7 December 2014
- 09:5309:53, 7 December 2014 diff hist +26 Battle of Xa Cam My →top: 79.85%
- 09:4709:47, 7 December 2014 diff hist +8 Battle of Xa Cam My →top: per Tucker
3 December 2014
- 11:5711:57, 3 December 2014 diff hist +3 Killing of Sean Bell →Shooting incident: ce
17 November 2014
- 08:3708:37, 17 November 2014 diff hist 0 m Battle of Bryn Glas →Background: consistency
17 October 2014
- 01:5901:59, 17 October 2014 diff hist +168 Neil deGrasse Tyson Undid revision 629106217 by Objective3000 If no one else is interested in correcting the falsehood, I'll do it again.
10 October 2014
- 21:2321:23, 10 October 2014 diff hist +168 Neil deGrasse Tyson Undid revision 629040427 by Objective3000 (talk)rv lazy edit which restores bogus "vote", etc. See talk. You'd prefer "essentially flunked out", per cite?
9 October 2014
- 12:3412:34, 9 October 2014 diff hist +1,474 List of Wikipedia controversies Undid revision 628476582 by Black Kite (talk)There's no consensus to throw this controversy down the memory hole that I can see.
- 05:0205:02, 9 October 2014 diff hist +168 Neil deGrasse Tyson →Early life: clarify
7 October 2014
- 09:2809:28, 7 October 2014 diff hist +1 Clipper chip →Backlash: negating, not defying
6 October 2014
- 09:0309:03, 6 October 2014 diff hist +4 m List of Wikipedia controversies →2014: The F.
- 09:0009:00, 6 October 2014 diff hist −42 List of Wikipedia controversies →2014: This tag should indicate some allegation on the talk page which I'm not seeing and, absent which, there's no reason for it to stay.
- 08:5608:56, 6 October 2014 diff hist +1,512 List of Wikipedia controversies Undid revision 627149336 by Second Quantization (talk) No BLP vio. Not even close.
3 October 2014
- 18:5118:51, 3 October 2014 diff hist +117 The Federalist (website) →Neil deGrasse Tyson articles and Wikipedia controversy: upgrade recitation of facts
- 18:2718:27, 3 October 2014 diff hist +108 The Federalist (website) →Neil deGrasse Tyson articles and Wikipedia controversy
- 12:4212:42, 3 October 2014 diff hist +6,472 The Federalist (website) restore content
2 October 2014
- 19:1919:19, 2 October 2014 diff hist +112 The Federalist (website) →Neil deGrasse Tyson articles and Wikipedia controversy: direect cite
- 19:1519:15, 2 October 2014 diff hist +1,093 The Federalist (website) Undid revision 627988559 by Kerani (talk)undo evisceration. Undue weight compared with what? \
- 18:5918:59, 2 October 2014 diff hist 0 The Federalist (website) →top: fix,update Alexa
- 18:5218:52, 2 October 2014 diff hist −1 The Federalist (website) →Neil deGrasse Tyson articles and Wikipedia controversy: was true without accusing him of lying, which we do not. (A comment by the Friendly Atheist was also disappeared.)
- 18:4818:48, 2 October 2014 diff hist +1 The Federalist (website) →Neil deGrasse Tyson articles and Wikipedia controversy: ...be that saying so was equivalent to saying Tyson had lied. Now that Tyson has admitted error it turns out that it is perfectly possible for there to be no evidence that what Tyson said...
- 18:4518:45, 2 October 2014 diff hist −107 The Federalist (website) →Neil deGrasse Tyson articles and Wikipedia controversy: THIS material was not removed. What was removed was an assertion, with cite but no text attribution, that there was no evidence Bush had said what Tyson claimed. The "BLP vio" was asserted to...
- 18:3818:38, 2 October 2014 diff hist +589 The Federalist (website) →Neil deGrasse Tyson articles and Wikipedia controversy: We can afford the space to clarify Tyson's apology.
- 18:1818:18, 2 October 2014 diff hist −53 The Federalist (website) →Neil deGrasse Tyson articles and Wikipedia controversy: To repeat a speech often, even "without notes", is not to engage in extemporaneous speech
- 18:1018:10, 2 October 2014 diff hist 0 The Federalist (website) →Neil deGrasse Tyson articles and Wikipedia controversy
- 18:0918:09, 2 October 2014 diff hist +117 The Federalist (website) →Neil deGrasse Tyson articles and Wikipedia controversy: It's never shifted FROM Tyson; mention the NDT bioarticle as well
- 18:0218:02, 2 October 2014 diff hist +512 The Federalist (website) →Neil deGrasse Tyson articles and Wikipedia controversy: more than just Bush gets mentioned. The Bush article cited mentions and links to the others, but cites to each would be a plus.
- 17:4117:41, 2 October 2014 diff hist +15 The Federalist (website) →Tyson article and Wikipedia controversy: plural
- 17:3517:35, 2 October 2014 diff hist −28 The Federalist (website) Remove argumentative template. Find or make one that says "may" (see the others) or do without.
30 September 2014
- 01:1301:13, 30 September 2014 diff hist −37 Killing of Michael Brown →Reactions: The channel is non-notable unless you find reporting which says it is. Otherwise it's just POV-pushing snark.
- 01:0201:02, 30 September 2014 diff hist +3 m Killing of Michael Brown →Reactions: ce
- 01:0001:00, 30 September 2014 diff hist +77 Killing of Michael Brown →Reactions: If there is some reporting in RS that the PR firm rather than Jackson is responsible for the apology say so, with cite.
29 September 2014
- 10:2710:27, 29 September 2014 diff hist −2 Killing of Michael Brown →Aftermath in Ferguson: atop, not "at top"
- 10:2210:22, 29 September 2014 diff hist +9 Killing of Michael Brown →Aftermath in Ferguson: fix awkwardness
- 10:1210:12, 29 September 2014 diff hist −7 Killing of Michael Brown →Independent autopsy: [WP:ALLEGED],[WP:WEASEL]
- 10:0310:03, 29 September 2014 diff hist −15 Killing of Michael Brown →Robbery incident report and video release: "initially" implies something subsequently changed. It hasn't. I used "reported" for this HufPo lie as dry humor when I first wrote this paragraph, but the joke has gone unnoticed too long.
- 09:5209:52, 29 September 2014 diff hist −13 Killing of Michael Brown →Robbery incident report and video release: Johnson was not a suspect by this point. Neither was Brown merely a suspect -- the case was closed because the perp was known, and dead. "suspect" appears nowhere in the cites, it's an invention of Wikipedia
- 09:3109:31, 29 September 2014 diff hist −13 Killing of Michael Brown →FBI investigation: rmv unneccesary
- 09:2909:29, 29 September 2014 diff hist +8 Killing of Michael Brown →Police investigation: elected
- 09:2709:27, 29 September 2014 diff hist +1 Killing of Michael Brown →Police investigation: now a past event
- 09:2309:23, 29 September 2014 diff hist −144 Killing of Michael Brown →Bystander heard on video: Now that we have other accounts of Brown advancing on Wilso the belt-and-suspenders attribution is excessive.
- 09:0609:06, 29 September 2014 diff hist −151 Killing of Michael Brown →top: Undup Hwy Patrol ref, remove giving Nixon unearned credit for deescalation over time.
- 08:5608:56, 29 September 2014 diff hist +23 Killing of Michael Brown →top: causational connection is unsourced
- 08:4908:49, 29 September 2014 diff hist −10 Killing of Michael Brown →top: To mention the objections to the video release without mentioning that it was legally required fails NPOV.
25 September 2014
- 09:5509:55, 25 September 2014 diff hist −3 Murders of Channon Christian and Christopher Newsom →Reaction and accusations of racism: accused
- 09:5309:53, 25 September 2014 diff hist −55 Murders of Channon Christian and Christopher Newsom →Incarceration status: simplify
- 09:4609:46, 25 September 2014 diff hist +25 Murders of Channon Christian and Christopher Newsom →Appeals and retrials: update tenses, etc.
- 09:3009:30, 25 September 2014 diff hist −17 Murders of Channon Christian and Christopher Newsom →Suspects and indictments: Not at snopes, but is at other cites. Clarify that date was release date.
- 09:2709:27, 25 September 2014 diff hist −44 Murders of Channon Christian and Christopher Newsom initially
18 September 2014
- 02:2202:22, 18 September 2014 diff hist +6 Killing of Michael Brown →top: if not here (were cites removed from the lede to get rid of this tag? Cute.) then in the body.
- 02:1902:19, 18 September 2014 diff hist −8 Killing of Michael Brown →top: The prior implication that "peaceful" is the sole proper modifier of "protests" is false, per the removed BBC cite and many others. See talk.
17 September 2014
- 10:0610:06, 17 September 2014 diff hist −35 Killing of Michael Brown →top
- 10:0010:00, 17 September 2014 diff hist +38 Killing of Michael Brown →top: "Some protesters were seen throwing Molotov cocktails at the police"
- 05:4905:49, 17 September 2014 diff hist +22 Killing of Michael Brown →Robbery incident report and video release: "Ferguson Police Chief Thomas Jackson was accused Friday in Internet headlines of lying to the public..."
- 05:4505:45, 17 September 2014 diff hist −9 Killing of Michael Brown →Robbery incident report and video release: clarify connection between two mentions of P-D's request
- 05:3205:32, 17 September 2014 diff hist +1 Killing of Michael Brown →Robbery incident report and video release: lost comment in edit conflict: Add Salon, clarify that HufPo has not walked back its claim.Cwobeel needs to watch video on ref he deleted, not assume editor who provided it was a moron.
- 05:2905:29, 17 September 2014 diff hist +456 Killing of Michael Brown →Robbery incident report and video release
- 04:0104:01, 17 September 2014 diff hist +132 Killing of Michael Brown try again
- 04:0004:00, 17 September 2014 diff hist −2 Killing of Michael Brown Undid revision 625901367 by Andyvphil (talk) that didn't work as intended
- 03:5703:57, 17 September 2014 diff hist +2 Killing of Michael Brown Undid revision 625901037 by Cwobeel (talk) reporter is a rs for herself
- 03:1003:10, 17 September 2014 diff hist +7 Killing of Michael Brown →Robbery incident report and video release: parentheticalize
- 03:0803:08, 17 September 2014 diff hist +122 Killing of Michael Brown →Robbery incident report and video release: The HuffPo didn't just "initially" report that, it continues to report that. The article's title still says "Chief Lied".
15 September 2014
- 12:5512:55, 15 September 2014 diff hist −73 Killing of Michael Brown →top: upgrade crappy writing, again
- 03:2903:29, 15 September 2014 diff hist −43 Killing of Michael Brown →top: tighten
- 03:2103:21, 15 September 2014 diff hist −30 Killing of Michael Brown →top: tighten
14 September 2014
- 10:2910:29, 14 September 2014 diff hist +430 Killing of Michael Brown Undid revision 625497708 by 64.132.151.154 (talk) rv
- 05:4605:46, 14 September 2014 diff hist +43 Killing of Michael Brown Self revert. This is a State grand jury, and if it decides a crime was committed it will presumably be manslaughter. Though I think "actions" was fine, and shorter.
- 05:4105:41, 14 September 2014 diff hist −43 Killing of Michael Brown Undid revision 625482010 by Cwobeel (talk) Wilson may be guilty of a crime (Federal) that doesn't involve killing Brown. I've explained this on the talk page a number of times. Inquire?
- 00:4500:45, 14 September 2014 diff hist +190 Killing of Michael Brown Undid revision 625458181 by Kevin Murray (talk) BRD see talk
- 00:3600:36, 14 September 2014 diff hist −6 Killing of Michael Brown →top: do you prefer "protestors, rioters and protestor-rioters"? nb:lede summarizes article, not one source, so the word choice in any cite misplaced here is not dispositive, it is a matter of editorial choice
- 00:3200:32, 14 September 2014 diff hist +2 Killing of Michael Brown →top: better noun
- 00:2200:22, 14 September 2014 diff hist −4 Killing of Michael Brown →top: prior alternatives made no sense
- 00:1000:10, 14 September 2014 diff hist +128 Killing of Michael Brown Undid revision 625371218 by Dyrnych (talk) We need this title,for its extraordinary vitriol and inaccuracy.
13 September 2014
- 08:1208:12, 13 September 2014 diff hist +611 Killing of Michael Brown →Robbery incident report and video release: move Nixon's reaction to video release to appropriate section, delete unnecessary info about the show he was on, add some cites that still need to be made refs.
- 03:3503:35, 13 September 2014 diff hist −54 Killing of Michael Brown →top: "protests and civil disorder" from lede of linked article, fixes various problems in prev text (the "protests" weren't all peaceful, looters may have been motivated as well as protesters, violence didn't just escalate, etc.)
- 03:1403:14, 13 September 2014 diff hist +2 Killing of Michael Brown →top: jurors are who's, jury is an it
12 September 2014
- 09:4609:46, 12 September 2014 diff hist +8 Vox Media →Vox.com: bluelink Bell
- 09:4509:45, 12 September 2014 diff hist −134 Vox Media →Vox.com: Further correct impression that we are citing multiple criticisms.
- 09:4009:40, 12 September 2014 diff hist −1 Vox Media →Vox.com: The article at the link identifies a real howler, but we should have more than one cite before saying "repeatedly". Not saying it can't be justified, just saying it needs work.
- 08:1208:12, 12 September 2014 diff hist −56 Killing of Michael Brown →Police: Tighten. A lot of RS misreported at the time what Jackson said about Wilson connecting robbery and suspects, but that's no longer unclear.
- 06:4706:47, 12 September 2014 diff hist +28 Killing of Michael Brown →top: "confrontation" is absurdly non specific. Continuing prev comment, we have one dubious RS for police agreeing that W shot at retreating B, which is a Fed crime. Shdn't be stated as fact in Wikipedia's voice. BLP vio.
- 06:4206:42, 12 September 2014 diff hist −152 Killing of Michael Brown →top: Brown's brains were in the street, killed is accurate. He wasn't killed as he fled. The accounts of what happened are complicated, best leave for maintext. Wilson fired at the fleeing Brown by most witness accounts, but ...
- 06:0206:02, 12 September 2014 diff hist +24 Killing of Michael Brown →top: clarify
- 06:0106:01, 12 September 2014 diff hist −24 Killing of Michael Brown →top: redundant -- hard to hit him w/o firing
- 05:5705:57, 12 September 2014 diff hist −230 Killing of Michael Brown →top: If you have RS for this remarkable assertion ("all eyewitnesses") please supply it.
- 03:1303:13, 12 September 2014 diff hist −46 Killing of Michael Brown →top: fix grammar error, and update (e.g., it has now de-escalated). We have RS the protests (and looting) weren't by just by "[the] Ferguson community"
- 03:0103:01, 12 September 2014 diff hist −37 Killing of Michael Brown →top: tighten lede
10 September 2014
- 05:2205:22, 10 September 2014 diff hist +1 Killing of Michael Brown There is no "current consensus" and it's tiresome to keep asserting there is.
- 04:3604:36, 10 September 2014 diff hist +19 Killing of Michael Brown →top: not optional
- 04:2504:25, 10 September 2014 diff hist +2 Killing of Michael Brown →top: the sources mostly prefer teen, but some folks don't want it. Less than 3 months past 18, "man" implies more maturity than I care for.
9 September 2014
- 18:1018:10, 9 September 2014 diff hist +12 Killing of Michael Brown →top: "discharged" implies a lack of agency, priviledging Wilson's account
- 18:0718:07, 9 September 2014 diff hist −28 Killing of Michael Brown if there are protests it is unnecessary to sat the subject of the protests is controversial
- 16:3616:36, 9 September 2014 diff hist +26 Killing of Michael Brown →top: cite city atty defense
- 16:3316:33, 9 September 2014 diff hist +8 Killing of Michael Brown →top: Who now argues that the video does not show Brown?
- 09:3009:30, 9 September 2014 diff hist −18 Killing of Michael Brown →top: remove redundancy (if it was widely criticized...)
- 09:2809:28, 9 September 2014 diff hist +301 Killing of Michael Brown →top: Restore Ferguson's dispositive response to "criticism". Restore work of three editors, adding corrections (not charges, only "convictions"; not "state authorities", the lawyer for the juvenile justice system).
- 06:4106:41, 9 September 2014 diff hist +218 Killing of Michael Brown →top: still leaving USA Today's assertion unchanged.
- 06:2106:21, 9 September 2014 diff hist +139 Killing of Michael Brown Undid revision 624768279 by Dyrnych (talk) I take it you misread the edit. The language under RFC, as to Brown's criminal record, was unaffected,
- 05:4205:42, 9 September 2014 diff hist +139 Killing of Michael Brown →top: Context for what? For an atmosphere where obeying the law is met with unwarranted criticism a/k/a twaddle? Ok, I think it's undue weight, but if you want context, here it is.
