry-picking one quote from a 17 page article is contrary to that requirement.
There has been intense edit-warring going on on this page and the related pages 1971 Bangladesh genocide and Indo-Pakistani War of 1971. This kind of biased editing is the most likely cause of such edit-wars. I am requesting RegentsPark and Bishonen to reinforce what I have said here, so that we can see better editing in future. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 01:31, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
- @Kautilya3: MBlaze is not on leave as far as I know.
- The source about Indira compared to Durga is published from Routledge and written by Pritam Singh. Here is the souce:
- REDIRECT [[8]]
- This source relates to Indian Muslim sentiment that India celebrated its victory in a communal fashion.
- As far as your quote issue from Naim article you asked me why I picked this particular quote from Sidq and not others. The reason is because that was the only quote which claimed to talk about the "majority" opinion and "general" opinion of Indian Muslims. All other quotes, including those quotes which criticise the Bengalis, do not claim to talk about majority opinions. Note that Sidq was an Indian Muslim newspaper. — Preceding unsigned comment added by TalhaZubairButt (talk • contribs) 03:04, 31 March 2016 (UTC) TalhaZubairButt (talk) 03:33, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
- @Kautilya3: On your summary of the Naim article you did not refer to the conclusion of the article (which was that Indian Muslim thinking was still governed by the notion that all Muslims are one nation). You also failed to differentiate between the different sections of Indian Muslim opinion. Instead you mixed up the distinct opinions into one single conclusion.
- You also excluded the Indian Muslim opinion that India celebrated its victory in a communal fashion.
- Secondly, there was a strong case for the inclusion of the Sidq quote. The reason is that it gave the 'general' opinion of Muslims. Leaving aside the different opinions expressed by the Indian Muslim press, that quote gave info abt the general feelings of Muslims in India.
- Thirdly the POV charge is baseless. It would have substance if I was removing material of the other perspective (which is what MBlaze does, not me).
- I go by the principle that two negatives make a positive. In other words adding POV of one side to the 'attributed' POV of the other side would in effect create a neutral article.
- And if you do have such a strong concern about POV and edit warring, I recommend you take a look at the Indian Army page.
- On that page, under the annexation of Hyderabad section, what I did was to add an unsourced info about razkars conmitting atrocities on Hindus before Operation Polo and in contrast I also added sourced info about Indian army atrocities on Muslims in the aftermath of Operation Polo.
- Curiously, some Indian editors are constantly removing my sourced addition about atrocities committed by Indian troops on Muslims but at the same time are leaving my UNSOURCED addition about razakar atrocities on Hindus untouched!!
- Isn't that POV?TalhaZubairButt (talk) 04:35, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
The general and the specific. The general point I am making is that your editing of 1971 Bangladesh-related pages is POV editing, which is the opposite of NPOV editing. You need to reflect on that. Despite starting to edit this page barely a month ago, you are now the 3rd largest content creator of this page. Your position for other Bangladesh-related pages is similar. A lot of the edit-warring that is occurring on these pages is due to your editing. (In comparison, I have apparently contributed 30% of the content for Kashmir conflict, but very little of it has ever been contested or reverted. Let me leave that as a challenge for you to aspire to.)
Coming to the specific about this particular edit, what you have said above, Indian Muslim sentiment that India celebrated its victory in a communal fashion, is exactly your POV. But having framed it that way, the following questions arise:
- Why does that POV belong in this article, which is supposed to be about Bangladesh liberation?
- Did India indeed celebrate the victory in a communal fashion?
- Is the source, Naim (1999), indeed saying that this was the Muslim sentiment?
The answer to all these questions is no.
- The coverage of Muslim reaction in this article should be about their reaction to Bangladesh liberation.
- I think it unlikely that "India" celebrated it in a communal fashion. But if it is indeed true, you need to investigate it and find sources for it.
- The scholar is not saying that this was the Muslim sentiment. He was giving it as example of the "anger, despair and confusion." So you are drawing a conclusion that the scholar did not draw. This is WP:SYNTHESIS.
In the end, you are quoting a newspaper opinion-piece, not a scholarly assessment. You have attributed it correctly, but it is WP:UNDUE. You have left out vast quantities of what the scholar himself said, and documenting your own POV. That is not what an encyclopedia is supposed to do.
The additions that you have now made to the section [9] continue to suffer from some of these problems, but they also make the section overweight. I will review your content and scale it back.
Coming back to the general, I strongly disagree with your principle that two negatives make a positive. The "negative" should be fought on its ground, just like I am doing now, not by adding more "negative" of the opposite kind. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 13:15, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
- I looked through the edits - at least the ones in the revert that I just rereverted and think it is better if we discuss each addition on a point by point basis. Some seem to make sense (the Agartala conspiracy thing for example) but others seem to be way overstating individual points of view (the space given to Sarmila Bose for example). I suggest that each point be worked through separately, that consensus on whether it should be added and on how it should be added (the text) decided, and then it be added. I'm no expert on the Bangladesh liberation war but a lot of the additions seem like they are using cherry picked sources to push a pov and that's not a good thing. --regentspark (comment) 18:01, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
Sarmila Bose content
@RegentsPark If we exclude Sarmila Bose, much of what she says is already known to be fact. Such as the fact that there was significant polarisation during the war. And its common knowledge that a minority of Bengalis, especially from the Islamic parties, supported a United Pakistan. After all Ghulam Azam and his likes of the Razakars did not come out of nowhere.
The second fact that Sarmila Bose said about the voter turnout in East Pakistan being lower than Punjab and Sind (both smaller provinces) is further corroborated from the PILDAT data (which was provided as a source in the same sentence) and this was also mentioned in the Express Tribune newspaper.