- 05:3305:33, 9 September 2014 diff hist 0 Killing of Michael Brown →Robbery incident report and video release: move cite to where it is needed
- 04:2804:28, 9 September 2014 diff hist −253 Killing of Michael Brown →Anonymous audio recording: Non-notable, non-expert, not obviously insightful, overtaken by later more detailed analysis.
- 04:0504:05, 9 September 2014 diff hist 0 Killing of Michael Brown →top: separate unrelated
- 04:0104:01, 9 September 2014 diff hist −166 Killing of Michael Brown →top: Mention the criticism, report the response... or better leave this unimportant twaddle out of the lede.
- 03:5603:56, 9 September 2014 diff hist +24 Killing of Michael Brown →Robbery incident report and video release: answer to controversy about timing of release
- 03:5303:53, 9 September 2014 diff hist −365 Killing of Michael Brown →Robbery incident report and video release: Render this intelligible.
- 02:4602:46, 9 September 2014 diff hist −173 Killing of Michael Brown →Robbery incident report and video release: Even if this tribute were worth mentioning, it doesn't belong here.
8 September 2014
- 19:4119:41, 8 September 2014 diff hist −12 Killing of Michael Brown →top: per talk
- 19:1619:16, 8 September 2014 diff hist +8 Killing of Michael Brown wp:snowballed
- 17:0317:03, 8 September 2014 diff hist −9 m Killing of Michael Brown →top: tighten
- 16:5916:59, 8 September 2014 diff hist −50 Killing of Michael Brown tighten
- 16:5016:50, 8 September 2014 diff hist −96 Killing of Michael Brown That Brown took the cigars w/o paying is no longer in dispute. Remove misleading stratement about criminal record. Citations in maintext.
- 16:0016:00, 8 September 2014 diff hist +4 Killing of Michael Brown Undid revision 624683141 by 151.188.105.144 (talk) undo mung
7 September 2014
- 11:1311:13, 7 September 2014 diff hist −2 Killing of Michael Brown →top: more informative
- 11:0911:09, 7 September 2014 diff hist −2 Killing of Michael Brown →top: Occurs to me that the building shot could have gone through Brown -- sorry.
- 10:4410:44, 7 September 2014 diff hist +13 Killing of Michael Brown →top: Not merely "when shot" -- he might have been shot when fleeing, or even by the first shot in the SUV.
- 10:4010:40, 7 September 2014 diff hist −19 Killing of Michael Brown →top: Shorter. In addition to the six that hit Brown, one shot hit a building.
- 10:3510:35, 7 September 2014 diff hist −19 Killing of Michael Brown That the gun was fired "from" rather than just "in" the vehicle is disputed.
- 10:3010:30, 7 September 2014 diff hist −26 Killing of Michael Brown Remove unnecessary attribution of indisputed fact.
- 10:2310:23, 7 September 2014 diff hist +12 Killing of Michael Brown →top: It wasn't "then" -- by both accounts Wilson drove away & returned. And it wasn't a car, it was an SUV.
4 September 2014
- 10:3110:31, 4 September 2014 diff hist +40 List of killings by law enforcement officers in the United States, July 2014 tighten, add other hostages.
- 09:2909:29, 4 September 2014 diff hist −380 Killing of Michael Brown →Darren Wilson: Chronological order. The unexplained surprise of the neighbor doesn't warrant mention, that I can see. Nor Wilson's at-some-point salary.Supply a couple cites, per request, unWikified.
- 09:0909:09, 4 September 2014 diff hist −13 Killing of Michael Brown Tighten & clarify. "Subsequently" contines extant elision the two-stage nature of the encounter, which may need to be here. SUV, not car. Brown's age affects significance of statement about his criminal record in an obvious way.
29 August 2014
- 08:2308:23, 29 August 2014 diff hist +5 m Rowland Barnes →Death: then
- 08:2208:22, 29 August 2014 diff hist +45 Rowland Barnes →Death: Nichols killed four
24 August 2014
- 11:1711:17, 24 August 2014 diff hist −4 Killing of Michael Brown →Independent autopsy: This was said to be true on only one of the 4 arm wounds. Other sources are clearer on this, but even the RadioNZ source says "wound" not "wounds".
- 11:1011:10, 24 August 2014 diff hist −1 Killing of Michael Brown →Independent autopsy: 1 bullet in top of head (1 in eye, 4 in arm)
- 10:5910:59, 24 August 2014 diff hist +271 Killing of Michael Brown →Bystander heard on video: better cite
23 August 2014
- 04:1004:10, 23 August 2014 diff hist −41 Killing of Michael Brown →Bystander heard on video: Why "apparently" supports? The source doesn't include the inserted doubt.
13 July 2014
- 08:5908:59, 13 July 2014 diff hist −73 .ipa →top: rmv obtunded templates
15 June 2014
- 10:0210:02, 15 June 2014 diff hist +30 Peshmerga →Peshmerga in the new Iraq (2003-Present): clarify BDRM-2 reference
- 08:1008:10, 15 June 2014 diff hist +4 Peshmerga →Peshmerga in the new Iraq (2003-Present): blue-link Ikarus C42
29 May 2014
- 05:1205:12, 29 May 2014 diff hist +13 Martha Nussbaum →Life and career
9 May 2014
- 04:5304:53, 9 May 2014 diff hist +15 UK Independence Party →Taxation and economy: It's not simply a "cost". Tax collector's "cost" is tax payers' gain.
5 May 2014
- 07:4807:48, 5 May 2014 diff hist +1 Redshirt (stock character) →Star Trek: rmv bluelink to unrelated content
3 May 2014
- 08:1708:17, 3 May 2014 diff hist −1 Redshirt (stock character) →Star Trek: rmv jarring comma
- 08:0608:06, 3 May 2014 diff hist +13 Anita Morris →External links: {{dead link}}
21 April 2014
- 08:4008:40, 21 April 2014 diff hist −1 Redshirt (stock character) →Star Trek: rmv extraneous comma
29 March 2014
- 04:4304:43, 29 March 2014 diff hist +12 Treaty of Troyes →Aftermath: Charles => Charles VII
- 04:3704:37, 29 March 2014 diff hist 0 m Treaty of Troyes →Background: cap.
- 04:3304:33, 29 March 2014 diff hist +4 Treaty of Troyes →Background: past, hence "had had"
- 04:3104:31, 29 March 2014 diff hist +1 Treaty of Troyes →Background: after
- 04:2904:29, 29 March 2014 diff hist −57 Treaty of Troyes →Background: superfluous
- 04:2304:23, 29 March 2014 diff hist −18 Treaty of Troyes →Background: should have been "{{citation needed}}", except the existence of the rumours does not actually require a separate citation
- 01:0501:05, 29 March 2014 diff hist −8 Battle of Verneuil →Literature and legacy: rmv redlink, and bluelink to Jean Chartier (1500–1580) is to wrong individual. Also, I left it, but...1858????
- 00:5800:58, 29 March 2014 diff hist −245 Battle of Verneuil →Aftermath: not a consequence of the battle
- 00:5100:51, 29 March 2014 diff hist 0 Battle of Verneuil →Aftermath: "plot"?
- 00:5000:50, 29 March 2014 diff hist −104 Battle of Verneuil →Aftermath: Remove sentence that doesn't currently parse. Troyes(1420) was now (1422) accepted by "most people"(who?)? What's ref to Paris?
- 00:3100:31, 29 March 2014 diff hist +50 Battle of Verneuil →A bloody day: the point is that a new process had made a new plate armour more resistant to the longblow
- 00:1400:14, 29 March 2014 diff hist −2 Battle of Verneuil →Buchan returns: better, but a synonym for HQ would be better still. The image of them all fitting into his "headquarters" is jarring.
- 00:0900:09, 29 March 2014 diff hist −4 Battle of Verneuil →Buchan returns: repl "arrived back"(inferior w/o ...in France"returned"
- 00:0500:05, 29 March 2014 diff hist 0 m Battle of Verneuil →top: cap. (sentence needs work that I will not attempt.)
27 March 2014
- 14:1014:10, 27 March 2014 diff hist +131 Teabagging →top: as promised
- 14:0914:09, 27 March 2014 diff hist −2,610 Teabagging →In US politics: Since the subject of this article is the sexual act I am moving this content to the relevant article (will add link above)
- 14:0614:06, 27 March 2014 diff hist +6 Tea Party movement →Symbols and names: "names"? Only one "name" is subject of this section. No need to be coy.
- 13:5313:53, 27 March 2014 diff hist −621 Tea Party movement →top: Cite does not support text ("custom"?); I'll try to salvage ref in section below.
- 13:3613:36, 27 March 2014 diff hist +3 Tea Party movement →Symbols and names: fix partially broken Wikilink
20 March 2014
- 11:2011:20, 20 March 2014 diff hist +31 Big Bounce →Expansion and contraction
- 11:0611:06, 20 March 2014 diff hist −26 Big Bounce →Expansion and contraction: Remove premature "who?" -- it's the subject of this article.
- 10:4310:43, 20 March 2014 diff hist +50 Hartle–Hawking state more complete undo
- 10:3910:39, 20 March 2014 diff hist −890 Cosmogony →Theoretical scenarios: Rmv excessive attention here to Big Bounce. Ref is preserved at bluelink.
- 10:3310:33, 20 March 2014 diff hist +33 Cosmogony →Theoretical scenarios: improve on implication of "early" that the BB was the beginning of time
- 10:2710:27, 20 March 2014 diff hist +9 Cosmogony →Theoretical scenarios: improve on "early ideas"
- 09:3509:35, 20 March 2014 diff hist +92 Cosmogony →Etymology
- 06:4606:46, 20 March 2014 diff hist +78 A Universe from Nothing →top: ...paste
- 06:4206:42, 20 March 2014 diff hist −122 A Universe from Nothing →External links: cut...
- 06:4106:41, 20 March 2014 diff hist +52 A Universe from Nothing →top: video
- 06:0906:09, 20 March 2014 diff hist +13 A Universe from Nothing →top: {{dead link}}
- 05:5505:55, 20 March 2014 diff hist +75 A Universe from Nothing →top: clarifications
- 05:3905:39, 20 March 2014 diff hist +50 A Universe from Nothing →top: A fair reading of Krauss' words does not support the claim that he was "admitting" anything, or saying that more than the -comparison- was "pretentious."
18 March 2014
- 05:5305:53, 18 March 2014 diff hist −4 m Fred Hampton →Raid and death: rmv extraneous word
- 04:0004:00, 18 March 2014 diff hist −505 Fred Hampton →FBI investigation: ...which is however not a WP:RS, meaning that this cannot remain, per policy.
- 03:5803:58, 18 March 2014 diff hist +61 Fred Hampton →FBI investigation: The quote appeared to be OR, but apparently came from this source.
7 December 2013
- 15:5415:54, 7 December 2013 diff hist +10 Flail (weapon) →The one-handed flail: as in the cited example
30 November 2013
- 13:1213:12, 30 November 2013 diff hist +381 Assault weapon (disambiguation) This is complicated, but the replaced definition is simply wrong.
- 12:5012:50, 30 November 2013 diff hist −20 Assault weapon (disambiguation) →See also: An "Assault rifle"(and "machine pistol", "submachine gun", etc.) -is- an "assault weapon" in the original meaning, before that original meaning was buried in political misuse.
- 12:4312:43, 30 November 2013 diff hist +27 Assault weapon (disambiguation) The term "assault rifle" COMES from Hitler's name for the first important example. Burying the important entry in a welter of trivia in the name of alphabetization is counterproductive.
- 12:3212:32, 30 November 2013 diff hist −30 Assault weapon (disambiguation) There is no "Assault" in "SAW" or "LAW".
- 12:3012:30, 30 November 2013 diff hist +132 Assault weapon (disambiguation) Undid revision 583824126 by Sue Rangell That the information is available on the linked page does not trump the usefulness of seeing "Assault" here when the article title may not include it.
- 11:5611:56, 30 November 2013 diff hist +3 Assault weapon →Failed Assault Weapons Ban of 2013: connection
- 11:5411:54, 30 November 2013 diff hist +256 Assault weapon →History of terminology: further develop the origin of "assault weapon" as a propaganda term.
- 10:5110:51, 30 November 2013 diff hist −2,379 Assault weapon →Definitions and usage: Much trimming of underbrush, bringing related material together, etc.
- 09:0009:00, 30 November 2013 diff hist −13 Assault weapon Military assault weapons are used defensively just as often as offensively, and SAW's are usually not actually machine guns.
- 08:1808:18, 30 November 2013 diff hist +177 Moydodyr No edit summary
20 September 2013
- 22:2022:20, 20 September 2013 diff hist +20 Carol Drinkwater iaw series article ACGS ran 78-80 and 88-90, not 78-85, and CD played HH only in the first. Tag: Visual edit
30 August 2013
- 07:0507:05, 30 August 2013 diff hist +1 Boxer at Rest clarity
8 August 2013
- 13:1013:10, 8 August 2013 diff hist 0 Battle of Wanat →Background: remove confusion with "attack" in previous sentence
11 July 2013
- 19:5019:50, 11 July 2013 diff hist +6 2011 Waltham triple murder add "worth" - still has some ambiguity (was the marijuana alone worth thousands?) but this fixes the grammar somewhat
5 June 2013
- 15:4315:43, 5 June 2013 diff hist +2 m Margat →History: "a salient of"
- 15:0315:03, 5 June 2013 diff hist −4 m Margat →History: rmv extra word
- 04:1904:19, 5 June 2013 diff hist −59 Stronghold 2 →War Campaign: incomplete cleanup
19 March 2013
- 21:2921:29, 19 March 2013 diff hist +84 Power forward →Players: Add Pettit to partial list of luminaries including several less luminous than he, reorder for rough chronology. Etc.
- 20:5720:57, 19 March 2013 diff hist +101 McCoy McLemore →External links: JC and College stats
- 20:4420:44, 19 March 2013 diff hist −5 McCoy McLemore rmv redundant "former"; "power forward" is, btw, an anachronism. He was a (competent) NBA forward. Dunno why he's listed as a "center". At Drake?
18 March 2013
- 03:3203:32, 18 March 2013 diff hist +23 Loose Change →History: in Oakland, CA
- 02:5502:55, 18 March 2013 diff hist −9 Loose Change fix incoherent description
21 February 2013
- 06:3806:38, 21 February 2013 diff hist −1 m Battle of Stones River →December 31: gram.
12 February 2013
- 23:5723:57, 12 February 2013 diff hist −121 Assault weapon →Definitions and usage: undup "cosmetic"
- 23:2223:22, 12 February 2013 diff hist +111 Assault weapon →Definitions and usage: clarify that one definition preceeded the attempted redifinition
- 21:4021:40, 12 February 2013 diff hist +28 Assault weapon (disambiguation) The original "assault weapon"
- 21:2621:26, 12 February 2013 diff hist +2 Assault weapon (disambiguation) List derivative meaning second.
24 January 2013
- 02:2802:28, 24 January 2013 diff hist −1 m Thermobaric weapon →Fiction: gram.
- 02:2302:23, 24 January 2013 diff hist +19 Assault weapon (disambiguation) noting the ambiguity
- 02:2002:20, 24 January 2013 diff hist −75 Assault weapon Machine gun:"...a machine gun is distinguished from an automatic rifle by how it is used: a machine gun is a crew-served weapon, while an automatic rifle is used by a single person." Accuracy is encyclopedic.
- 02:1002:10, 24 January 2013 diff hist −149 Machine gun →Overview of modern automatic machine guns: Tighten & divide AR paragraph. nb: "AW's" aren't "disparaged" (said to be bad as weapons), they're demonized. Omit this, repl w/"misnomer"..
20 January 2013
- 17:5317:53, 20 January 2013 diff hist −3 m Assault weapon →History of terminology: editing artifact
- 17:5117:51, 20 January 2013 diff hist −184 Assault weapon →History of terminology: tighten further. The RAW is an oddball example (late date, unusual), but I'll leave it for now.
- 17:3417:34, 20 January 2013 diff hist −80 Assault weapon →History of terminology: tighten
- 14:4314:43, 20 January 2013 diff hist −34 Assault weapon Undid revision 533902964 by Mudwater Follow the blue link to machine gun and you find "not to be confused with assault rifles". But see last paragraph of header there. Still, less confusing this way.
- 14:0614:06, 20 January 2013 diff hist −16 NoScript →NoScript website and Ghostery: unfavorable" has no clear meaning in this context,and seems in any case redundant given "susceptible to manipulation"
- 13:5813:58, 20 January 2013 diff hist −10 NoScript →Hidden partners: third-party scripts: Remove extra comma, tone down declarative prescriptive tone in Wikipedia's voice
19 January 2013
- 04:0304:03, 19 January 2013 diff hist +22 Assault weapon Undid revision 533537298 by North8000 (talk) no need to repeat myself in the absence of any substantive respoinse
17 January 2013
- 14:2114:21, 17 January 2013 diff hist −22 Political arguments of gun politics in the United States →Security against tyranny and invasion: fix deadlink
- 13:3813:38, 17 January 2013 diff hist +11 Political arguments of gun politics in the United States →Rights-based arguments: "whether or not" is not the usual subject of debate
- 13:3313:33, 17 January 2013 diff hist +1 m Federal Assault Weapons Ban →Provisions of the ban: "their... bans", not "their... ban"
- 12:2212:22, 17 January 2013 diff hist +22 Assault weapon What's"over the top"?Again"made-up"&"invented"are redundant;"misnomer" accurately conveys subject POV,"meaning that is known to be wrong"and demonization(danger inaccurately inflated)NOTdisparagment(alleged unworthyness)is alleged.
14 January 2013
- 14:1514:15, 14 January 2013 diff hist +15 Assault weapon →History of terminology: "made-up" and "invented" are redundant; other improvements in sentence
5 January 2013
- 02:2202:22, 5 January 2013 diff hist −18 Assault rifle →Assault rifles vs. Assault weapons: if "in legislation" then not in both "politics and law"; rmv excessive bluelink of US
4 January 2013
- 14:1014:10, 4 January 2013 diff hist +12 Assault rifle →1940s–early 1950s: Maschinenkarabiner, Sturmgewehr & AK-47: nobreak title
- 14:0614:06, 4 January 2013 diff hist −1 m Assault rifle →1930s: Automatic intermediate weapons: led, not lead -- or is the latter correct British usage?
- 14:0314:03, 4 January 2013 diff hist −25 Assault rifle →1900s–1930s: Pre-Sturmgewehr Light automatic rifles: un red-link "full-powered"; also rework undiagrammable sentence. Too many commas result, but...; minor etc.
- 13:4313:43, 4 January 2013 diff hist +8 m Assault rifle →The changing face of infantry combat: wording
- 13:4113:41, 4 January 2013 diff hist +5 Assault rifle →The changing face of infantry combat: clarity
- 13:3913:39, 4 January 2013 diff hist +3 Assault rifle →Assault rifles vs. Assault weapons: If the sentence referred only to law the quotation marks might be optional.
- 13:2913:29, 4 January 2013 diff hist −1 m Assault rifle →Definition: remove inadvertent colon
- 13:2713:27, 4 January 2013 diff hist +25 Assault rifle →Definition: clarify "share designs" locution
- 13:2313:23, 4 January 2013 diff hist +1 m Assault rifle →Definition: supply missing quotation mark
- 13:2113:21, 4 January 2013 diff hist +33 Assault rifle clarify; it is not "confusion" to think that an "assault rifle", along with machine pistols, sub-machine guns, etc. are "assault weapons". Until 1994 they were the only things that were small-arms "assault weapons".
3 January 2013
- 03:2403:24, 3 January 2013 diff hist +11 m Martin Wallace (game designer) →Notable games: bluelink Discworld: Ankh-Morpork
26 December 2012
- 12:1512:15, 26 December 2012 diff hist −109 Discworld: Ankh-Morpork Remove ugly meaningless sentence (the rules and cards link in subtle ways with the characteristics of the characters depicted etc, but the removed sentence doesn't say that)
1 December 2012
- 23:2423:24, 1 December 2012 diff hist −22 m Radial tire →History: remove frag, undo some Brit English insertions
- 23:1723:17, 1 December 2012 diff hist −16 Radial tire Undid revision 523013164 by GSK (talk) not vandalism -- bicycle tires as well as automobile
6 November 2012
- 09:1009:10, 6 November 2012 diff hist −16 Bully pulpit Further delete inaccurate excrescences on actual meaning.
- 08:5908:59, 6 November 2012 diff hist −202 Bully pulpit e.g., Donald Trump has a bully pulpit simply by virtue of his being a media celebrity. No rank or authority is implied. Google the combo for examples of this usage.
29 October 2012
- 01:3201:32, 29 October 2012 diff hist −10 ABA–NBA merger →Virginia Squires struggle: figuratively, not "literally"
15 October 2012
- 00:5900:59, 15 October 2012 diff hist +38 Jerry West follow the blue link
20 September 2012
- 11:0711:07, 20 September 2012 diff hist +6 Milton J. Rosenberg →Radio Show: correct error ("12pm" is noon)
2 September 2012
- 23:0023:00, 2 September 2012 diff hist −52 Bonus Army rv
13 June 2012
- 13:4513:45, 13 June 2012 diff hist −8 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Public response: "he himself" ----> "he"
- 13:4013:40, 13 June 2012 diff hist −48 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Discovery evidence: tighten
- 13:3313:33, 13 June 2012 diff hist +57 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Pre-trial: bond
- 13:1413:14, 13 June 2012 diff hist +34 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Pre-trial: Correction. The only issue was detention, per the 4th Amendment. Had Herr ruled against PC GZ would have been OR'd, but prosecution would still have proceeded.(see Gerstein, SCOTUS '75)
- 12:4912:49, 13 June 2012 diff hist −20 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Prosecution's account of events: tighten
- 12:4412:44, 13 June 2012 diff hist +41 m Killing of Trayvon Martin →Charges: wikilink
- 12:4312:43, 13 June 2012 diff hist +4 m Information (formal criminal charge) wikilink
- 12:3412:34, 13 June 2012 diff hist −47 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Further investigation: Concatenate related parts of section, various minor undups.
- 12:1212:12, 13 June 2012 diff hist −65 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Further investigation: date, shorten
- 12:0412:04, 13 June 2012 diff hist −5 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Witness accounts: replace "perspectives"
- 09:1709:17, 13 June 2012 diff hist −19 Elizabeth Warren "Confirmed", without the question, is jarring. And the directory was two days later, and not because it was known but intentionally omitted from first story.
11 June 2012
- 18:3518:35, 11 June 2012 diff hist +356 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: AP: Penn, Rutgers & Texas.
- 18:1518:15, 11 June 2012 diff hist 0 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: relocate initial directory ref
- 17:1017:10, 11 June 2012 diff hist +213 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: 2011 too. nb: complete censuses not online after 2004.
- 16:4316:43, 11 June 2012 diff hist +127 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: relevant characteristic of directory is its use in hiring
- 11:5211:52, 11 June 2012 diff hist +18 Orson Welles →Mr. Arkadin: wikilink
- 02:4502:45, 11 June 2012 diff hist +62 Me and Orson Welles →Plot: clar.
- 02:4002:40, 11 June 2012 diff hist +16 Me and Orson Welles →Plot: catastrophe
- 02:3902:39, 11 June 2012 diff hist +26 Me and Orson Welles →Plot: Not at all clear that Welles is convinced of anything except that he shouldn't fire Junior.
- 01:2901:29, 11 June 2012 diff hist +5 Me and Orson Welles Not being shot in a crypt it wasn't shot IN the Isle of Man.
10 June 2012
- 00:1500:15, 10 June 2012 diff hist +2 Elizabeth Warren Undid revision 496762351 by Somedifferentstuff (talk)They reported it when they discovered it, which is to say, not initially.
8 June 2012
- 15:4815:48, 8 June 2012 diff hist −21 Elizabeth Warren Undid revision 496520997 by Skydiver99 (talk) too complicated a question for this simple assertion
- 15:1315:13, 8 June 2012 diff hist +1 Elizabeth Warren Undid revision 496561643 by Somedifferentstuff (talk) undo restoration of copyvio (see Binksternet edit 16:02, 5 June 2012)
- 15:0415:04, 8 June 2012 diff hist +7 Elizabeth Warren Undid revision 496557750 by Somedifferentstuff (talk) It's not non-neutral to note that the Herald didn't initially know this.
7 June 2012
- 09:2009:20, 7 June 2012 diff hist +6 Elizabeth Warren →2012 US Senate run: radio
- 08:5708:57, 7 June 2012 diff hist +129 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: support:"others have questioned her motives":"issue [is]truthfulness and willingness to grab spoils..."
- 08:2508:25, 7 June 2012 diff hist +117 Elizabeth Warren →2012 US Senate run: fix, more
- 08:1908:19, 7 June 2012 diff hist +308 Elizabeth Warren →2012 US Senate run: debates
- 05:3705:37, 7 June 2012 diff hist −681 m Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: fix edit
- 05:3505:35, 7 June 2012 diff hist +1,918 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: restore contradiction of Warren by Rey
- 05:2305:23, 7 June 2012 diff hist −38 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: context for claim
- 05:1305:13, 7 June 2012 diff hist 0 Elizabeth Warren restore Cherokee section to sub-section status
- 01:2701:27, 7 June 2012 diff hist +16 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: Again, there is no excuse for incompleteness. We can mention, or go into details. Omission is not an option.
- 01:2201:22, 7 June 2012 diff hist +8 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: should not appear to be an exhaustive list - it's not
- 01:1801:18, 7 June 2012 diff hist +19 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: The date April 26 establishes the beginning of the controversy.
5 June 2012
- 16:2216:22, 5 June 2012 diff hist +82 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: better?
- 16:0716:07, 5 June 2012 diff hist −147 Elizabeth Warren →Cher...: "... reports that she may have initially said that she was not aware that she had been listed..."? See "...read it in the Boston Herald."
- 15:5415:54, 5 June 2012 diff hist +81 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: restore stealth deletion -- comment is, as I noted before, in the source
- 14:4014:40, 5 June 2012 diff hist +171 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: further RS support for significance of story
- 13:4813:48, 5 June 2012 diff hist −15 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: careful not to exhibit whiff of doubt
- 13:4513:45, 5 June 2012 diff hist +109 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: But Ray says he didn't do it.
- 13:3413:34, 5 June 2012 diff hist +19 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: clar.
- 13:3113:31, 5 June 2012 diff hist +107 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: missing ref
- 13:1413:14, 5 June 2012 diff hist 0 m Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: sp
- 13:1113:11, 5 June 2012 diff hist +91 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: need his actual conclusion, not just his complaint about difficulty of task
- 12:5612:56, 5 June 2012 diff hist +134 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy
- 12:4412:44, 5 June 2012 diff hist 0 m Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: sp
- 12:4112:41, 5 June 2012 diff hist +328 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: date and credit start of controversy
- 11:2111:21, 5 June 2012 diff hist +191 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: Common heritage never came up?
- 08:3808:38, 5 June 2012 diff hist +111 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: clar.
- 07:5607:56, 5 June 2012 diff hist +299 Elizabeth Warren Undid revision 495961444 by Nomoskedasticity (talk) Restore WaPo's judgement as to the significance of issue, and EW's performance,twice winning her WaPo's "Worst Week"award.
- 07:5007:50, 5 June 2012 diff hist −59 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: June
3 June 2012
- 08:1608:16, 3 June 2012 diff hist +565 Elizabeth Warren →2012 US Senate run: recd nom of convention
- 07:4507:45, 3 June 2012 diff hist −139 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: if it was notable, I missed it
2 June 2012
- 21:1921:19, 2 June 2012 diff hist −1,093 Elizabeth Warren Undid revision 495669830 by Nomoskedasticity (talk) unencyclopedic self-puffery
- 21:1721:17, 2 June 2012 diff hist +212 Elizabeth Warren →Consumer Financial Protection Bureau: unprecidented, and still a legal issue
1 June 2012
- 17:4017:40, 1 June 2012 diff hist +1 m Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: fix ref
- 17:3817:38, 1 June 2012 diff hist +103 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: The source explicitly notes this problem with her story.
- 17:2417:24, 1 June 2012 diff hist +82 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: " meaning whoever is listed as a Native American told the school of their tribal lineage", per source.
- 17:2017:20, 1 June 2012 diff hist +280 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: still listed 2011
- 17:1017:10, 1 June 2012 diff hist −49 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: The directory does not specify which minority a professor is.
- 15:4415:44, 1 June 2012 diff hist −426 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: (probably 72% of)600 not 200.Cite Suffolk.Remove insignificant (12 people) focus group.
- 15:1615:16, 1 June 2012 diff hist +285 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: Put to rest any contention that RS do not consider this a "major story".
31 May 2012
- 16:5616:56, 31 May 2012 diff hist +2 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: Again remove dup, xfer new material.
- 16:4616:46, 31 May 2012 diff hist +44 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: "more than" per DailyCaller, Cornsilk per blue link
- 16:2616:26, 31 May 2012 diff hist −138 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: remove duplicative sentence
- 16:2216:22, 31 May 2012 diff hist −50 Elizabeth Warren →Cherokee self-identification controversy: As I said, the prior wording is not in the sources, and I believe the NEHGS has denied any continuing effort, IIRC.
- 16:1616:16, 31 May 2012 diff hist +797 Elizabeth Warren →2012 US Senate run: Apparently she got hired without having to fill out the usual diversity paperwork. Or so she says.
- 15:3615:36, 31 May 2012 diff hist −33 m Elizabeth Warren →2012 US Senate run: Remove dup ref. None of these refs support preceeding sentence, btw, or are after NEHGS's backtracking.
- 13:3713:37, 31 May 2012 diff hist +92 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Audio editing by NBC: NBC6 apology
- 13:2213:22, 31 May 2012 diff hist +127 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Audio editing by NBC: no on-air correction
- 13:1213:12, 31 May 2012 diff hist +127 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Audio editing by NBC: three firings, Burnside a reporter
- 12:3312:33, 31 May 2012 diff hist +19 Killing of Trayvon Martin →"Stand your ground" laws: it's not the activity that's excepted.
- 12:2312:23, 31 May 2012 diff hist +1,194 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Misleading audio editing by NBC: More complicated than we had it. There is webpage coverup still unmentioned.
25 May 2012
- 04:0204:02, 25 May 2012 diff hist +25 Killing of Trayvon Martin Restore subject break. We're still missing the other NBC firing, of the Fla affiliate TV reporter who made an entirely different misleading edit. Anyone?
24 May 2012
- 09:0809:08, 24 May 2012 diff hist +56 Killing of Trayvon Martin →"Stand your ground" laws: Prev version confuses self-defence requirements with further SYG exemption from retreat.
- 07:3107:31, 24 May 2012 diff hist +472 Killing of Trayvon Martin Undid revision 494107873 by MastCell (talk) the embedded video is from Fox
- 06:1106:11, 24 May 2012 diff hist +115 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Surveillance video mistake: ABC/Gutman later went back to claiming that the video showed no evidence of injury to Z. I kid you not.
- 06:0506:05, 24 May 2012 diff hist −9 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Surveillance video: Actually the evidence dump showed the prosecution had Z's medical records very early.
22 May 2012
- 16:4416:44, 22 May 2012 diff hist +24 m Elizabeth Warren →2012 US Senate run: sp, etc.
- 16:3416:34, 22 May 2012 diff hist 0 m Elizabeth Warren →2012 US Senate run: "like I am"
- 16:3116:31, 22 May 2012 diff hist +95 Elizabeth Warren →2012 US Senate run: Nine times. Rewrite for style.
21 May 2012
- 03:4203:42, 21 May 2012 diff hist −43 Killing of Trayvon Martin "two hours" not in source, contradicted by cross examination during bail hearing when release was said to be past midnight (I had seen 10pm, but that's par for media course)
20 May 2012
- 13:5213:52, 20 May 2012 diff hist +6 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Zimmerman's February 2012 cell phone calls to police: ungarble sentence
19 May 2012
- 12:3312:33, 19 May 2012 diff hist −27 Killing of Trayvon Martin Undid revision 493312729 by Psalm84 (talk)"." The dispatcher asks him about meeting at the mailboxes" is not an improvement.
- 01:4001:40, 19 May 2012 diff hist −74 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Allegations against Zimmerman: tighten
18 May 2012
- 23:4523:45, 18 May 2012 diff hist −48 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Trayvon Martin: simplify
- 21:3421:34, 18 May 2012 diff hist −12 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Allegations against Zimmerman: rmv belt and/or suspenders
- 21:3121:31, 18 May 2012 diff hist +1 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Allegations against Zimmerman: misleadingly
- 21:2621:26, 18 May 2012 diff hist −31 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Public response: wake?
- 21:1521:15, 18 May 2012 diff hist +472 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Misleading Audio Editing by NBC: restore Geraldo quote
- 19:3819:38, 18 May 2012 diff hist +18 Killing of Trayvon Martin Undid revision 493238487 by DrPepper47 (talk) not FLA Trayvon - vandalism?