The third fact that Sarmila Bose said about Bengali attacks on non-Bengalis before March 25 was corroborated by Bina D'Costa's source. And the reference was provided in the same sentence. And also keep in mind I attributed all her statements to herself. There is NO extra space being given to her. What is happening is that both sides of the story are being presented side by side. If you exclude her statements you will end up with a grossly one sided account of affairs. And a POV article.
Fourtly, the problem is that the other perspective on the Political differences section and economic issues section is sidelined completely. What we see on Wikipedia is a one sided account of facts. That in itself is POV. What I meant by adding ('juxtaposing") POV was that both perspectives should be mentioned side by side to ensure fairness. And so I have added a Bangladeshi source (in such matters I make a point to exclude as many Pakistani sources as possible) which lays the blame on Mujib and India for the political crisis. I will be re-adding this. TalhaZubairButt (talk) 21:30, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
Indian POV pushing
@Ghatus: I would be more concerned with all the Indian POV pushing that has been going on for years. Unquestioned. For example selected sources are used for claims in the article's introduction (such as the claim that 30 million were internally displaced from the cities to the villages)
On the flip side academic Christian Gerlach said that Jahan’s claim that ‘approximately thirty million people from the cities took refuge in the villages’, was exaggerated and he point out that ‘[t]he total urban population of East Pakistan stood at five to six million’ (Gerlach, Extremely Violent Societies, p. 384).
And then of course there is the repeated assertion of the 3 million killed figure, which even the former Bangladeshi PM Khaleda Zia dubs a 'disputed' figure. The proper thing to do would be to say that most independent researchers believe between 300,000 to 500,000 were killed and the 3 million figure was the Bangladeshi government figure. But no, persistent POV pushing. And I would request both you and @Kautilya3 to take a look at the selective omission of my additions on the Indian Army page. My sourced additions of Indian troops committing atrocities on Muslims are removed but my UNSOURCED addition about Razakars commitiing atrocities on Hindus are left untouched! Please tell me why. TalhaZubairButt (talk) 21:30, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
- I don't deny that there is Indian POV pushing. In fact, a large part of what I do on Wikipedia is to fight Indian POV pushing. But, to repeat what I have said, the solution is to fight it on its own ground, not push the opposite POV. I am happy for you to change the figures of killed as you indicate, with appropriate sources of course. I will take a look at the Indian Army page, but my interest in military affairs is very limited. -- Kautilya3 (talk)
Sidq-i-Jadid and Pritam Singh
@Kautilya3: Have you read through Pritam Singh's work? I l provided Pritam Singh's work.[1] And the Naim article says:[2]
The following quotation from Haqeeqat (Lucknow: n.d.) conveys well the feelings at that time:
Then it goes on to provide the quote from the newspaper article:
"The chief reason for the resentment of the Muslims is that the event of the independence of Bangladesh and her severance of all ties with Pakistan was generally celebrated in India as if the 'victory' had been gained against the Muslims themselves. Insulting and provocative slogans were raised against them in public meetings in this country. A second reason is that the Muslims in general do believe that the war was primarily fought for the purpose of destroying the integral unity of Pakistan. Our Ministry of Information hands out all sorts of propaganda but does nothing to dispel the dejection and resentment of Indian Muslims" (Quoted in Sidq-i-Jadid; 21 January 1972).
Now I think you should figure out why Indian Muslims felt that India was celebrating its victory as a victory against Muslims (further proven from Pritam Singh's reference)? Even the Naim article says that the Siqd quote here conveyed well the Muslim feeling at that time. Obviously India was doing something that its Muslim population generally felt this way.TalhaZubairButt (talk) 21:30, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
- You are welcome to quote what Naim says, but not what the newspaper says. Newspapers are not reliable sources. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 22:55, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
References
- ^ Singh, Pritam (2008). Federalism, Nationalism and Development: India and the Punjab Economy. Routledge. p. 43. ISBN 9781134049462.
- ^ Naim, C. M. (1999), "Muslim Press in India and the Bangladesh Crisis", Ambiguities of Heritage: Fictions and Polemics, Karachi: City Press
@Kautilya3: So would you accept it if I write in the Naim summary on this page that Indian Muslims complained that Iindia was celebrating its victory as a victory against Muslims. I won't quote the newspaper this time , instead I will attribute it to Naim. After all Naim agrees that the Haqeeqat quote is well representative of Indian Muslim opinion in 1971.TalhaZubairButt (talk) 23:23, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
- Naim did not say that. Please read what he says carefully, without your pre-conceived notions clouding your perceptions. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 23:34, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
- Pritam Singh is an Economics lecturer at a second-rate business school. I don't know about the contributors. But this is certainly not WP:HISTRS. You would do better to read quality sources like Christophe Jaffrelot here, the world's top authority on Hindu nationalism. I have told you before to consult Google Books. But you ignore me. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 00:06, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
@Kautilya3: Then you explain what he said. According to me he is saying that the general Indian Muslim feeling at that time is best conveyed by the Haqeeqat quote. And that feeling was that India was celebrating its victory as a victory against Muslims.TalhaZubairButt (talk) 00:01, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
- He is saying that the Indian Muslims were confused, having given their allegiance to Pakistan as the Muslim state in the subcontinent, they couldn't easily come to terms with a new Muslim nation appearing. But eventually they came to accept it, as I said in my summary. But Naim's own words are much more brutal:
- Their immediate reaction to the various developments in the crisis were, as we saw above, more imbued with fundamentalism in some respects than the responses of the Pakistanis. One got the feeling that the thinking of a significant and large group of Indian Muslims was still very much governed by two potentially most dangerous notions, namely: (1) there is one Muslim nation, one Muslim language, and one Muslim culture; and (2) those who are not with them in these beliefs are against them, and, therefore, against Islam itself.