- 01:4201:42, 18 May 2012 diff hist −15 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Misuse of social media: "the effort" not in original, nor more than one white supremicist site mentioned
- 01:1701:17, 18 May 2012 diff hist +938 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Allegations against NBC: restore Mastcell's text; let a thousand flowers bloom (not that I won't work this over)
10 May 2012
- 07:4407:44, 10 May 2012 diff hist +4 Illinois v. Gates →Dissent: supply missing word
9 May 2012
- 00:2400:24, 9 May 2012 diff hist +370 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Prosecution's account of events: more to account than affadavit
8 May 2012
- 16:1216:12, 8 May 2012 diff hist +201 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Sanford police station: add substance to Wolfinger denial
- 04:3404:34, 8 May 2012 diff hist +3 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Initial coverage: "Initial" no longer seems appropriate
- 03:0003:00, 8 May 2012 diff hist −758 Killing of Trayvon Martin →George Zimmerman's account of events: undup ref
- 02:3402:34, 8 May 2012 diff hist −235 Killing of Trayvon Martin →George Zimmerman's account of events: tighten
- 01:5301:53, 8 May 2012 diff hist −127 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Sanford police station: rmv assertion in wp's voice that Sereno wanted manslaughter by moving "allegedly" from following sentence; other refactoring
- 01:1901:19, 8 May 2012 diff hist 0 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Witness accounts: but
7 May 2012
- 08:2708:27, 7 May 2012 diff hist +1,486 Killing of Trayvon Martin Undid revision 491117394 by MastCell (talk) no such consensus among editors of this article
- 07:0807:08, 7 May 2012 diff hist +1 m Killing of Trayvon Martin →George Zimmerman's account of events
6 May 2012
- 18:0218:02, 6 May 2012 diff hist −6 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Reporting on Zimmerman call to dispatcher: unuglify
- 17:5817:58, 6 May 2012 diff hist −33 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Adverse information from Zimmerman's and Martin's past history: tighten
- 17:4517:45, 6 May 2012 diff hist +323 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Surveillance video: This is carefully worded.O'Mara assumes that G not having requested or seen the records means the prosection hasn't,but that's not the pattern of G's answers.
- 17:3017:30, 6 May 2012 diff hist +160 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Adverse information from Zimmerman's and Martin's past history: The Herald recognizes that all three suspensions are adverse information. Why are we disagreeing with our RS?
- 11:5111:51, 6 May 2012 diff hist −1 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Allegations against the Sanford police: rmv extra space. NB: Need to add refused resignation, temporary replacements (two). Anyone?
- 11:4811:48, 6 May 2012 diff hist +584 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Public response: planning to expand supported text
- 09:3009:30, 6 May 2012 diff hist −24 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Initial coverage: no need to say "media reported" -- where else do we get this stuff?
- 09:2609:26, 6 May 2012 diff hist +69 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Initial coverage: All this re TM is true iaw RS, but citations need cleanup. In order for GZ to qualify for diversion violent felony resisting arrest needed to be reduced to nonviolent misdemeanor charge.
- 09:0909:09, 6 May 2012 diff hist +4 Killing of Trayvon Martin cn
3 May 2012
- 13:4713:47, 3 May 2012 diff hist −216 Killing of Trayvon Martin Wolfinger denies this, shouldn't be in the lede w/o denial, not important enough to devote space there to unravel this
2 May 2012
- 14:0514:05, 2 May 2012 diff hist +16 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Timeline of events: clarification -- Corey is also a SA, as well as SP.
- 13:1313:13, 2 May 2012 diff hist +673 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Reporting on Zimmerman call to dispatcher: Needs to be here. Since saying "coons" is media fantasy, alleged slur doesn't need to be in section on actual call.
- 12:5012:50, 2 May 2012 diff hist +989 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Public response: many, not just Dersh
- 09:5209:52, 2 May 2012 diff hist +170 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Deceptive photos of Martin and Zimmerman: fill out crit
- 09:3809:38, 2 May 2012 diff hist −1 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Deceptive photos of Martin and Zimmerman: more to the point...
- 03:0603:06, 2 May 2012 diff hist +672 Killing of Trayvon Martin Undid revision 490195181 by Miguel Escopeta (talk) We are not restricted from using primary sources in this way.Quoted by many secondary sources, anyway.
1 May 2012
- 11:5311:53, 1 May 2012 diff hist +111 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Public response: ditto
- 11:4211:42, 1 May 2012 diff hist +89 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Public response: ditto
- 11:2611:26, 1 May 2012 diff hist +92 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Public response: ditto
- 11:2211:22, 1 May 2012 diff hist +99 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Public response: more
- 11:1111:11, 1 May 2012 diff hist +233 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Public response: adding some direct refs
- 05:1905:19, 1 May 2012 diff hist +588 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Reporting on 9-1-1 calls: Not 911. Add Sowell to crit.
- 05:0105:01, 1 May 2012 diff hist +19 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Selective publication: "Selective publication" meaningless
- 03:4103:41, 1 May 2012 diff hist +369 Killing of Trayvon Martin Undid revision 490033322 by MastCell (talk) Nothing remotely relevant to BLP in the unremarkable text that was redacted.
- 01:2101:21, 1 May 2012 diff hist −20 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Initial coverage: actions weren't a crime w/o a conviction
30 April 2012
- 07:1207:12, 30 April 2012 diff hist +2 m Killing of Trayvon Martin →Timeline of events: possessive
- 07:0507:05, 30 April 2012 diff hist +472 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Against NBC: Allegations "Against NBC" (and others) more general than one edit.
- 04:0504:05, 30 April 2012 diff hist −21 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Initial coverage: Adjudication, not conviction. Also no cn for summary.
29 April 2012
- 09:0709:07, 29 April 2012 diff hist +45 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Against NBC: Disentangle the two supposedly separate incidents, iaw source. As yet unmentioned here are the print occurrances, and their correction by NBC6 w/out acknowledgement.
26 April 2012
- 12:3012:30, 26 April 2012 diff hist −118 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Pre-trial
24 April 2012
- 09:3209:32, 24 April 2012 diff hist −1 m Killing of Trayvon Martin →Zimmerman's role in the neighborhood watch: unbreak
- 09:3009:30, 24 April 2012 diff hist −1,157 Killing of Trayvon Martin remove dup or unimportant stuff in wrong section
23 April 2012
- 11:0411:04, 23 April 2012 diff hist −94 Killing of Trayvon Martin Delete the remainder of "RS" mistaken reporting. More fodder for the screwup section.
- 10:5510:55, 23 April 2012 diff hist −37 Killing of Trayvon Martin tighten
- 10:4610:46, 23 April 2012 diff hist −107 Killing of Trayvon Martin So, ABC screwed this up too, misinterpreting "manslaughter" CLASSIFICATION of/on the police report. Another item for the media-screw-up section.
- 00:3400:34, 23 April 2012 diff hist +41 m Killing of Trayvon Martin As I said... practically every ref we cite uses this locution. It was about two hours, and I'll restore that when I run across that again.
- 00:2000:20, 23 April 2012 diff hist +25 Killing of Trayvon Martin what is
- 00:1400:14, 23 April 2012 diff hist −38 Killing of Trayvon Martin tighten. Replace third person usage with second in account of Z's story.
22 April 2012
- 23:5123:51, 22 April 2012 diff hist −115 Killing of Trayvon Martin No RS for treating this as anything other than a fact. Claims based on police station video thoroughly debunked at this point.
- 23:2223:22, 22 April 2012 diff hist +130 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Public response: Don't misrepresent what he said.
- 23:0423:04, 22 April 2012 diff hist +29 Killing of Trayvon Martin response */ Undated. Contemporanety is an issue with TM and GZ images. Also "family photo"? Source does not support this, and I've seen allegation that hoodie was photoshopped (I'm not alleging this). Also nd GZ in perp suit, TM crimson sweeat.
- 13:5313:53, 22 April 2012 diff hist +22 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Public response: sigs not people, see talk
- 13:1413:14, 22 April 2012 diff hist +1 m Killing of Trayvon Martin comma
- 13:1213:12, 22 April 2012 diff hist +10 Killing of Trayvon Martin Two, actually. He was released just after 10pm. But I don't have the cite to hand. The locution "for hours" is used by many RS we've already cited, however.
- 13:0013:00, 22 April 2012 diff hist +26 Killing of Trayvon Martin undo deletion -- requested cites are in body of article summarized, need not also be in lede
- 12:5112:51, 22 April 2012 diff hist +8 Killing of Trayvon Martin →George Zimmerman: atty since quit
20 April 2012
- 21:5921:59, 20 April 2012 diff hist −1 m Killing of Trayvon Martin →Witness accounts: sp
- 21:4521:45, 20 April 2012 diff hist +220 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Witness accounts: Rewrote for better parallel. Not sure either belong HERE - "witnesses"? Should be somewhere, though. Moved to end of section. nb:Affadavit already reffed.
- 21:1121:11, 20 April 2012 diff hist −1 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Witness accounts: redux
- 21:0721:07, 20 April 2012 diff hist −14 Killing of Trayvon Martin Undid revision 488394047 by Andyvphil (talk) self revert. screwup.
- 21:0421:04, 20 April 2012 diff hist +14 m Killing of Trayvon Martin →Witness accounts: A not An
- 20:4120:41, 20 April 2012 diff hist −68 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Shooting: clean up ugly section lede
- 20:3020:30, 20 April 2012 diff hist −3 m Killing of Trayvon Martin →George Zimmerman's attorneys: extra "as"
- 20:2920:29, 20 April 2012 diff hist −520 Killing of Trayvon Martin →George Zimmerman's attorneys: compress this
- 19:5519:55, 20 April 2012 diff hist +7 m Killing of Trayvon Martin →Police: clarification
19 April 2012
- 13:3313:33, 19 April 2012 diff hist +2 m Killing of Trayvon Martin two posessives is correct
- 13:2613:26, 19 April 2012 diff hist −21 Killing of Trayvon Martin Call and following overlapped, not coterminous. Where TM was going, or continued to go after initial contact, is in dispute and is a complicated question best addressed in body of article, not lede.
- 02:3402:34, 19 April 2012 diff hist −520 Killing of Trayvon Martin Undid revision 488104880 by ProfJustice (talk) I believe you undid my edit inadvertently. "Better photo" doesn't describe what you did. If I'm wrong, please explain.
- 02:2202:22, 19 April 2012 diff hist −520 Killing of Trayvon Martin Have a better source for this detail than the mother of the 13-year-old. See "Police" section.
- 01:4601:46, 19 April 2012 diff hist +43 Killing of Trayvon Martin Was true as of source, needs to be said, pending developments. After all, his not being in custody is what the protests were about, more or less.
- 01:4301:43, 19 April 2012 diff hist −33 Killing of Trayvon Martin Clean up ugly sentence.
- 01:3701:37, 19 April 2012 diff hist +1 m Killing of Trayvon Martin tense
- 01:3601:36, 19 April 2012 diff hist −263 Killing of Trayvon Martin Gah. Can't leave the POV "was advised not to do so", so I'm deleting the excresences as well.
- 01:0201:02, 19 April 2012 diff hist +2 m Killing of Trayvon Martin sp. Just passing through this time, but... come on, folks, let's not transport unnecessary details into the lede. Let the body of the article carry its weight. Rewrite needed.
18 April 2012
- 11:3311:33, 18 April 2012 diff hist +6 Killing of Trayvon Martin Remove implication that SA involvement was communicated to mother.
- 11:2811:28, 18 April 2012 diff hist +161 Killing of Trayvon Martin a bit more info, rewriting
- 10:3110:31, 18 April 2012 diff hist +23 Killing of Trayvon Martin OK with biracial, but the fact that the father described the family as multiracial in no way contradicts that he said GZ was Hispanic., You munged up unrelated edits. Don't do that again.
- 09:2809:28, 18 April 2012 diff hist −35 Killing of Trayvon Martin Undid rev 487972712 I see it was changed this morning... By you. Over well founded objections by mult other editors. He self-ids as Hispanic (voter reg). His father says he's Hispanic. The NYTimes says he's "White Hispanic". NO source calla him MRA.
- 08:5408:54, 18 April 2012 diff hist −7 Killing of Trayvon Martin His father so identifies him. See WaPo "Who Is...". Or Peruvian-American? Mestizo? "Mixed" is -so- uninformative. "White Hispanc" ought to get a mention, with the accompanying derision of the NYT neologism... but not here.
- 08:2508:25, 18 April 2012 diff hist +1,257 Killing of Trayvon Martin Undid revision 487915835 by Isaidnoway (talk) try summary & bluelink
17 April 2012
- 19:2319:23, 17 April 2012 diff hist +314 Investigation of the death of Trayvon Martin →Zimmerman's call on Feb 26: Time to update this.
- 18:5518:55, 17 April 2012 diff hist +22 Investigation of the death of Trayvon Martin →Zimmerman's call on Feb 26: Why leave out Z's answer?
- 18:4818:48, 17 April 2012 diff hist +205 Killing of Trayvon Martin add State of Florida vs. George Zimmerman: Affidavit of probable cause
- 16:1716:17, 17 April 2012 diff hist −28 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Phone recordings: No Martin voice samples at all. Only one of the "experts" used a computer program, btw, the other just decided the voice was too young, using only his ears, to be Z, so the last sentence is a bit misleading.Won't fix it myself.
- 16:0316:03, 17 April 2012 diff hist +33 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Witness accounts: Clarify how she heard what she wasn't there to hear. Someone should add Z's father's contrary claim, btw, for balance.
- 15:5515:55, 17 April 2012 diff hist +14 Killing of Trayvon Martin →Zimmerman cell phone call to police: First sentence out of sequence and, anyway, inaccurate. The dispatcher never "recommended that he not take any action" with any such implied clarity. Also clarify the conversation about how to meet up.
26 February 2012
- 04:0204:02, 26 February 2012 diff hist +4 m Age of Empires Online →Development: wikilink
23 February 2012
- 14:0014:00, 23 February 2012 diff hist +25 Swiftboating →Objections: clarify usage
- 13:5913:59, 23 February 2012 diff hist −44 Swiftboating →Origin: nonexistant, undefined "many". attribute the weasel or give it up.
- 13:5613:56, 23 February 2012 diff hist +3 Swiftboating No edit summary
- 13:5413:54, 23 February 2012 diff hist +11 Swiftboating BLP vio.
- 13:5113:51, 23 February 2012 diff hist +13 Swiftboating per cite. Please refrain from OR.
- 13:4513:45, 23 February 2012 diff hist −732 Swiftboating →Objections: Don't ignore that I -told- you Gingrich was denying that "swiftboated" was an appropriate term, not accepting it. Looks very like you are being intentionally misleading.
- 10:5710:57, 23 February 2012 diff hist +241 Swiftboating hate term is off the mark.It redirects to hate speech,not what Tyrell means(he gives"McCarthism").More like 1984's"hate minute"is meant; add ref. to Wickham
- 10:0810:08, 23 February 2012 diff hist +362 Swiftboating →Origin: I think we're finally getting closer to reality.
- 09:5809:58, 23 February 2012 diff hist −44 Swiftboating →Origin: Not so common. In fact a Google for the phrase, and "swift", only found -this- article.
- 09:5109:51, 23 February 2012 diff hist −14 Swiftboating →Origin: The pdfs linked to are not the subject of the comparison of versions of reality, which is the ads.
- 05:2805:28, 23 February 2012 diff hist +18 m Swiftboating →Origin: copyedit
- 05:2705:27, 23 February 2012 diff hist +42 Swiftboating →Origin: Thanks for correction that Kerry's ad preceeded SBVT, despite opposite order of print.
- 05:2005:20, 23 February 2012 diff hist +164 Swiftboating →Origin: Better statement of context. Leaving POV "unsubtantiated" for now.Give Jake's no-hope way its chance.
- 04:3304:33, 23 February 2012 diff hist +11 Swiftboating →Origin: The part of speech that "swiftboating" is is not "Synonym".
- 03:0803:08, 23 February 2012 diff hist −123 Swiftboating →Objections: This part (53:43) of the answer to the 53:00 question is more relevant here than the earlier part.
- 02:1302:13, 23 February 2012 diff hist −5 Swiftboating →Objections: No reason to substitute for O'Neill's word.
21 February 2012
- 11:0211:02, 21 February 2012 diff hist +20 Swiftboating Reclaim specific on point of sentence.
- 10:5010:50, 21 February 2012 diff hist +24 Swiftboating →Origin: It's still unexplained why this clarification is controversial, so I'll restore it (again).
- 10:4610:46, 21 February 2012 diff hist +1 Swiftboating →Origin: Moving statement that SBVT was an org of Swifties back to before it became untrue (due to merger).
- 10:4210:42, 21 February 2012 diff hist +229 Swiftboating →Origin: Self revert.I see that this is ref for "unsubstantiated".For once, this is actually something the rfc is relevant to, even though it is opinion masquerading as fact.
- 10:2010:20, 21 February 2012 diff hist +16 Swiftboating →Origin: Again, removing the false implication that the comment was about the event and not the neologism. Read the ref.
- 10:1710:17, 21 February 2012 diff hist −116 Swiftboating →Origin: Ditto, unfortunately. IMHO the arguments by the critics of PBS are more on point than the responses, but there's nothing in here for this article.