- I don't see him even remotely endorsing the feelings that he has reported from the Muslim newspapers. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 00:13, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
@Kautilya: Here is some info abt Pritam Singh.
'Pritam Singh is Senior Lecturer in Economics, Oxford Brookes University Business School, UK. His research focuses on radical political economy and development, secularism and religious revivalism; and nationalism, development and human rights. He is on the editorial board of several journals including North East India Studies, Journal of Punjab Studies and International Journal of Green Economics.'
He seems like a completely legitimate source. How about we start applying your in-depth standards to every single author who has been used to build up the article so far?TalhaZubairButt (talk) 00:19, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
- @TalhaZubairButt: I did not deny that he is a "legitmate source," but WP:CONTEXTMATTERS. The view of his that you have quoted is his personal interpretation, and does not represent scholarly consensus. I have mentioned Jaffrelot's interpretation above, and here is Bipan Chandra's. No other scholar has said that likening Indira Gandhi to Durga has anything to do with Muslims or Pakistan. You need to stop pushing fringe views as if they are mainstream. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 16:30, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
Points to be noted
I am presently busy in my assignments. But, within a week or so I shall be free. However, in the mean time other editors can look into theses issues
1) There has been a clear attempt to communalize the war, especially in the "Indian reaction" using fringe unverifiable sources. 2) Indian forces' confidence booster was 65 war after 62, not 71 war.see this ( and Shastri was already a hero in India for 1965)(BTW, why is in the first place this section in B'desh liberation war?) 3)This war happened about more than 45 years ago. So, one has to provide WP:RS , not primary news items or video.
@Ghatus: It is an Indian defence journal that says 1971 victory partially compensated for the 1962 defeat. Its not me saying this. Also there is nothing unverifiable and fringe with either the Naim article (which is about the Indian Muslim press in 1971) or the Pritam Singh book which was published from Routledge. Both sources testify to how India itself decided to communalise the war.TalhaZubairButt (talk) 22:16, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
Mass POV Cuts
I have found that even previously agreed upon information has now been cut. Such as the line (sourced from Bina D'Costa's book published by Routledge) in the introduction of the article that the Pakistani state justified Operation Searchlight on the basis of the anti-Bihari violence before March 25.
Worse still, on the 1971 Bangladesh Genocide page there has been a complete removal of the (sourced) 'Violence against Biharis' section. Editors should note that the ICJ had noted that both sides accused the other of genocide. So violence against Biharis also comes under the Genocide page.
Also Sarmila Bose stated that
i)before the 25th of March Bengali attacks on non Bengalis took place. This was corraborated ith the Bina D'Costa source.
ii)Sarmila Bose also states that attacks on the Pakistani military by Bengalis before March 25 was common. She also states that the Pakistani miitary showed great restraint until March 25. Anyone who has read Bose's academic article will know that she got this information from Anthony Mascarenhas (who is often quoted to prove the Pakistani Army's brutality). I should have referenced this piece of info to Mascarenhas but the piece of information was extracted from Bose's work. This info is not her stance alone.
There has been a shocking level of removal going on. Editors should be reminded that WP:IDONTLIKEIT is not a valid reason for removing sourced info TalhaZubairButt (talk) 22:28, 31 March 2016 (UTC)
- Hi TalhaZubairButt. The reason I did the big revert because it was impossible to separate out what should or should not be included. I suggest discussing each item - starting with the uncontroversial or less controversial ones. --regentspark (comment) 14:25, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
@RegentsPark: Okay, then lets start with reincorporating the information which had been previously agreed upon ie Agartala Conspiracy Case and the line in the article's introduction about Pak military justifying Op Searchlight due to pre-25 March violence against Biharis (Bina D'Costa). After that we can discuss other content and I can get on to Sarmila Bose controversy and also alternative sources.TalhaZubairButt (talk) 07:09, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
Line in the sand
- The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section. A summary of the conclusions reached follows.
- The article has been full protected
Dear all, RegentsPark drew a "line in the sand" [10], and recommended that all the edits to that version should be discussed and consensus obtained before reinstating them. Any editor that violates the direction would risk ARBIPA sanctions. We have had enough edit-warring on these pages. During the weekend, I will go through these edits and figure out how to structure the discussion. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 10:40, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
- I have an objection to this line. I feel the line was not drawn based on a policy but rather an editor was favored by this line. Ghatus removed whole chunk of information from the page and his edit was favored. Also, i would like to suggest if someone other than me starts a discussion then please format it in a way so that it's easy to take it to formal mediation or RFC or ARBCOM if we cannot decide here. I would also like to note that I have no prior experience with any of these processes so I am not sure If I am the right person to dictate a format. Sheriff | ☎ 911 | 19:57, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
- There is no policy on where to freeze the article when edit-warring is taking place. It can be anywhere. In this case, it looks like RP looked at the edits that Ghatus reverted and found them to be contentious. It doesn't matter really. What matters is that the people talk, if necessary by force. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 20:06, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
Protected
The page is protected. Please hammer out what you want included and I'll add it asap. --regentspark (comment) 18:16, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
Sarmila Bose
Whosoever wants to add anything on Sarmila Bose's book in the article, please post here first. Only then a consensus can be built with all points and counter PoVs.Ghatus (talk) 17:21, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
Aye aye Sir! Didnt know you not only did WP:OWN this article, but the encyclopedia too. Surely, will oblige. But just to ask, did you commandeered Vinegarymass911 too to do the same for his edit-spree elsewhere or is it a free-pass for an editor when he pushes your POV?—TripWire ︢ ︢ ︡ ︢ ︡ ︢ ︡ ︢ ︡ ︡ ︢ ︡ ʞlɐʇ 21:21, 1 April 2016 (UTC)- Your accusations are not worth responding. BTW, there are three points for any editor to look into.