- 10:0210:02, 21 February 2012 diff hist −229 Swiftboating →Origin: No content at this ref relevant to any text of this sentence, paragraph, or article.
- 09:4209:42, 21 February 2012 diff hist −84 Swiftboating →Objections: Read the source. Newell makes no such assertion about SBVT, just the penumbra of the 'word, irrespective of the justice of its original application, on which he does not opine..
- 09:3009:30, 21 February 2012 diff hist +22 Swiftboating BBC usage
- 09:2309:23, 21 February 2012 diff hist −2 m Swiftboating excise inadvertent copy frag
- 09:2209:22, 21 February 2012 diff hist +19 Swiftboating further support, if any was needed
- 09:0909:09, 21 February 2012 diff hist +67 Swiftboating If you want BRD you'll actually have to D. That involves saying what your specific objections are rather than merely that you disagree. See talk.
20 February 2012
- 09:2109:21, 20 February 2012 diff hist +67 Swiftboating The author of the clearly false and probably unintended implication in the lede that "swiftboating" is used (only) against the unfair or untrue having failed to correct it, despite notice, I will. Other improvements.
- 07:5907:59, 20 February 2012 diff hist +24 Swiftboating →Origin: "corrected"? Still nothing in Talk to indicate what your objection is to elucidating what "these versions" in the quote refers to, despite your 2RR on this paragraph.
19 February 2012
- 08:1708:17, 19 February 2012 diff hist +14 Swiftboating Printed, not examined, then. That was your reason for a wholesale revert? Don't like SB properly capped? "per Talk" seems false. Nothing there.
- 02:1802:18, 19 February 2012 diff hist +10 Swiftboating Undid revision 477566984. Delusions of ownership not unexpected.
18 February 2012
- 14:1114:11, 18 February 2012 diff hist +10 Swiftboating →Historical origins: clarify meaning of Factcheck sentence; see Talk
17 February 2012
- 16:5816:58, 17 February 2012 diff hist −778 m Swiftboating undup
- 16:5516:55, 17 February 2012 diff hist −8 m Swiftboating better
- 16:5416:54, 17 February 2012 diff hist +74 Swiftboating Can't be a "smear campaign" if not a falsehood (follow the blue link), and Factcheck says that is indeterminate. "Smear" is POV opinion inappropriate for Wikipedia voice.
- 09:1709:17, 17 February 2012 diff hist +1 m Swiftboating sp.
- 09:1609:16, 17 February 2012 diff hist −726 Swiftboating The FactCheck.org quote says the facts are in dispute. With RS undecided, -Wikipedia- calling the SBV campaign a smear is not NPOV.
19 October 2011
- 22:0122:01, 19 October 2011 diff hist −23 CD-RW correct unintelligibility
8 August 2011
- 08:4408:44, 8 August 2011 diff hist +4 m All Creatures Great and Small (1978 TV series) →Cast: bluelink
- 08:3508:35, 8 August 2011 diff hist −11 Carol Drinkwater →External links: fix deadlink
12 October 2010
- 05:5705:57, 12 October 2010 diff hist +257 Peter Berkowitz Mention GMU professorship
17 September 2010
- 02:2002:20, 17 September 2010 diff hist 0 Jim Jeffords →Retirement: Correct time order, if you want to mention Douglas at all here.
- 02:1602:16, 17 September 2010 diff hist −26 Jim Jeffords →Retirement: NPOV. Also clarity - wasn't he "serving" as VT AG? 40 yr in elected office, not 32, but some felt disserved, no doubt.
14 August 2010
- 00:2800:28, 14 August 2010 diff hist +31 Rich Barton Zillow was entrepreneurial, I guess. Expedia, not so much. In this case the description seems a bit puffery.
- 00:1400:14, 14 August 2010 diff hist +18 Zillow clarification to remove implication that they were "founders" as in "entrepreneurs"
- 00:0900:09, 14 August 2010 diff hist −26 Zillow seems reasonably npov
- 00:0700:07, 14 August 2010 diff hist +8 m Zillow →Critique of Zestimate accuracy: fix cite I just misplaced, restore {{fact}}
13 August 2010
- 23:5623:56, 13 August 2010 diff hist +55 Zillow →Critique of Zestimate accuracy: supply pdf of FTC letter to NCRC
- 23:1123:11, 13 August 2010 diff hist +98 Zillow add later cite showing resolution of AZ complaint
- 23:0623:06, 13 August 2010 diff hist +10 Zillow Nb: The NCRC pdf has disappeared from its site after the redlining complaint was dropped. It is true that Zestimates' accuracy is disparaged, particularly by industry protection partisans.
- 22:5122:51, 13 August 2010 diff hist +8 Zillow It was never convicted, even before Napolitano signed AZ senate bill 1291 specifically exempting AVMs like Zestimate.
- 22:4722:47, 13 August 2010 diff hist −9 m Zillow No connection between elements in sentence.
30 July 2010
- 11:1211:12, 30 July 2010 diff hist −35 L. Wayne Gertmenian Jockeys' Guild material was poorly written, but it was widely in RS. E.g.,see http://articles.latimes.com/keyword/jockeys-guild. Article needs work, but notability of subject is a non-issue.
- 10:5010:50, 30 July 2010 diff hist +2 m Jockeys' Guild →Presidents: fix link
31 May 2010
- 02:0002:00, 31 May 2010 diff hist +589 Beautiful Blue Eyes →Plot
8 April 2010
- 08:4908:49, 8 April 2010 diff hist +3 Walt Bellamy →External links: fix dead link
- 08:4308:43, 8 April 2010 diff hist +1 Cornell Green (defensive back) →Playing career: Waaay before the Bulls.
- 08:3308:33, 8 April 2010 diff hist +74 Tom Gugliotta replace last year stats with career info
- 07:2307:23, 8 April 2010 diff hist +48 Robert Traylor add latest team
31 October 2009
- 01:1801:18, 31 October 2009 diff hist +216 SAP Ariba →Past acquisitions and competitors: Partially source Procuri
- 01:1601:16, 31 October 2009 diff hist +431 SAP Ariba →Past acquisitions and competitors: Add Agile
23 September 2009
- 09:2509:25, 23 September 2009 diff hist +244 Shelter Cove, Pacifica, California dead link still available here, at least for now.
15 September 2009
- 07:4007:40, 15 September 2009 diff hist +9 Odalisque →Status: clarify here, without jump
5 September 2009
- 23:2723:27, 5 September 2009 diff hist −21 The Missouri Breaks →Production: The ref only alleges one specific instance of animal cruelty (the tripwire). The death and other injuries are not there alleged to be due to a.c.
- 23:0823:08, 5 September 2009 diff hist −51 The Missouri Breaks →Plot: rmv misspelled, minimally sensible phrase.
13 July 2009
- 06:1106:11, 13 July 2009 diff hist +3 John Bowker (baseball) →Major League career
- 05:5805:58, 13 July 2009 diff hist −196 John Bowker (baseball) →Minor League career: Obsolete and unintelligible.
28 May 2009
- 09:0609:06, 28 May 2009 diff hist +121 Joe Biden →Family and early political career: Restoring the significance of this note about the truck driver, according to both sources. Otherwise meaningless.
24 May 2009
- 01:1601:16, 24 May 2009 diff hist +55 Cheryl Burke Dance ref
- 01:1301:13, 24 May 2009 diff hist +22 Cheryl Burke Dance →Distinguished clients
- 01:0501:05, 24 May 2009 diff hist +2 Cheryl Burke Dance ibid
- 01:0301:03, 24 May 2009 diff hist +46 Cheryl Burke Dance add Laguna Niguel (per her website)
- 00:5400:54, 24 May 2009 diff hist −32 Cheryl Burke stale tag. article still needs work, tho.
- 00:5300:53, 24 May 2009 diff hist +45 Cheryl Burke →Company: at Metronome site, which definately locates it for SF area ballroom & swing dancers
- 00:4800:48, 24 May 2009 diff hist +64 Cheryl Burke →Company: per her website
- 00:4600:46, 24 May 2009 diff hist +10 Cheryl Burke →Company: latin is a division of competition ballroom (the other is smooth); salsa is not a dance in ballroom competition
- 00:3200:32, 24 May 2009 diff hist −4 Cheryl Burke better section
- 00:2900:29, 24 May 2009 diff hist −28 Cheryl Burke →Company: One hopes so, but it's not an encyclopedic assertion.
- 00:2500:25, 24 May 2009 diff hist 0 Cheryl Burke not a proper noun
23 May 2009
- 22:1922:19, 23 May 2009 diff hist −7 Sasha Grey →Adult career: See, e.g., http://www.sfgate.com/cgi-bin/article.cgi?f=/c/a/2009/05/21/NSBD17NL54.DTL. Relevant, but needs development.
11 May 2009
- 04:5404:54, 11 May 2009 diff hist +14 Ron Behagen JuCo xfer iaw SI article
- 04:4404:44, 11 May 2009 diff hist +69 Ron Behagen →Brawl with Ohio State: Correct description of Taylor-Witte. Add ref.
- 04:3604:36, 11 May 2009 diff hist +116 Bill Musselman →University of Minnesota (NCAA): blue-link Behagen, ref the brawl
8 April 2009
- 00:3200:32, 8 April 2009 diff hist +123 Juan Marichal →Playing career: Context for "incredible" stat.
7 April 2009
- 00:4400:44, 7 April 2009 diff hist +93 Jay Vincent brother, q.v.
4 April 2009
- 06:5206:52, 4 April 2009 diff hist −47 The Painted Veil (2006 film) →Plot: Add cook. And Colonel Yu is both anti-foreigner and anti-warlord -- there is no reason to think his faction is either.
- 06:3806:38, 4 April 2009 diff hist −61 The Painted Veil (2006 film) →Plot: nothing in film to justify "jaded" or "opulent"--this is irrelevant anticolonialist politics masquerading as description
23 March 2009
- 20:1220:12, 23 March 2009 diff hist +22 Stopping power →Overpenetration: Give some meaning to this otherwise uninformative observation, i.e. that the bigger bullet penetrates less (it's slower).
- 09:4709:47, 23 March 2009 diff hist +1 Steel Panthers →Series history: The colon goes here (I'm looking at the box & manual as I write this)
18 March 2009
- 23:1423:14, 18 March 2009 diff hist −13 Splashtop OS →Other products featuring Splashtop: equivalent, but less awkward
- 22:5622:56, 18 March 2009 diff hist −1 Asus Eee →Eee PC Media Server: tense
- 22:5622:56, 18 March 2009 diff hist +1 Asus Eee →Eee Keyboard: grammar
- 22:5522:55, 18 March 2009 diff hist +1 Asus Eee →Eee Top: space
- 22:5222:52, 18 March 2009 diff hist +36 Asus Eee →Eee Top: Clarifying -- many more know what Linux is than Splashtop.
2 March 2009
- 10:5910:59, 2 March 2009 diff hist +7 Scan-Line Interleave →Criticism: reads slightly better
23 February 2009
- 14:1414:14, 23 February 2009 diff hist +15 The Element of Crime →External links
- 14:1314:13, 23 February 2009 diff hist +60 The Element of Crime →Style: ref
- 13:5513:55, 23 February 2009 diff hist +1 The Element of Crime →Style: plural
- 13:5313:53, 23 February 2009 diff hist +148 The Element of Crime →Synopsis: It's a dream, not real, Europe.
- 13:3413:34, 23 February 2009 diff hist −2 Me Me Lai iaw Wikipedia entry for film
2 February 2009
- 10:0010:00, 2 February 2009 diff hist −4 The Wrestler (2008 film) →Plot: "deliberately" is definately the wrong word, the mental state is anger,shame & despair, not deliberative
- 09:5409:54, 2 February 2009 diff hist +5 The Wrestler (2008 film) →Plot: beachfront, not waterfront
- 09:0609:06, 2 February 2009 diff hist −55 Hardcore wrestling remove weasel
- 09:0309:03, 2 February 2009 diff hist −9 Hardcore wrestling not sure about truth content of this sentence, but "sound contrast" had to go
- 08:5908:59, 2 February 2009 diff hist +2 The Wrestler (2008 film) →Plot: better
1 February 2009
- 02:0102:01, 1 February 2009 diff hist +11 Life Is a Grave & I Dig It! →Performers: see link
31 January 2009
- 14:1814:18, 31 January 2009 diff hist −11 Human sacrifice in Aztec culture →The nutritional explanation: Availability of veg protein does not "completely" refute value of animal protein as a reward, merely its necessity.
- 14:0214:02, 31 January 2009 diff hist −2 Cannibalism in the Americas →Controversy: misuse of "purport"
12 January 2009
- 10:0710:07, 12 January 2009 diff hist +5 Avalon Arthur gets Excalibur long before Camlann, and order of mention should reflect this
- 10:0010:00, 12 January 2009 diff hist −43 Mordred →Mordred in later works: removing some of the infelicities
28 December 2008
- 22:0322:03, 28 December 2008 diff hist −34 Drexel Burnham Lambert →Early history: better paragraphing
- 22:0022:00, 28 December 2008 diff hist +27 Drexel Burnham Lambert →Early history: Supply missing date per history of New Street Capital already cited
- 20:1420:14, 28 December 2008 diff hist +6 Peter J. Wallison →Career: 1999 per "Contributors" section of "Serving Two Masters", q.v.
- 20:1020:10, 28 December 2008 diff hist −113 Peter J. Wallison →Writings: dups following line
- 20:0520:05, 28 December 2008 diff hist +48 Peter J. Wallison →Career
5 October 2008
- 13:1313:13, 5 October 2008 diff hist −693 Angel Heart →Themes: Confirmed my dubiousness about this at the IMDb FAQ http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0092563/faq#.2.1.1 "Who is the person under the black hood?" Sure looked like DeNiro to me!
- 12:5412:54, 5 October 2008 diff hist 0 Angel Heart →Themes: Clarifying & correcting. Actually only Lucifer himself offers Angel money.
- 12:5012:50, 5 October 2008 diff hist −109 Angel Heart →Themes: redundancy
- 12:4912:49, 5 October 2008 diff hist +18 Angel Heart →Themes: clarifying -- Angel didn't open it when he saw it the first time.
- 12:4812:48, 5 October 2008 diff hist 0 m Angel Heart →Themes: sp
- 12:4712:47, 5 October 2008 diff hist −52 Angel Heart →Themes: Better,but I'm not sure about this paragraph.When Angel nearly touches the figure but is attacked&chased from the black NY church,is that a"dream"?Why?Same question re last appearance.
- 12:3112:31, 5 October 2008 diff hist −6 m Angel Heart →Plot: remove detritis
- 12:3012:30, 5 October 2008 diff hist +5 m Angel Heart →Plot: tense
- 12:2912:29, 5 October 2008 diff hist −302 Angel Heart →Plot: various corrections, tightening, additional material.
- 11:4511:45, 5 October 2008 diff hist −9 Angel Heart Not randomly.Angel selected for same age as Favorite, whose birthday is Valentine's Day,2/14/18.Angel's dog tags show that date,I think,despite earlier conversation w/Rampling implying otherwise.
30 July 2008
- 12:1612:16, 30 July 2008 diff hist −6 Oldboy (2003 film) →Plot: Mi-do finds him, not vice versa.
- 12:1112:11, 30 July 2008 diff hist +19 Oldboy (2003 film) →Plot: oops, left this out.
- 12:1112:11, 30 July 2008 diff hist +48 Oldboy (2003 film) →Plot: Sequence is still wrong -- big battle with guards is before Woo-jin's specified conversation with Dae-su. Someone else please fix.
- 12:0212:02, 30 July 2008 diff hist +7 Oldboy (2003 film) →Plot: Well, he has contact with his keeper's leg, but this is better than it was.
- 11:5911:59, 30 July 2008 diff hist +187 Oldboy (2003 film) →Plot: The version I saw on Comcast didn't specify what happened in the elevator, probably a cut.
- 11:3711:37, 30 July 2008 diff hist −172 Oldboy (2003 film) →Plot: Suicide? Resigned? He is punching the wall to toughen his hands, not shadowboxing. And I believe those are wires under his skin, not tattoos, but I won't fix that.
6 June 2008
- 13:0613:06, 6 June 2008 diff hist +866 Barack Obama undo deletions performed by edit warring hagiographers
5 June 2008
- 23:2423:24, 5 June 2008 diff hist +705 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: Claim that there is consensus to omit Ayers from this article is bogus.
- 12:5612:56, 5 June 2008 diff hist +705 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: revert "bold" deletion of Ayers
4 June 2008
- 15:5415:54, 4 June 2008 diff hist +199 Barack Obama Equating bombing with radicalism is offensive to radicals, such as myself.
- 14:3214:32, 4 June 2008 diff hist +190 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: bit more specificity
- 14:0614:06, 4 June 2008 diff hist +76 Presumptive nominee E.g., serious illness or death or scandal sufficient to cause Obama's superdelegates to change declarations.
2 June 2008
- 10:5410:54, 2 June 2008 diff hist +66 Bill Ayers 2008 presidential election controversy here's one
- 10:3810:38, 2 June 2008 diff hist +549 Bill Ayers 2008 presidential election controversy Dohrn, again
- 10:3610:36, 2 June 2008 diff hist +586 Bill Ayers 2008 presidential election controversy undoing inadvertent restoration of Bloomberg
- 10:3310:33, 2 June 2008 diff hist +58 Bill Ayers 2008 presidential election controversy Add Dohrn
- 10:2810:28, 2 June 2008 diff hist −644 Bill Ayers 2008 presidential election controversy The connections are undisputed, only the significance is at issue
- 10:2610:26, 2 June 2008 diff hist −490 Bill Ayers 2008 presidential election controversy As I said, the Bloomberg cite DOESN'T QUOTE CLINTON SAYING ANYTHING ABOUT AYERS!! Read it.
- 08:5208:52, 2 June 2008 diff hist +28 Jeremiah Wright controversy →Obama resigns from Wright's church: Per TUCC's website, Wright still heads pastoral staff, even if Moss has taken over the day-to-day duties.
- 08:4308:43, 2 June 2008 diff hist +19 Jeremiah Wright controversy It began much earlier, no later than the Kantor articles.
- 08:0608:06, 2 June 2008 diff hist +36 Bill Ayers 2008 presidential election controversy don't omit the fact that Kinsley thinks the judgement IS terrible, even if not an outlier
- 08:0008:00, 2 June 2008 diff hist +591 Bill Ayers 2008 presidential election controversy Bloomberg cite doesn't quite support statement. But here is what was said in debate.
- 07:2107:21, 2 June 2008 diff hist −4 Bill Ayers 2008 presidential election controversy rmv confused tense
- 07:1907:19, 2 June 2008 diff hist −5 Bill Ayers 2008 presidential election controversy Remove weasel. Existance of connection is not controversal. Significance is the question.
1 June 2008
- 23:2523:25, 1 June 2008 diff hist +2,985 Barack Obama Restore section, specify meaning of "several".
- 14:4814:48, 1 June 2008 diff hist +2 Gretchen Carlson →History: fix link, now aspx not asp
- 13:0913:09, 1 June 2008 diff hist +4,785 Barack Obama restoration; improve cite for TUCC resignation
- 11:5211:52, 1 June 2008 diff hist +1 Barack Obama →Controversies over Ayers, Rezko and Wright
- 11:4811:48, 1 June 2008 diff hist +144 Barack Obama →Controversies over Ayers, Rezko and Wright: Part of what "radical activist" means.
- 11:3411:34, 1 June 2008 diff hist −26 Barack Obama →Controversies over Ayers, Rezko and Wright: Better description than "fundraiser".
- 11:3011:30, 1 June 2008 diff hist +31 Barack Obama →Controversies over Ayers, Rezko and Wright: refix redirect
- 11:2711:27, 1 June 2008 diff hist +4,529 Barack Obama →Controversies over Ayers, Rezko and Wright: restore material
- 11:2411:24, 1 June 2008 diff hist +102 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: Add subtitles, clarify that Pfleger has a different congregation
- 11:0811:08, 1 June 2008 diff hist +334 Barack Obama →State legislature: payday loan legislation
- 10:4510:45, 1 June 2008 diff hist +598 Ann Dunham →Religion: Obama's 2nd comment from same book, but not in part excerpt.ed by TIME.
23 May 2008
- 17:2917:29, 23 May 2008 diff hist +1,241 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: estore Ayers
- 15:3115:31, 23 May 2008 diff hist −6,048 Barack Obama rv rvt 214421028 by Modocc. Undo weasel, again.
- 15:3115:31, 23 May 2008 diff hist +6,286 Barack Obama Undid revision 214435958 by Loonymonkey (talk) restore material necessary for NPOV
- 13:4313:43, 23 May 2008 diff hist +92 Barack Obama →Early life and career: Ayers the bomber
- 12:5812:58, 23 May 2008 diff hist +146 Barack Obama rv weaselly revert 214358883 by Lulu of the Lotus-Eaters. Wright is an "activist", Ayers and Dohrn were terrorists, and since they -admit- to being bombers it's hardly libel to say so.
22 May 2008
- 16:3316:33, 22 May 2008 diff hist +98 Barack Obama →Early life and career: add cite
- 16:2816:28, 22 May 2008 diff hist +32 Barack Obama Ayers:“Everything was absolutely ideal on the day I bombed the Pentagon. The sky was blue. The birds were singing. And the bastards were finally going to get what was coming to them.” Google it.
- 15:0415:04, 22 May 2008 diff hist +98 Barack Obama Restore uncontroversial characterization of Ayers, add cite for 1st fundraiser. Don't understand "compromise" that hides reason for controversy behind blue link. Explain on talk page, please.
- 14:0614:06, 22 May 2008 diff hist +36 Barack Obama →Early life and career: why be obscure about why it drew scrutiny?
- 13:4413:44, 22 May 2008 diff hist −8 Barack Obama →Early life and career: remove expression of pov in Wikipedia's voice.
19 May 2008
- 20:1920:19, 19 May 2008 diff hist 0 John McCain →2008 presidential campaign: repl semicolon w/full stop.
- 20:1420:14, 19 May 2008 diff hist +14 John McCain →Remainder of third Senate term: 6 co-spon are listed
- 20:0920:09, 19 May 2008 diff hist +1 John McCain →2000 presidential campaign: disconnect logically unconnected parts of sentence
- 16:2216:22, 19 May 2008 diff hist −83 Semikhah Trim badly formed sentence, formerly claiming an imponderable. Presumably revivals of S also claim to have revived some of the powers.
- 16:1716:17, 19 May 2008 diff hist +13 Semikhah →Semicha in the Mishnah and Talmud: Later variations aren't necessarily less formal.
18 May 2008
- 23:2923:29, 18 May 2008 diff hist −4 Regnery Publishing →Author royalties: trim redundancy; citation request.
- 21:1221:12, 18 May 2008 diff hist +403 Regnery Publishing →Book subjects: Are we repeating nonsense without regard for truth, now?
16 May 2008
- 23:2923:29, 16 May 2008 diff hist +2,835 Bill Moyers Undid revision 212848271 by Ratel BLP is not a guarantee of hagiographic treatment. See WP:NPOV.
- 14:1714:17, 16 May 2008 diff hist +131 Bill Moyers →Kennedy and Johnson administrations: add cite
- 14:1414:14, 16 May 2008 diff hist +2,704 Bill Moyers →Kennedy and Johnson administrations: restore material, again
15 May 2008
- 22:3022:30, 15 May 2008 diff hist −164 FBI Name Check →Criticism and Controversy: rmv redundancy
- 22:2622:26, 15 May 2008 diff hist +19 Bill Moyers →Kennedy and Johnson administrations: improve characterization
- 22:2422:24, 15 May 2008 diff hist +5 m Bill Moyers →Kennedy and Johnson administrations: words that led off a chapter
- 22:2322:23, 15 May 2008 diff hist +2,956 Bill Moyers →Kennedy and Johnson administrations: Restore less hagiographic treatment of Moyer's involvement in improper request to FBI,somewhat rewritten.Also restore mention of Moyers role in Dem Convention.
14 May 2008
- 21:3321:33, 14 May 2008 diff hist −49 Bill Moyers →Kennedy and Johnson administrations: On the other hand, since I haven't seen Lasky's sourcing, I can live with just the footnote.
- 21:3021:30, 14 May 2008 diff hist +2,258 Bill Moyers Undid revision 212365249 by Ratel Undo censorship edit with joke summary and unfulfilled promises.
- 15:0315:03, 14 May 2008 diff hist +89 Bill Moyers Undid revision 212296936 by Osbojos Restore account of request as expressed by and properly attributed to Silberman. I'm also not seeing the "redundancy".
13 May 2008
- 15:5315:53, 13 May 2008 diff hist +1,462 Barack Obama →Personal life: restore Trinty
- 15:5315:53, 13 May 2008 diff hist +2,359 Barack Obama Restore Wright
- 14:4714:47, 13 May 2008 diff hist +591 Bill Moyers →Kennedy and Johnson administrations: add clarifying footnote
- 13:4013:40, 13 May 2008 diff hist +1,892 Bill Moyers Undid revision 212034214 by Abd Restore material under discussion and development. RfC can proceed with material in article.
12 May 2008
- 22:2722:27, 12 May 2008 diff hist +3,092 Barack Obama Undid revision 211969078 by Scjessey Strongly suggest you defend your personal attack on talk page, or apologize.
- 21:5121:51, 12 May 2008 diff hist +3,092 Barack Obama retore material deleted by the pro-hagiographs
- 19:3719:37, 12 May 2008 diff hist −1 m Bill Moyers align tense with "deceased"
- 13:4313:43, 12 May 2008 diff hist +1,214 Bill Moyers →Kennedy and Johnson administrations: Make explicit significance of Moyer's actions as LBJ aide to his bio
- 12:5112:51, 12 May 2008 diff hist +1,892 Bill Moyers Actually even the editor you WP:CANVASSed agreed the paragraph should be in, if properly sourced. Which I've demonstrated it is. Time to let the readership in on what you've kept secret.
- 09:3609:36, 12 May 2008 diff hist +1,892 Bill Moyers Undid revision 211764683 by Ratel Again restore text under discussion.
11 May 2008
- 22:5122:51, 11 May 2008 diff hist +1,892 Bill Moyers Restore text under consideration at RFC, remove misused template
- 18:3518:35, 11 May 2008 diff hist +1,462 Barack Obama Infobox says "Christian(United Church of Christ)", a denomination 99% white, Obama has noted.No reason to mislead except the partisan one.
10 May 2008
- 22:2622:26, 10 May 2008 diff hist +1,473 Barack Obama restore info about TUCC, plus Afrocentrism
- 20:2420:24, 10 May 2008 diff hist +1,233 Barack Obama Undid revision 211258604 by Scjessey restore characterization of religious strain unusual in UCC
- 20:0120:01, 10 May 2008 diff hist +2 Bill Moyers →Kennedy and Johnson administrations: undup "later"
- 09:3809:38, 10 May 2008 diff hist +2 m Bill Moyers →Kennedy and Johnson administrations: ce
- 09:3609:36, 10 May 2008 diff hist +98 Bill Moyers →Kennedy and Johnson administrations: The Church Committee didn't think it was trivial.
- 08:2508:25, 10 May 2008 diff hist +1,808 Bill Moyers Restore less opaque account of Moyers' as a channel to the FBI.
9 May 2008
- 22:5522:55, 9 May 2008 diff hist +2,328 Bill Moyers →Kennedy and Johnson administrations: Substitute other substantiation for Silberman's account of episode for text of S's quote of Moyers.
- 21:0321:03, 9 May 2008 diff hist −390 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: Remove duplicate info w/obsolete figure for donations.Xfer better version of cite.
- 20:5120:51, 9 May 2008 diff hist +44 Tony Rezko →Business history: Restore mention of Davis' connection to Obama.
- 20:4820:48, 9 May 2008 diff hist −21 Tony Rezko I guess template was deleted? Oh, well back to editing "first" section and changing the 1 to a 0 before going again....
- 20:4620:46, 9 May 2008 diff hist +20 m Tony Rezko useful template, ce
- 12:3812:38, 9 May 2008 diff hist +1,183 Barack Obama →Personal life: Obama's been a member of Trinity since 1992, not 1988.
- 12:2112:21, 9 May 2008 diff hist +286 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: Actual number is 1.11% -- Clinton got 50.557% of vote in Indiana w/99% reporting
- 07:3207:32, 9 May 2008 diff hist +2,156 Bill Moyers Restore accurate, fully cited version. Ratel: Minimum, you need to mention that S says he found memo by M.
8 May 2008
- 16:1516:15, 8 May 2008 diff hist +784 Bill Moyers Restoring non-erroneous version.Silberman did not testify about Moyers.He says Moyers called him after press discovered existance of memo.No record of S mentioning M in public until WSJ anecdote.
- 14:0214:02, 8 May 2008 diff hist +35 Bill Moyers →Public service: or disservice, as the case may be
- 13:5913:59, 8 May 2008 diff hist +2,068 Bill Moyers Restore Silberman's identification of Moyers as LBJ's channel to Hoover.
7 May 2008
- 16:0616:06, 7 May 2008 diff hist +177 Bill Moyers →Directions to Hoover to find homosexuals on Goldwater staff: mod per cite
- 15:5915:59, 7 May 2008 diff hist +1,891 Bill Moyers Restore NPOV account of fully cited Silberman allegation of unsurprising memo from Moyers (see talk)
6 May 2008
- 15:4315:43, 6 May 2008 diff hist −14 Bill Moyers →Directions to Hoover to find homosexuals on Goldwater staff: Novak doesn't actually report a denial of the memo.
- 15:3615:36, 6 May 2008 diff hist +1,905 Bill Moyers rv 210453354/Ratel[[WP:BLP]"If an allegation or incident is notable, relevant, and well-documented by reliable published sources,it belongs in the article-even if it's negative and the subject dislike
5 May 2008
- 16:5816:58, 5 May 2008 diff hist +1,905 Bill Moyers Undid revision 209721525 by Ratel Consensus can change. Rewrote.Corrected date.('75,not '74).
4 May 2008
- 14:3914:39, 4 May 2008 diff hist +81 Jeremiah Wright controversy →Subsequent Jeremiah Wright appearances: Any more prominent cites for this?
- 14:2214:22, 4 May 2008 diff hist +1 m Jeremiah Wright controversy →Media: ce
- 14:2114:21, 4 May 2008 diff hist −1 m Jeremiah Wright controversy →Media: ce
- 14:1914:19, 4 May 2008 diff hist +722 Jeremiah Wright controversy →Media: Walsh refutes Kogan, point by point
- 13:5213:52, 4 May 2008 diff hist −2 Bill Moyers →Kenneth Tomlinson: Not about Tomlinson. Also nd to add Getler on Moyers-Wright (http://www.pbs.org/ombudsman/2008/05/post_13.html)&Moyers' reply,Kurtz,etc.
- 13:3513:35, 4 May 2008 diff hist +121 Jeremiah Wright controversy →September 16, 2001: Partial transcript of Peck, 9/15/01.
- 12:3012:30, 4 May 2008 diff hist +323 Jeremiah Wright controversy →September 16, 2001: Only Malcolm X, not Peck, said anything about chickens.
- 12:0112:01, 4 May 2008 diff hist +1 m Jeremiah Wright controversy →September 16,2001: sp
- 12:0012:00, 4 May 2008 diff hist +1,435 Jeremiah Wright controversy →Controversial sermon excerpts: correct order of CG&G excerpts, per cite
- 12:0012:00, 4 May 2008 diff hist +15 Jeremiah Wright controversy rv revision 210085755 by 75.31.210.156 will get rid of section title entirely in a sec; false statements about Tuskegee & HIV are just that. See WP:FRINGE.
- 10:5310:53, 4 May 2008 diff hist +411 Jeremiah Wright controversy →HIV: Tuskegee falsehood
- 10:2510:25, 4 May 2008 diff hist −1 m A More Perfect Union (speech) →News media and pundits: rmv extra blank line
- 10:2410:24, 4 May 2008 diff hist +1,385 A More Perfect Union (speech) →News media and pundits: Add Krauthamer
- 09:3809:38, 4 May 2008 diff hist −8 A More Perfect Union (speech) →Initial response: response still underway
- 06:4606:46, 4 May 2008 diff hist +6 Jeremiah Wright controversy →Subsequent Jeremiah Wright appearances: assertion, not speculation
- 06:2006:20, 4 May 2008 diff hist +64 Jeremiah Wright controversy →Subsequent Jeremiah Wright appearances: link to Dowd's use of wackadoodle
- 05:5905:59, 4 May 2008 diff hist −1 m Jeremiah Wright controversy →Barack Obama: quote in quote gets single quote marks
- 01:0001:00, 4 May 2008 diff hist +3,475 Barack Obama undo disruptive edit
3 May 2008
- 14:4514:45, 3 May 2008 diff hist +46 Barack Obama →State legislature: better refect this particular cherry picked from "Obama’s crime votes are fodder for rivals"
- 14:1214:12, 3 May 2008 diff hist +3,429 Barack Obama Undid revision 209682911 by Scjessey restore ADA,Rezko land deal,Ayers,subsection headers(modified to not highlight Rezko)
2 May 2008
- 13:0113:01, 2 May 2008 diff hist +21 m Jeremiah Wright controversy {{Editintrosection}}
- 12:4312:43, 2 May 2008 diff hist +3,467 Barack Obama Undid revision 209580308 by Ubiq Restore ADA, Ayers, Lolo's religion, etc.