- 1) What is the nationality of Miss. Bose- Indian or American or British. B'coz a lot of emphasis is being made in this way: "Look, even an Indian is saying so!"
- 2)What Bose has stated and what other scholars have stated on her work. As far as I know, her book hardly found any favor among the majority of scholars and historians.
- 3) What should be the weight age of her views in the article. We must not forget that her book is just one of thousands books written on 71 war historiography, even bordering a wp:fringe. Every history student knows that in historiography of Holocaust, opinions of historians like Harry Elmer Barnes and David Hoggan are treated with contempt for their role in Holocaust denial which is a crime. Same is the case here.
So, everyone's views are invited in this regard.Ghatus (talk) 04:16, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
Only a dedicated POV-pushing BATTLEGROUND warrior could insert that crap into the article. Per WP:BURDEN You are supposed to work on the improvement, and if they fall short of encyclopaedic standards, then dear, they will had to be removed! MBlaze Lightning -talk! 04:34, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
- A critique that I added in the Bangladesh genocide page a couple of days ago:
- "Her critics include scholars of gender violence during conflict (Urvashi Butalia), authors of academic books on 1971 and rape (Nayanika Mookherjee, Yasmin Saikia), authors of two forthcoming books on 1971 (Srinath Raghavan, Salil Tripathi), author of a definitive history of Bangladesh (Willem van Schendel, who questioned her "professional and ethical standards"), and an eyewitness (Akhtaruzzaman Manda). Arnold Zeitlin (head of Pakistan bureau of AP in 1971) queried why she did no surveys of non-voters to establish her "support" thesis. Gita Sahgal (producer of a documentary on 1971 war crimes) has pointed out how razakars were dismissed in the book. Richard Cash (author of decades of pre- and post-1971 public health research in Bangladesh) disputes her death toll methodology and has pointed, in this respect, to the research published in Population Studies on the impact of the war on births and deaths. In an as yet unpublished study, Dina Siddiqi (specialist on gender and Islam in Bangladesh, and researcher for Ain o Salish Kendra, which produced 1971 rape study) has analysed how framing and context setting are critical to the production of historical "truths", and therefore Bose's silences and omissions are significant."[1]
- In the light of such devastating opposition, we should be extremely hesitant to use anything sourced to Sarmila Bose. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 09:37, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
- A critique that I added in the Bangladesh genocide page a couple of days ago:
Definitely Bose controversial book don't deserves to be cited in Bangladesh Liberation war and related articles. Her book was highly criticized by many historians, journalists and the writers.[2][3][4] MBlaze Lightning -talk! 10:02, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
References
- ^ Mohaiemen, Naeem (2011-12-31). "Another Reckoning". Economic & Political Weekly. 46 (53): 79–80.
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- ^ "Flying Blind: Waiting for a Real Reckoning on 1971". The Daily Star. 3 October 2011. Retrieved 9 December 2013.
- ^ "This account of the Bangladesh war should not be seen as unbiased". The Guardian. 2011-06-08. ISSN 0261-3077. Retrieved 2016-03-31.
I am afraid this 'devastating' opposition of Sarmila Bose (which comes, unsurprisingly and understandably, from chiefly Indian and Bangladeshi sources) is also met with praise from neutral Western academics for Bose's work.
‘The “Events of 1971”, as the International Commission of Jurists called its report on the subject, have been an enduring source of agonized contestation in South Asia for forty years. Subject to endless mythmaking and exaggerations in Pakistan, Bangladesh and their diasporas, all too rarely have these events been considered with the non-partisan care they deserve. Sarmila Bose’s stunning Dead Reckoning is the first book-length study that meticulously reconstructs the violence based on actual evidence. By showing how the terror of rape and massacre cut across many more cleavages of East Pakistani society than Pakistani and Bengali nationalists like to admit, her book is at once a correction of the record and a tribute to the virtues of humanistic scholarship. Written with courage and searing honesty, it will set anew the terms of debate about this dark chapter in the region’s history.’ — A. Dirk Moses, Professor at the European University Institute, Florence and Associate Professor, University of Sydney
‘Combining rigorous scholarship and a passionate interest in setting the record straight, Dead Reckoning is the finest study yet of the social, cultural and political meaning of the 1971 East Pakistan/Bangladesh war, one of the major events of the twentieth century. Dr. Bose writes in the service of the truth, we are in her debt.’ — Stephen Cohen, author of The Idea of Pakistan
‘I have felt the need for a dispassionate account of the Bangladesh war ever since witnessing that triumph of faith over fact, the Mujibnagar independence ceremony. No one can take on that challenge better than Sarmila Bose, whose courage, disregard for orthodoxy and meticulous research make her the enfant terrible of Indian historians.’ — Sunanda K. Datta-Ray, columnist and author of Waiting for America: India and the United States in the New Millennium
‘History emerges only slowly from the passion-filled context of contemporary events. Sarmila Bose’s book sets Bangladesh’s struggle for liberation at the start of this long passage.’ — David Washbrook, Trinity College, Cambridge
‘Sarmila Bose’s powerful and poignant retelling of the birth of Bangladesh exposes the wounds of civil war and international conflict in a way that has not been done before. This is history as told by participants at the grass roots and it dispels many myths that have been fed by faulty memories of the so-called elites in Pakistan and Bangladesh. Her book should help the people of both countries accept the facts of that tragic and bloody separation of 1971 and to take responsibility for the war that stained the verdant Bengali countryside red.’ — Shuja Nawaz, Director, South Asia Center, The Atlantic Council in Washington DC and author of Crossed Swords: Pakistan, Its Army, and the Wars Within
‘Bose has written a book that should provoke both fresh research and fresh thinking about a fateful turning point in the history of the subcontinent.’ — Martin Woollacott, Guardian
‘A significant intervention into the historiography of the Bangladesh War of 1971.’ — Amber Abbas, H-Memory
‘Dead Reckoning is a useful resource for students of the region … the reasoning is open and clear [and the] descriptive analysis makes for grim and startling reading.’ — Politics, Religion & Ideology
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And I would doubt the credibility of Nayanika Mokherjee's words (to whom Sarmila Bose responded in a Guardian article here:
- REDIRECT [[12]] especially when Sarmila Bose, who is after all a reputable academic, uncovers that Mokherjee has falsely quoted Professor Willan Va Sendel against her, when it turns out that the Professor had not even reviewed Bose's book.