1 May 2008
- 23:2423:24, 1 May 2008 diff hist +3,467 Barack Obama undo various disimprovements
- 14:4114:41, 1 May 2008 diff hist +1,234 Barack Obama →Senate career: restore ADA
- 14:2914:29, 1 May 2008 diff hist +332 Barack Obama Restore Ayers,Rezko to section, w/cites.
- 14:1914:19, 1 May 2008 diff hist +1,168 Barack Obama →Personal life: In breaking w/Wright Obama said he joined Trinity in '92, not '88 when he heard Audacity sermon.Confirm, w/cite. Etc.
30 April 2008
- 12:5012:50, 30 April 2008 diff hist +8 Religious faith of George W. Bush "inordinate...harangues"?
- 11:0711:07, 30 April 2008 diff hist +74 Barack Obama →Senate career: restoring 2006,2005 (correcting earlier error)
- 10:4310:43, 30 April 2008 diff hist 0 m Barack Obama sp.
- 10:1210:12, 30 April 2008 diff hist +585 Barack Obama →Personal life: restore more informative treatment of Rezko deal
- 10:0010:00, 30 April 2008 diff hist +1,337 Barack Obama rv.revision 209189657 by Josiah Rowe. Restore information:TUCC's theology and size(corrected), stepfather's religion,actual NJ & ADA methodology.
29 April 2008
- 14:1014:10, 29 April 2008 diff hist +623 Barack Obama →Personal life: Not just in Nov 2006!
- 14:0514:05, 29 April 2008 diff hist +926 Barack Obama →Personal life: restore religion of stepfather, info on TUCC
- 14:0414:04, 29 April 2008 diff hist +92 Barack Obama Undid revision 208791625 by Bobblehead restore more informative version re ADA, NJ ratings
28 April 2008
- 12:3512:35, 28 April 2008 diff hist +195 Barack Obama →Senate career: Report NJ result at same level of specificity as ADA.
- 12:2012:20, 28 April 2008 diff hist +62 Barack Obama →Senate career: add cite
- 11:2311:23, 28 April 2008 diff hist −87 Barack Obama whoops
- 11:0911:09, 28 April 2008 diff hist +809 Barack Obama →Senate career: Restore ADA. Reaching a similar conclusion on a different basis is not "redundant"; rather it supplies confirmation.
- 06:4606:46, 28 April 2008 diff hist +530 Barack Obama →Personal life: TUCC BLT
- 06:3906:39, 28 April 2008 diff hist −13 Trinity United Church of Christ Undid revision 208700359 by Ewenss Obama's connection with Wright is not solely innuendo.
- 05:5505:55, 28 April 2008 diff hist −17 Barack Obama Undid revision 208685964 by Bobblehead rv restoration of falsehood "influenced"
- 03:3503:35, 28 April 2008 diff hist 0 Jeremiah Wright controversy MOS - refs follow puctuation
- 03:3303:33, 28 April 2008 diff hist +8 Jeremiah Wright controversy not any more, per cite
- 03:3203:32, 28 April 2008 diff hist +21 Jeremiah Wright controversy useful macro
- 02:5002:50, 28 April 2008 diff hist +65 John Stossel phrasing has gotten a bit weaselly - replace it with quote from cite.
- 02:4602:46, 28 April 2008 diff hist +21 John Stossel useful macro
- 01:1601:16, 28 April 2008 diff hist +32 Trinity United Church of Christ rewrite
- 01:1101:11, 28 April 2008 diff hist −115 Trinity United Church of Christ Replace several POV statements, inappropriate for Wikipedia's voice.
- 01:0501:05, 28 April 2008 diff hist +21 Barack Obama useful template
- 01:0101:01, 28 April 2008 diff hist +22 Barack Obama →Personal life: necessary clarification -- this is often misreported (eg, by Couric) -- perhaps because the Obama quote is misleading.
- 00:5600:56, 28 April 2008 diff hist −17 Barack Obama →Senate career: clarification
27 April 2008
- 12:1112:11, 27 April 2008 diff hist +342 Illinois Senate career of Barack Obama →State election: footnote results
- 12:0312:03, 27 April 2008 diff hist +468 Barack Obama Undid revision 208341413 by Grsz11 restore alternate POV to Obama's in describing his practice.See talk.
- 11:5811:58, 27 April 2008 diff hist +428 Barack Obama →State legislature: restore correct ref
- 11:5411:54, 27 April 2008 diff hist −3 Barack Obama →Senate career: Correct error (I fear my own, somewhere back in the revert wars on this paragraph).
26 April 2008
- 08:5708:57, 26 April 2008 diff hist +468 Barack Obama Undid revision 208197378 by Scjessey 2nd revert of 2nd revert
25 April 2008
- 15:0015:00, 25 April 2008 diff hist +468 Barack Obama Undid revision 208087567 by Scjessey Continued discussion doesn't require reverting to your preferred version.
- 14:2214:22, 25 April 2008 diff hist +6 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: expanding the quote makes it clear that it's an actual quote, not "scare quotes"
24 April 2008
- 16:0316:03, 24 April 2008 diff hist −6 Barack Obama →State legislature: unrepetitive
- 16:0116:01, 24 April 2008 diff hist +26 Barack Obama →State legislature: specifically
- 15:5815:58, 24 April 2008 diff hist +7 m Barack Obama →State legislature: ce
- 15:5715:57, 24 April 2008 diff hist +3 m Barack Obama →State legislature: ce
- 15:5515:55, 24 April 2008 diff hist +838 Barack Obama →State legislature: some tweaks to prev version.
- 15:3815:38, 24 April 2008 diff hist +380 Barack Obama →Early life and career: Supply Obama's description of his legal career as context for fuller description of it.
- 15:2315:23, 24 April 2008 diff hist +25 Barack Obama Rv revision 207847643 by Dachannien. Not hard to find transcript.Characterization of US past going back to evicting the Indians as "terrorism" is fundamental to reaction to video.
23 April 2008
- 13:0813:08, 23 April 2008 diff hist +88 Barack Obama →State leg: 'Cliff, I'm gonna make me a U.S. Senator.'..Jones appointed Obama sponsor of virtually every high-profile piece of legislation,angering many..who..had spent years championing the bills."
- 12:4712:47, 23 April 2008 diff hist +2 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: Actual, not "scare" quote.
- 12:4412:44, 23 April 2008 diff hist +23 Barack Obama Undid revision 207381505 by Grsz11 Obama told Jones he could make a Senator. If this cite doesn't make that point, I''ll add another is a sec.
- 12:4212:42, 23 April 2008 diff hist +1,409 Barack Obama Undid revision 207393724 by Josiah Rowe A paragraph each on first two campaigns is not undue weight.
- 12:4112:41, 23 April 2008 diff hist +280 Barack Obama Undid revision 207546603 by Grsz11 Makes perfect sense even w/o "civil rights lawyer" in lede. I don't object to latter, btw.
22 April 2008
- 15:4615:46, 22 April 2008 diff hist +23 Barack Obama →State legislature: clarification, per cite
- 15:4315:43, 22 April 2008 diff hist +1,409 Barack Obama →State legislature: Fuller treatment of 1st two races
- 15:3215:32, 22 April 2008 diff hist +280 Barack Obama →Early life and career: Restore info on unexpected scope of Obama's career as a "civil rights attorney".
21 April 2008
- 16:1916:19, 21 April 2008 diff hist −1,695 Barack Obama Undid revision 207141095 by Andyvphil self revert.
- 16:1416:14, 21 April 2008 diff hist +1,695 Barack Obama Undid revision 207140012 by Scjessey That last revert was your 4th, Scjessey. Also add winning white vote per Scott.
- 16:0816:08, 21 April 2008 diff hist +1,660 Barack Obama Undid revision 207138470 by Scjessey restore
- 15:2415:24, 21 April 2008 diff hist +79 Barack Obama →State legislature: Move factors to before result. Lose ref to Trotter's"white face"comment - he got insignificant votes.Still looking for less anodyne descrip of Rush on Obama.
- 15:0215:02, 21 April 2008 diff hist +10 Barack Obama →State legislature: OK, NPR says >2-1 too.
- 14:5914:59, 21 April 2008 diff hist +86 Barack Obama →State legislature: Add pre-recognition level per NPR; changed "more than 2-1" since AP says 62-31 & 2-1 is close enough.
- 14:4914:49, 21 April 2008 diff hist +76 Barack Obama →State legislature: Add AP. Intend to replace "sufficiently rooted..." after consulting other cites, so will be using this cite.Probably.
- 13:5013:50, 21 April 2008 diff hist −3 Barack Obama →Early life and career: fix, I hope
- 13:4813:48, 21 April 2008 diff hist +17 Barack Obama name New Republic article, which I intend to reference
- 13:3613:36, 21 April 2008 diff hist +1,294 Barack Obama restore material
- 08:5708:57, 21 April 2008 diff hist +130 Barack Obama →State legislature: background to unsucessful run for House
- 08:2708:27, 21 April 2008 diff hist +7 Barack Obama →State legislature: date
- 08:1208:12, 21 April 2008 diff hist +665 Barack Obama →State legislature: Fill out story of first run for office.
- 07:4907:49, 21 April 2008 diff hist +652 Alice Palmer (politician) No edit summary
- 07:0607:06, 21 April 2008 diff hist +257 Alice Palmer (politician) Add 2nd cite
- 01:3101:31, 21 April 2008 diff hist +388 Alice Palmer (politician) add cite
- 01:0101:01, 21 April 2008 diff hist +282 Barack Obama →Early life and career: restore info on nature of OB work at Davis,Miner
20 April 2008
- 09:2309:23, 20 April 2008 diff hist +81 Ann Dunham →Religion: Make the fib explicit.
- 08:5208:52, 20 April 2008 diff hist +563 Ann Dunham rv revision 206815811 by TheslB. She's dead. Everything about her is "was".But she wasn't a Christian when she met BO Sr.She was an atheist or agnostic. Jr is fibbing.
- 08:1408:14, 20 April 2008 diff hist +42 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Opinion polling: clarification
- 08:0808:08, 20 April 2008 diff hist +160 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Opinion polling: bit more precision.
- 07:3107:31, 20 April 2008 diff hist +16 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Pennsylvania: clarification
- 02:5802:58, 20 April 2008 diff hist +563 Ann Dunham Undid revision 206812059 by TheslB (talk) restore text. extremely misleading edit summary!
- 02:3402:34, 20 April 2008 diff hist −44 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Opinion polling: Updating. Loss of lead needs an explanatory cite, obviously.
19 April 2008
- 15:4515:45, 19 April 2008 diff hist +269 Barack Obama Undid revision 206701624 by Scjessey restore info on Obama's income.Income is biography.
- 15:0815:08, 19 April 2008 diff hist +12 Tony Rezko →External link: fix
- 15:0715:07, 19 April 2008 diff hist +197 Tony Rezko →External link: No text on trial in article yet - here are some links
- 14:5014:50, 19 April 2008 diff hist +240 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: Fixes, and more on Davis.
- 14:2414:24, 19 April 2008 diff hist +25 Barack Obama →Personal life: add '05
- 14:2214:22, 19 April 2008 diff hist +244 Barack Obama →Personal life: Add income tax return info
- 13:3413:34, 19 April 2008 diff hist +92 Barack Obama →Early life and career: move sentence on summer work, tighten a bit, restore babysitting suit and make point of "but" explicit.
- 13:0613:06, 19 April 2008 diff hist +4 Barack Obama →Early life and career: Tvoz: "but" is per source. "But...The rest of his time was spent...(not on civil rights)"
17 April 2008
- 16:1116:11, 17 April 2008 diff hist −1 Barack Obama Undid revision 206269423 by Scjessey not a problem.
- 16:1016:10, 17 April 2008 diff hist +162 Barack Obama Undid revision 206268431 by Scjessey Restore slumlord representation. See discussion of this point on FAR talk page. Nothing grat. about "also", either.
- 16:0216:02, 17 April 2008 diff hist −1 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: "23-year" is more informative
- 15:5715:57, 17 April 2008 diff hist +162 Barack Obama →Early life and career: restore slumlord representation
- 15:3315:33, 17 April 2008 diff hist +9 Barack Obama →Early life and career: subsequently
- 15:3215:32, 17 April 2008 diff hist +157 Barack Obama Undid revision 206250808 by Scjessey Restore slumlord representation, move teaching career back to nearer chrono.
16 April 2008
- 13:5413:54, 16 April 2008 diff hist +413 Barack Obama →Early life and career: As the LA Times says, "not all civil rights". Our examples of his work shouldn't all be civil rights either.
- 13:3313:33, 16 April 2008 diff hist +522 Barack Obama Undid revision 206010611 by Peephole restore examples
- 03:3703:37, 16 April 2008 diff hist +64 Barack Obama →Early life and career: He did take part in trials,including defending Davis' Woodlawn Preservation & Investment Corp.against low-income tenants who wanted heat.Didn't read about THAT in his bio.
- 03:2903:29, 16 April 2008 diff hist +58 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: Whether Miner left & returned to DMB&G when counsel, or was both partner & counsel for the period, is unclear. But firm wasn't CC. Add informative cite.
- 03:0203:02, 16 April 2008 diff hist +1 m Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: Fix name.
- 03:0003:00, 16 April 2008 diff hist +154 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: additional details & clarifications not found at main cite; eg Miner personally was Corp Counsel,iaw his page.
- 02:1902:19, 16 April 2008 diff hist 0 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: fix ref
- 02:1702:17, 16 April 2008 diff hist +79 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: Good cite for info on Davis-Rezko
- 00:1900:19, 16 April 2008 diff hist +33 Barack Obama →Early life and career: If you're going to move the POV tag to section headers, this is the hottest spot. Correct name has no commas and an ampersand. As I said, no inaccuracies.
15 April 2008
- 17:0317:03, 15 April 2008 diff hist +1,245 Barack Obama Undid revision 205822910 by Andyvphil recount. Actually not 3RR vio.
- 17:0017:00, 15 April 2008 diff hist −1,245 Barack Obama Undid revision 205822729 by Andyvphil self revert. 3RR.
- 17:0017:00, 15 April 2008 diff hist +1,245 Barack Obama rv revision 205814555 by Scjessey. When Obama worked there, that was the name.Davis later retired.Any other "inaccuracies"?RS don't agree with you on unimportance of Rezko.
- 16:1116:11, 15 April 2008 diff hist +1,245 Barack Obama Undid revision 205809795 by Scjessey restore more informative, completely accurate, version
- 15:5415:54, 15 April 2008 diff hist +1,245 Barack Obama →Early life and career: restore info on significance of Rezko
- 15:4715:47, 15 April 2008 diff hist −24 Barack Obama unaware of coi, but definately pov discussion is underway
- 15:4615:46, 15 April 2008 diff hist +49 Barack Obama Undid revision 205799388 by Grsz11 (talk)
- 15:4415:44, 15 April 2008 diff hist +48 Barack Obama Undid revision 205796511 by Grsz11 Yes we do. This characterization is accurate and cited. Yours is misleadingly meaningless.
- 14:5214:52, 15 April 2008 diff hist +48 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: Better characterize Wright's comments on 9/11, following ABC.
- 14:4814:48, 15 April 2008 diff hist +58 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Controversy surrounding Rev. Jeremiah Wright: Better characterization of Wright on 9/11, cited to ABC.
14 April 2008
- 23:1423:14, 14 April 2008 diff hist +4 A More Perfect Union (speech) →Politicians: Try NPOV. The POV that the speech was a attempt to change the subject,rather than "frank",should not be discounted in Wikipedia's voice.
- 23:0923:09, 14 April 2008 diff hist +16 Tony Rezko →Business history: If you insist. Need to cite it more explicityly, then.
- 13:2013:20, 14 April 2008 diff hist −69 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign Undid revision 205449264 by Scjessey don't misuse "m" tag
- 09:3009:30, 14 April 2008 diff hist +473 Tony Rezko "downscale Black" not POV and cited to Salon -- you don't get to change RS's meaning by changing its words. Also more on DMBG.
- 08:5708:57, 14 April 2008 diff hist +14 Barack Obama →Senate career: clarify
- 08:5508:55, 14 April 2008 diff hist +2,070 Barack Obama →Senate career: restore ratings
- 03:1603:16, 14 April 2008 diff hist +555 Barack Obama Undid revision 205477307 by Loonymonkey Your substantive objection is...?
- 02:5602:56, 14 April 2008 diff hist +555 Barack Obama →Early life and private career: It was Scjessey who didn't want Mahru. See talk. Read first cite, re charges.
- 01:5201:52, 14 April 2008 diff hist −12 Barack Obama →Early life and private career: DM owned half, but clout was Tony's job.