Also there is no proof that 'most' scholars are against Bose's views. Thats an unsubstantiated clam. Her criticism comes mainly from Bangladesh and India.TalhaZubairButt (talk) 22:53, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
Edit conflict (1 April 2016)
Since, some editors have been reverting well sourced information from this article. This article was fully protected by RegentsPark after I agreed to self-revert my perfectly well sourced edit. The edit in question is this. Opposing editors, please list your policy-based objections that why this edit should not be made. The objections should be something more than mere "no consensus" and typical "POV pushing" accusations that opposing editors have been making across several articles. Sheriff | ☎ 911 | 22:34, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
- Most of the edit is perfectly fine. The content is well sourced. Only problem is the content attributed to Dr Abdul Mu'min Chowdhury, which is sourced to a storyofbangladesh.com, which is a blog. The reference should be changed to a more reliable source. Nothing against any of the other additions.Vinegarymass911 (talk) 22:53, 1 April 2016 (UTC)
- The original revert was this one, which alleged "Propaganda pushing. Discuss every point on the Talk and build consensus. Also, doing WP:Fringe and also no RS.. RV to the version 29 February 2016 of Kautilya3". RegentsPark also made some comments above [13]. Talha Zubair started discussing some of them, but then got blocked. Ghatus also made some comments above. These need to be addressed. I am going to close the dead discussions and meta-level discussions so that we can focus on the substantive ones. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 00:02, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
- @Vinegarymass911: Indeed, you are absolutely right that the content is well-sourced. But verifiability is only the baseline criterion for Wikipedia content. It should be WP:NPOV, which means that it should represent all scholarly viewpoints with due WP:WEIGHT as per their prominence in the sources. See my comments in Persistent POV pushing section above. NPOV is a difficult criterion to satisfy because we don't necessarily know all the literature on the topic. However, if we find WP:SECONDARY sources as described on the policy page, we can be reasonably confident that they give an accurate summary of all the scholarly view points. But, if we use WP:PRIMARY sources, i.e., sources that represent an author's original research, then we need to assess whether they represent mainstream views or fringe views. Many editors have said that Sarmila Bose's views are fringe. A good deal of evidence for this has already been presented. But these objections are being brushed aside. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 09:28, 2 April 2016 (UTC)
Kautilya3's disputed summary of Naim article
@Kautilya3: I am not interested in whether Naim agrees with Indian Muslim opinion or not, I am more interested in his documentation of the Muslim opinions of that time. (So keep the term 'brutal' away).
I went through the WP:PRIMARY policy and it says:
Policy: Unless restricted by another policy, primary sources that have been reputably published may be used in Wikipedia; but only with care, because it is easy to misuse them.[4] Any interpretation of primary source material requires a reliable secondary source for that interpretation. A primary source may only be used on Wikipedia to make straightforward, descriptive statements of facts that can be verified by any educated person with access to the primary source but without further, specialized knowledge. For example, an article about a novel may cite passages to describe the plot, but any interpretation needs a secondary source. Do not analyze, evaluate, interpret, or synthesize material found in a primary source yourself; instead, refer to reliable secondary sources that do so. Do not base an entire article on primary sources, and be cautious about basing large passages on them. Do not add unsourced material from your personal experience, because that would make Wikipedia a primary source of that material. Use extra caution when handling primary sources about living people; see WP:Biographies of living persons §?Avoid misuse of primary sources, which is policy.
So it seems as far as the Haqeeqat quote is concerned, it can be included with the straightforward words of Naim (ie The following quotation from Haqeeqat (Lucknow: n.d.) conveys well the feelings at that time). So we should include it in the article like this.
For a majority of Indian Muslims, the pervasive mood in the days immediately after the war was a mixture of despair, confusion, and anger. According to Naim the following quotation from Haqeeqat (Lucknow: n.d.) conveys well the feelings at that time:
The chief reason for the resentment of the Muslims is that the event of the independence of Bangladesh and her severance of all ties with Pakistan was generally celebrated in India as if the 'victory' had been gained against the Muslims themselves. Insulting and provocative slogans were raised against them in public meetings in this country. A second reason is that the Muslims in general do believe that the war was primarily fought for the purpose of destroying the integral unity of Pakistan. Our Ministry of Information hands out all sorts of propaganda but does nothing to dispel the dejection and resentment of Indian Muslims" (Quoted in Sidq-i-Jadid; 21 January 1972).
Your Summary
And now we come to your summary of the Naim article. Which was a biased summary and you didn't give all the details as you should have.
Lets take a look at your Naim summary diff before I had edited it diff:
Kautilya3's summary of Naim: 'The pervasive mood among Indian Muslims was initially a mixture of anger, despair and confusion. They postulated that the war was fought primarily for the purpose of destroying the integral unity of Pakistan. The alleged prophesies of Shah Ni'matullah Wali were recalled to imply that the perceived calamity to the Muslim psyche was part of a grand scheme ordained by the Almighty God. However, once the impact of the break-up of Pakistan had sunk in, the defeat was attributed to Pakistan the country as opposed to Islam the ideology. One variety of nationalism had lost to another. The emergence of Bangladesh was seen as part of the pattern of world history, even Muslim history, similar to the separation of Sudan from Egypt or that of Singapore from Malaysia. What was unique to the case of Bangladesh was the "vastness of brutality done against innocent people." While the Muslims lamented the injury that had occurred to a united Pakistan, they recognized that there was now one more indpendent state of Muslims and wished for its success' (End of Kautilya3's quote)
Now let me ask you some questions about your summary:
Question 1) Your words in your summary are that - 'However, once the impact of the break-up of Pakistan had sunk in,'
But there is nothing in the article which mentions or implies the phrase 'once the impact of Pakistan's break-up sunk in'. Please indicate paragraph number if you are correct.
What the article actually says is 'The commentators in the Muslim press adopted various tacks to shore up this collapse of morale.'
So what the article actually said (and which you ignored) was that Indian Muslims were looking for answers so they could shore up their collapsed morale in the wake of Pakistan's defeat. And the concern of Indian Muslims was predominantly about defending the original Muslim separatist movement of 1947.
And as a result different answers came up. Shah Nadvi (whose opinion was the only one you included in your summary) was not the only one who gave answers. Daryabadi also gave his own opinion, which you ignored-despite both of them being clerics and thus the same class of people.
So your summary needs improvement.
Question 2) Why did you stop at ' One variety of nationalism had lost to another....'? You skipped this important bit that came right after it (in the original article):
'.....and that the ideology of Islam still remained as meaningful and relevant as before. Pakistan met with this calamity because the Pakistanis failed to make Islam a reality in their social and political life. The implied thrust of such arguments was that there had been nothing wrong with the original separatist and exclusivist interpretation of Islam; that those values still held true and would certainly come to the fore again in both Pakistan and Bangladesh; and that what was lacking were true believers who would put those values into effect.' [full paragraph in the Naim article)
Your summary was incomplete. It stops on the line that 'one nationalism lost to another'. The original article then went on to say that the opinion amongst Indian Muslims was that the original separatist Islamic movement was correct and the Muslim nationalism was also correct but Pakistan was criticised for not implementing Islam, therefore lacking true believers in Muslim nationalism.
Now including that info would have made it an accurate summary.
Question 3) Furthermore why did you not separate the different Indian Muslim opinions. Eg; Maulana Daryabadi who condemned the Bengali uprising against Pakistan (even in 1972 he repeated his condemnation of the Bengali rebels) and then after the war called for all Muslims to repent, was a separate personality to that of Shah Muinuddin Nadvi who was the one who had said that If, on the one hand, its secession caused injury to a united Pakistan, on the other there has now emerged one more independent state of Muslims. Wisdom demands that forgetting the past we should try to come together. Bangladesh should treat the non-Bengalis with kindness. Her leaders cannot forever remain indifferent to Islam and Muslims.
You mixed both opinions up (of separate scholars) into one single opinion. Or you included Nadvi's stance but excluded Daryabadi's stance.
Question 4) Why did you leave out the last bit of Nadvi's statement about Bengalis needing to 'not remain indifferent to Islam and Muslims'? That was really important since the Bengalis had ignored their religious identity and revolted on the basis of ethnic nationalism.
Question 5) And where did you get this bit of your summary from and wished for its success???
There is nothing in the article which said that Indian Muslims 'wished the Bengalis success'. All that Shah Nadvi said was that Bangladesh is a new independent Muslim country. Full stop. Neither his words nor Naim's words said anything about Indian Muslims wishing Bangladesh 'success'. What he did call for however, was a desire for reconciliation.
Question 6) You got this bit of your summary - While the Muslims lamented the injury that had occurred to a united Pakistan, they recognized that there was now one more indpendent state of Muslims- not from Naim's words but from the quote of Shah Muinuddn Nadvi. Yet you asked me stick to Naim's words and not to use the Haqeeqat/Sidq-e-Jadid quote (which had included the Indian Muslims complaint that India celebrated its victory as a victory against Muslims) because its a primary source yet you yourself used Shah Nadvi's quote for your summary-which was also a primary source.
Could you explain why?
Question 7) You also got this bit of your summary - They postulated that the war was fought primarily for the purpose of destroying the integral unity of Pakistan. - from the Haqeeqat quote. Its the same quote where Indian Muslims complained that India was celebrating its victory as a victory against Muslims. But you don't want to include that little bit of info. Yet you are willing to use the second part of the Haqeeqat quote (which is Primary source in itself) even though it has no back-up from Naim's words (which is the secondary source).
Please explain why?
Question 8) There is nothing in the article at all which says that Indian Muslim opinion changed (indeed the conclusion claimed Indian Muslim thinking did not change and they continued to adhere to the 'one Muslim nation' ideology).
Now lets take a look at the summary of Indian Muslim opinion as was provided in the Naim article:
(1) Pakistan came into existence through the sacrifices of Indian Muslims, who then had to pay dearly for it. They were abandoned by their erstwhile leaders. Many of them had to leave their relatives and properties and go to live in an alien land, where they were now in grave danger. Those who stayed behind have had to suffer similarly in communal riots.
(2) The Muslims of India, when they raised the cry for Pakistan, had not been duped by the leaders of the Muslim League. Their demand was a deliberate political move. The majority that supported that demand felt that in a separate Muslim state their one religion, one language, and one culture would flourish, and a kind of Islamic renaissance would take place. At that time, there was no demand for separate regional cultures. If such a demand had been raised, Pakistan would have been rejected by all the Muslims.
(3) The creation of Bangladesh does in no way negate the validity of the original movement for Pakistan. Even in India a strong nationalism has not succeeded in keeping intact old state boundaries.
(4) Bangladesh is a Muslim country, like Iran or Jordan.
(5) If the East Bengalis are so keen about a separate Bengali culture they should not have joined the Pakistan Movement in the first place. Further, if their Bengali nationalism is so important for them they should now merge their country with the Indian Bengal.
(6) In 1946, when the erstwhile North Western Frontier Province and the united Punjab had shown little enthusiasm for Pakistan, it was the Bengali Muslims who came out so strongly for a united Pakistan. It is now meaningless, therefore, for the Bengalis to claim that they have won their independence from West Pakistan. It should perhaps be put the other way around.
(7) It is incorrect to say that the old East Pakistan did not make sufficient progress. After all, it was, to begin with, a most backward region.
(8) The leaders of East Bengal displayed a lack of patience and forbearance. They responded too emotionally and thereby caused great loss of life. They should have known that the Pakistani army would be tough in its reprisal.
(9) 'It is wrong to blame the Pakistani army for all the destruction. Were not, in the early stages of the crisis, the various Bahinis being praised for their guerrilla activities?
(10) Finally, if the initial partition of the country was all that bad, as the Bengali leaders now claim, then Bangladesh should now join India. That may persuade even Pakistan to do the same. That would indeed be a glorious day for Indian Muslims.
To me this summarised opinion seems just as, if not more, critical of Bengalis as it is of Pakistan.
@Kautiya3: I suggest you read and re--read Naim's article to properly understand it.
Note: Points 4 and 10 do not support your stance at all. It should be read in context of Points 1,2 and 3.
Point 3 is particularly important in understanding the entire Indian Muslim reaction: which was primarily based upon defending the original Muslim separatism which had formed Pakistan.
So Kautilya3's interpretation of the article's documentation of Muslim reaction goes like this:
1. Muslims were angry and confused
2. Shah Waliyllah's prophecies were recalled.
3. However, later the impact of Pakistan's defeat sunk in
4. Indian Muslims realised that one nationalism had lost to another
5. Indian Muslims, although initially hurt at Pakistan's breakup, later accepted Bangladesh since it was a Muslim country and wished for its success.
My interpretation of the article's documented Muslim reaction is different. It goes like this:
1. Indian Muslims were angry and confused initially at Pakistan's breakup.
2. They resorted to conspiracy theories to explain Pakistan's breakup (eg the Israeli Zionist agents theory). Some pinned ther hopes on alleged prophecies.
3. The press tried to increase the morale of Indian Muslims, which had collapsed due to Pakistan's defeat.
4. They defended the original Islamic separatist movement in 1947. They tried to reassure themselves that the original movement to create Pakistan was correct as was Muslim nationalism. All that was lacking, in their opinion, was Pakistan's implementation of Islam in society and politics. They hoped that this Islamic nationalism would return to both Pakistan and Bangladesh
5. There were different ways Indian Muslims tried to boost their morale.
Some, such as Maulana Daryabadi, (repeatedly) condemned the Bengali uprising against Pakistan and called for all Muslims to repent to God.
Others, such as Shah Nadvi, said that despite Pakistan's breakup, Bangladesh was still a Muslim country and they also called for Bengalis to not remain indifferent to Islam and Muslims. They simultaneously called for reconciliation (between the Muslims).
6. In all, Indian Muslims criticised the shortcomings amongst all groups. They criticised the Bengali leadership for impatience, acknowledged that both the Pakistani Army and Bengali guerillas had caused the devastation, they felt that East Bengal had always been a backward region economically therefore it was untrue that East Pakistan had made no progress since becoming part of Pakistan and they also criticised the Bengalis for having originally joined the Pakistan Movement if ethnic identity was so important for them.
7. They believed that not only was Bangladesh still a Muslim country, but its breaking away from Pakistan did not negate the original Indian Muslim demand for Pakistan.
Again it was an attempt to reassure themselves of Pakistan's creation's validity.
8. They also felt that if Bengalis believed the original partition was wrong, perhaps they should rejoin India. If both Bangladesh and Pakistan reunited with India, that would improve the situation of Indian Muslims who have had to suffer since the Partition.
Now, to resolve this dispute, its up to other editors to read the article and see whose interpretation is more accurate.
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TalhaZubairButt (talk) 21:36, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
Response by Kautilya3
Phew, that is a pretty long essay. Before I begin, a few meta-level points:
- You have been here long enough that you need to read and follow the talk page guidelines at WP:TALK and WP:TPHELP. In particular, you need to be concise.
- You can't call it "Kautilya's disputed summary" before you even disputed it.
- You can't call it "biased summary" just because I left out stuff. Any summary would leave out stuff. To call it "biased," you would need to demonstrate that it distorted what was said in the source.
- You might care more about the primary sources than Naim's analysis, but Wikipedia cares about the secondary source. The Muslim Press itself is not admissible on Wikipedia even as a primary source. Only mainstream news outlets are admissible, not community news outlets.
My summary is here. It is supposed to be a small paragraph in a section on Reaction in India to the war. It can't be any longer than what I wrote. In fact, it is already overweight in that section.
The only thing I can be criticised for are the words "However, after the impact of the break-up of Pakistan had sunk in," which are not anywhere in the source. But either that or something like it is necessary to separate the two views mentioned there, the first representing despair and the second representing their way of coming to terms with it.
Your expanded summary here
- added the feeling that Indians celebrated the victory as a victory against Muslims. This cannot be added without endorsement from a scholarly source, and Naim clearly did not endorse it. We have to find out if it is a fact or not, and, if it is a fact, report it as such, not via a second-hand commentary that is unverifiable.
- added the feeling that atrocities were committed by "all sides." Once again it is a commentary on a purported fact, which needs to be verified independently.
- added that they lectured Bangladesh to remember its Muslim identity. Sorry, no. This is not a "reaction." They have no business lecturing Bangladeshis.
- added that they said all Muslims are one nation. I am personally ok with adding it, but it doesn't say very much. This kind of nationhood doesn't have any bearing on world politics.
I don't feel like answering your long list of questions of the variety "why do you leave out X." I will read them again and see if there is anything worth responding to. On your Question 8, "there is nothing in the article at all which says that Indian Muslim opinion changed," there is, but subtly. The phase 4 (after the war) reaction talks about the "reaction immediately after the war" and later "the theme that was repeated incessantly." There is a change between the two. We also know from other sources, for example this one[1], that it changed drastically. "The two nation theory is dead," according to this source. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 23:36, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
References
- ^ Fazal, Tanweer (1 August 2014), "Nation-state" and Minority Rights in India: Comparative Perspectives on Muslim and Sikh Identities, Routledge, pp. 83–, ISBN 978-1-317-75179-3
Discussion of Kautilya3's summary
You can't call it "biased summary" just because I left out stuff. Any summary would leave out stuff. To call it "biased," you would need to demonstrate that it distorted what was said in the source.
- @Kautilya3: It certainly was a biased summary because it didn't summarise all perspectives. You picked out the perspectives of your POV, ignored the rest which didn't support your POV.TalhaZubairButt (talk) 23:54, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
- You might care more about the primary sources than Naim's analysis, but Wikipedia cares about the secondary source. The Muslim Press itself is not admissible on Wikipedia even as a primary source. Only mainstream news outlets are admissible, not community news outlets.
- @Kautilya3: Refer back to my questions no 6 and 7. You yourself have used the primary sources.TalhaZubairButt (talk) 23:54, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
- @Kautilya3: But you yourself used primary quotes for your 'summary'. Refer back to my questions No. 6 and No. 7.TalhaZubairButt (talk) 23:54, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
My summary is here. It is supposed to be a small paragraph in a section on Reaction in India to the war. It can't be any longer than what I wrote. In fact, it is already overweight in that section.
The only thing I can be criticised for are the words "However, after the impact of the break-up of Pakistan had sunk in," which are not anywhere in the source. But either that or something like it is necessary to separate the two views mentioned there, the first representing despair and the second representing their way of coming to terms with it.
- @Kautilya3: You are also being criticised for adding this bit 'and wished for its success'. Because nowhere in the article did it say that indian Muslims wished Bangladesh success. There was however a call for reconciliation.TalhaZubairButt (talk) 23:54, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
- Talha Zubair, I hope you will stop writing these long posts and attempt to be concise as recommended by WP:TALK. You will not be able to achieve consensus the way you are going.
- If you want to object to any content I included, you need to object to it on its own merits/demerits, not on the grounds of what I did not include. The only objection you have raised is that I summarised the primary source in some of the sentences rather than Naim's analysis. You refer to Questions 6 and 7. Let us look at them:
- (Q6) While the Muslims lamented the injury that had occurred to a united Pakistan, they recognized that there was now one more indpendent state of Muslims. This view point is being clearly endorsed by Naim who says: "A less hysterical analysis was the editorial in Aza'im (Lucknow; 28 December 1971). It laid emphasis on the fact that the emergence of Bangladesh as a separate nation was by no means a unique event in world history..."
- (Q7) They postulated that the war was fought primarily for the purpose of destroying the integral unity of Pakistan. I included it because it was part of the quote that you included originally. We can delete it.
- You object to the phrase "and wished for its success." It is fine to replace it with "and wished for reconciliation between the two countries."
- Are we done with your objections? -- Kautilya3 (talk) 09:18, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
- @Kautilya3: Okay I think you should now produce a new summary and we can take it from there and we'll see If I still have any objections to it. I want you to replace 'once the impact of the breakup had sunk in' with 'the Indian Muslim press tried to boost the Indian Muslim morale in the wake of Pakistan's defeat'. (This is in Naim's words).
- Also I want you to mention that the Indian Muslims defended their original separatist interpretation of Islam in spite of Bangladesh's creation. My stance is that Indian Muslims were trying to reconcile with Bangladesh's emergence (with mixed responses) while holding onto their defence of Pakistan's creation in the first place.
- That would resolve our argument. ThanksTalhaZubairButt (talk) 10:05, 4 April 2016 (UTC)
Discussion of TalhaZubaurButt's additional points
Your expanded summary here
- added the feeling that Indians celebrated the victory as a victory against Muslims. This cannot be added without endorsement from a scholarly source, and Naim clearly did not endorse it. We have to find out if it is a fact or not, and, if it is a fact, report it as such, not via a second-hand commentary that is unverifiable. -- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kautilya3 (talk • contribs)
- @Kautilya3: Again, refer back to my questions No. 6 and No. 7. You conveniently did use parts of quotes (primary sources) when it suited you.TalhaZubairButt (talk) 23:54, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
- added the feeling that atrocities were committed by "all sides." Once again it is a commentary on a purported fact, which needs to be verified independently. -- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kautilya3 (talk • contribs)
- @Kautilya3: This is mentioned in the article. Point No.9 of the summary.TalhaZubairButt (talk) 23:54, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
- added that they lectured Bangladesh to remember its Muslim identity. Sorry, no. This is not a "reaction." They have no business lecturing Bangladeshis. -- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kautilya3 (talk • contribs)
- @Kautilya3: This was a part of their reaction, hence being included. We can't just cherrypick the parts of quotes you like.TalhaZubairButt (talk) 23:54, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
- added that they said all Muslims are one nation. I am personally ok with adding it, but it doesn't say very much. This kind of nationhood doesn't have any bearing on world politics. -- — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kautilya3 (talk • contribs)
- @Kautilya3: If you are okay with adding this bit then no further commentary is needed. Unless someone else has anything to add.TalhaZubairButt (talk) 23:54, 3 April 2016 (UTC)