- 00:1400:14, 14 April 2008 diff hist −17 Barack Obama →State legislature: fix bug
13 April 2008
- 23:5723:57, 13 April 2008 diff hist +1,539 Barack Obama →State legislature: more restoration
- 23:4723:47, 13 April 2008 diff hist +1,321 Barack Obama →State legislature: restore deleted material
- 23:3823:38, 13 April 2008 diff hist +1,396 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Controversy surrounding Rev. Jeremiah Wright: xfer paragraph from main article, removing "questioning" falsehood. etc.
- 23:1023:10, 13 April 2008 diff hist +506 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Primary voting and Delegate count: Restore demographics, in a different place. Should be updated, of course.
- 12:4712:47, 13 April 2008 diff hist +242 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: Add bundled contrib to Blag total.
- 08:1608:16, 13 April 2008 diff hist +93 Barack Obama →Personal life: Sun-Times is a RS, Bobblehead is not.
- 00:5600:56, 13 April 2008 diff hist −15 Tony Rezko Undid revision 205207827 by 72.0.180.2 Can't find "black" or "downscale" at WTA
12 April 2008
- 23:4523:45, 12 April 2008 diff hist +93 Barack Obama →Personal life: "Prosecutors say Rezko ordered a business associate to use part of a kickback as a contribution to Obama's U.S. Senate campaign."
- 22:5822:58, 12 April 2008 diff hist +452 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: Restore Lanny Davis, who is not redundant of Kristol. "Brief" is misleading and uncited.
- 13:3313:33, 12 April 2008 diff hist +252 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: more numbers for Rezko's contributions at this cite.
- 13:2213:22, 12 April 2008 diff hist +96 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: another cite, this one with an exculpatory POV re Obama
- 13:1313:13, 12 April 2008 diff hist +85 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: Cite for $250k, which was a March 2008 revelation and couldn't have been in the existing earlier cites.
- 12:5912:59, 12 April 2008 diff hist +163 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: seed money for Obama 2004
- 12:4312:43, 12 April 2008 diff hist +43 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: also Ryan
- 12:4112:41, 12 April 2008 diff hist +71 Tony Rezko →Business history: 5 yr w/Ali
- 12:3812:38, 12 April 2008 diff hist +10 Tony Rezko →Early life and education: father a community leader, per cite
- 12:3812:38, 12 April 2008 diff hist +86 Tony Rezko →Business history: first Subway restaurant in Chicago.
- 12:3312:33, 12 April 2008 diff hist +21 Tony Rezko →Early life and education: per chicagomag
- 12:3112:31, 12 April 2008 diff hist +21 Tony Rezko →Early life and education: Not a Copt, which I had assumed...
- 12:2912:29, 12 April 2008 diff hist +16 m Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: name ref
- 12:2512:25, 12 April 2008 diff hist −114 Tony Rezko →External link: remove cited article from EL
- 12:2412:24, 12 April 2008 diff hist +427 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: Add wife's job.
- 12:1512:15, 12 April 2008 diff hist +4 m Tony Rezko →External link: ce
- 12:1512:15, 12 April 2008 diff hist +118 Tony Rezko →External link: Add announcement/summary of indictment to EL
- 10:4510:45, 12 April 2008 diff hist −2 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: "offensive"? Some, to some, certainly. But "offensive" is not a NPOV factual assertion, to be made in Wikipedia's voice.
- 10:3910:39, 12 April 2008 diff hist −17 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: "temporary"?
- 10:3510:35, 12 April 2008 diff hist +79 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: Add Lanny Davis to Kristol example
- 04:1004:10, 12 April 2008 diff hist −13 Tony Rezko Undid revision 205007323 by 72.0.180.2 Salon is politically correct enough for me.
11 April 2008
- 13:0713:07, 11 April 2008 diff hist +25 Tony Rezko rvt 72.0.180.2 You're not listening, or reading carefully.Sentence is about how he got in financial position to help HWashingtn BEFORE Muhammed took him into concessions biz.Will add clarifying"then".
- 11:1711:17, 11 April 2008 diff hist +98 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: ...dont leave the question so unspecified
- 08:3008:30, 11 April 2008 diff hist +23 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: This was removed with a misleading edit summary.
10 April 2008
- 23:3623:36, 10 April 2008 diff hist +37 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: replace inaccurate description of quote
- 13:5813:58, 10 April 2008 diff hist +38 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: Let's say what he actually said, not quote FOX's misrepresentation of what he said.
- 13:4513:45, 10 April 2008 diff hist +64 Tony Rezko →Business history: Rvt. Not uncited. See Salon article. Again,we are talking pre-'83 here. The concessions business was post-'83.Subsidized housing was later still.
9 April 2008
- 15:1915:19, 9 April 2008 diff hist −8 Barack Obama Undid revision 204465584 by Grsz11 whole article
- 15:1815:18, 9 April 2008 diff hist +916 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: right Wright
- 15:1115:11, 9 April 2008 diff hist −1 m Barack Obama →Senate career: ce
- 15:1015:10, 9 April 2008 diff hist +2,071 Barack Obama →Senate career: restore ratings
- 14:5914:59, 9 April 2008 diff hist +8 Barack Obama restore entirely appropriate POV tag "Please do not remove this message until the dispute is resolved." It isn't. Don't.
- 14:5814:58, 9 April 2008 diff hist +1,525 Barack Obama Undid revision 204445653 by Grsz11 replace version of Wright controversy that obscures nature of his remarks
8 April 2008
- 17:0417:04, 8 April 2008 diff hist +704 Jeremiah Wright Undid revision 204145881 by /C.m.jones| No, she's talking about both.Surely a significant contrib to his notability, given who she is and her current prominence.
- 16:5916:59, 8 April 2008 diff hist +10 Barack Obama →Personal life: clarify
- 16:5116:51, 8 April 2008 diff hist +916 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: restore nonobscurantist coverage of Wright controversy
- 16:4816:48, 8 April 2008 diff hist +8 Barack Obama restore POV tag
- 16:4716:47, 8 April 2008 diff hist +2,075 Barack Obama →Senate career: restore ratings
- 15:4715:47, 8 April 2008 diff hist +31 Tony Rezko rvt. "subsidized housing" scam wasn't until RezMar, '89+. "soon" refers to pre '83. Think, don't thimk.
7 April 2008
- 15:2815:28, 7 April 2008 diff hist +2,289 Barack Obama Undid revision 203978639 by Scjessey undo disimprovement, restore tag again
- 15:2015:20, 7 April 2008 diff hist −9 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: revise Obama's admission, per cite
- 15:1715:17, 7 April 2008 diff hist +103 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: add cite
- 13:3313:33, 7 April 2008 diff hist −1 m Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: ce
- 13:3313:33, 7 April 2008 diff hist +177 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: restore cite
- 13:3013:30, 7 April 2008 diff hist +1 Tony Rezko fix
- 13:2613:26, 7 April 2008 diff hist +656 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: restore HClinton's characterization of Rezko
- 13:2213:22, 7 April 2008 diff hist +31 Tony Rezko →Business history: per cite. subsidized housing was later.
- 13:1513:15, 7 April 2008 diff hist +1,926 Barack Obama →Senate career: restore alternative POVs to "rak and file" and "loyalist" characterizations
- 13:0013:00, 7 April 2008 diff hist +8 Barack Obama restore entirely appropriate POV tag "Please do not remove this message until the dispute is resolved." It isn't. Don't.
- 12:5912:59, 7 April 2008 diff hist +355 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: restore nonobscurantist coverage of Wright controversy
- 02:1202:12, 7 April 2008 diff hist +8 Barack Obama flag discussion in progress
- 02:1102:11, 7 April 2008 diff hist −25 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: restore meaningful treatment of Wright issue
6 April 2008
- 15:2915:29, 6 April 2008 diff hist +129 Tony Rezko referred to by Salon, no time for me to read this now
- 15:2615:26, 6 April 2008 diff hist +280 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: Rezko was across the street? Interesting. Too tired to rework this now.
- 15:1915:19, 6 April 2008 diff hist +72 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: blagovich donations
- 15:1715:17, 6 April 2008 diff hist +4 m Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: fix ref
- 15:1615:16, 6 April 2008 diff hist +14 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: Salon says Levine a Republican..
- 15:1015:10, 6 April 2008 diff hist −1 Tony Rezko another instance. gah.
- 15:0915:09, 6 April 2008 diff hist −1 m Tony Rezko minor ref fix
- 15:0715:07, 6 April 2008 diff hist +1 Tony Rezko fix again
- 15:0615:06, 6 April 2008 diff hist −12 Tony Rezko →Business history: try again
- 15:0615:06, 6 April 2008 diff hist +12 m Tony Rezko →Business history: fix
- 15:0215:02, 6 April 2008 diff hist −93 Tony Rezko →Business history: Novak-2 says gentrification development was turned to after 1998, so move it accordingly.
- 14:5414:54, 6 April 2008 diff hist +211 Tony Rezko →Business history: Rezko/Davis
- 14:4514:45, 6 April 2008 diff hist +254 Tony Rezko →Business history: more
- 14:3814:38, 6 April 2008 diff hist +315 Tony Rezko →Business history: details, details
- 14:3114:31, 6 April 2008 diff hist +445 Tony Rezko →Business history: pay the pols,farm the government. wow.
- 14:2414:24, 6 April 2008 diff hist +36 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: republicans
- 14:2214:22, 6 April 2008 diff hist +62 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: add mayors
- 14:2114:21, 6 April 2008 diff hist +4 Tony Rezko →Business history: wikilink
- 14:1614:16, 6 April 2008 diff hist +338 Tony Rezko →Business history: more on Rezmar
- 14:0914:09, 6 April 2008 diff hist +33 Tony Rezko →Business history: also parks
- 14:0714:07, 6 April 2008 diff hist +56 Tony Rezko →Business history: date joining CC: 1984
- 14:0114:01, 6 April 2008 diff hist +156 Tony Rezko →Business history: $100M
- 13:5713:57, 6 April 2008 diff hist +260 Tony Rezko →Early life and education: first jobs, new cite with more good stuff
- 13:4613:46, 6 April 2008 diff hist +113 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: date, context for strip purchase
- 13:3913:39, 6 April 2008 diff hist 0 m Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: ce
- 13:3813:38, 6 April 2008 diff hist +69 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: More realistic calculation of "net profit"
- 13:3413:34, 6 April 2008 diff hist −4 m Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: ce
- 13:3213:32, 6 April 2008 diff hist +8 m Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: ce
- 13:3013:30, 6 April 2008 diff hist +200 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: Elucidate sale, per cite. Have other cites tho, and will return to this.
- 13:1313:13, 6 April 2008 diff hist −267 m Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: undup ref
- 13:0413:04, 6 April 2008 diff hist +213 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: Dunno who the others are. Citation is solely to an Obama interview. Will return to this. Etc.
- 12:4312:43, 6 April 2008 diff hist +54 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: Davis,Miner dates
- 12:3712:37, 6 April 2008 diff hist +80 Tony Rezko →Business history: Rezmar details
- 12:3012:30, 6 April 2008 diff hist −4 m Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: lose some zeros
- 12:2912:29, 6 April 2008 diff hist +60 m Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: $43M
- 12:2512:25, 6 April 2008 diff hist +68 m Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: community groups
- 12:2112:21, 6 April 2008 diff hist +1 m Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: ce
- 12:1712:17, 6 April 2008 diff hist +752 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: Add Rezko connections to Obama prior to house.
- 11:5411:54, 6 April 2008 diff hist +8 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: oh, he's been accused all right
- 11:5211:52, 6 April 2008 diff hist −59 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: undup ref, wikilink
- 11:4911:49, 6 April 2008 diff hist −26 Tony Rezko →Business history: rewrite to match changed placement in section.
- 11:4611:46, 6 April 2008 diff hist 0 m Tony Rezko →Business history: ce
- 11:4611:46, 6 April 2008 diff hist +853 Tony Rezko →Business history: Fill in Muhammad connection
- 11:1111:11, 6 April 2008 diff hist +1 m Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: ce
- 11:1011:10, 6 April 2008 diff hist +97 Tony Rezko →Ties to politicians: reword, cite
- 10:5910:59, 6 April 2008 diff hist 0 m Tony Rezko →Business history: ce
- 10:5810:58, 6 April 2008 diff hist +68 Tony Rezko →Business history: extend, wikilink
- 10:5610:56, 6 April 2008 diff hist +145 Tony Rezko →Business history: more at this cite
5 April 2008
- 14:2214:22, 5 April 2008 diff hist +19 Tony Rezko →Early life and education: date is from the cite in last edit. Is in Trib article too?
- 14:1914:19, 5 April 2008 diff hist +356 Tony Rezko →Business history: pre-Rezmar
- 14:0014:00, 5 April 2008 diff hist −22 m Barack Obama →Early life and private career: ce
- 13:5813:58, 5 April 2008 diff hist +283 Barack Obama →Early life and private career: undo conflation of fundraising for Blagovich & Obama
- 13:5113:51, 5 April 2008 diff hist +8 Barack Obama restore entirely appropriate POV tag "Please do not remove this message until the dispute is resolved." It isn't. Don't.
- 13:4913:49, 5 April 2008 diff hist +335 Barack Obama →Personal life: restore info about controversial nature of land purchase
- 13:3413:34, 5 April 2008 diff hist +19 Tony Rezko →Fraud and extortion charges: wire fraud statement may be true, but is not in supplied cite
- 10:1910:19, 5 April 2008 diff hist +2 m Bryant Park Project →Overview: ce
4 April 2008
- 16:3116:31, 4 April 2008 diff hist +2,383 Barack Obama restore tag, Wright crit
- 16:1716:17, 4 April 2008 diff hist −11 Barack Obama →Early life and private career: Per cite. The five(not six) hours of work claimed in the campaign email is rejected by the RS (Sun-Times). "Unknown" is word used by cite.
- 15:5615:56, 4 April 2008 diff hist −1 m Barack Obama →Early life and private career: ce
- 15:4915:49, 4 April 2008 diff hist +155 Barack Obama →Personal life: Put some flesh on the nature of the controversy over house deals.
- 15:2315:23, 4 April 2008 diff hist −4 Barack Obama →Early life and private career: not just indicted, now
- 15:1215:12, 4 April 2008 diff hist +2,378 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: Replace absurd minimization of Wright issue.
- 14:4214:42, 4 April 2008 diff hist +19 Barack Obama →Senate career: better describe what was behind these characterizations.
- 14:3614:36, 4 April 2008 diff hist +8 Barack Obama Restore tag. See talk & FAR.
- 14:3414:34, 4 April 2008 diff hist +458 Barack Obama Undid revision 203291198 by Scjessey no consensus exists to fail to accurately identify Rezko or Davis.
2 April 2008
- 12:4612:46, 2 April 2008 diff hist −20 Israel lobby in the United States →Structure: Wikilink first appearance of MB's name.
31 March 2008
- 11:3111:31, 31 March 2008 diff hist +376 A More Perfect Union (speech) →News media and pundits: add VVervers
- 11:2511:25, 31 March 2008 diff hist +84 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Coverage of Obama's church and former pastor: Add CBS' poll of pre-speech impact.
- 10:1310:13, 31 March 2008 diff hist +547 A More Perfect Union (speech) →Politicians: Restoring Clinton's response. See talk.
30 March 2008
- 09:1309:13, 30 March 2008 diff hist +161 Merle Black Quoting cv not recommended, but this is a stub...
- 08:4408:44, 30 March 2008 diff hist +122 Merle Black further evidence for uncited assertion
- 08:3808:38, 30 March 2008 diff hist +11 Merle Black reflist
- 08:3708:37, 30 March 2008 diff hist +229 Merle Black uncited assertion, partially substantiated by this example.
- 08:3308:33, 30 March 2008 diff hist −3 Merle Black →External links: fix link
- 08:1508:15, 30 March 2008 diff hist +448 A More Perfect Union (speech) Undid revision 202002826 by Bigtimepeace. Obama asserts in speech he cannot disown Wright.Clinton says he should have.Clearly a response.
- 07:4707:47, 30 March 2008 diff hist +18 A More Perfect Union (speech) →Speech
- 07:4307:43, 30 March 2008 diff hist +106 A More Perfect Union (speech) O was responding to the reaction, not the remarks. Etc.
- 07:1807:18, 30 March 2008 diff hist +448 A More Perfect Union (speech) Undid revision 201816209 by Grsz11 POV that speech can be delinked from its function and admired on its own terms is only one POV.
29 March 2008
- 14:1614:16, 29 March 2008 diff hist +328 A More Perfect Union (speech) →News media and pundits: A bit more meat on bones. Coud contribute more to analysis of speech sections, if we add that.
- 14:0114:01, 29 March 2008 diff hist +448 A More Perfect Union (speech) →Politicians: Clinton tempers her praise of speech.
- 13:5513:55, 29 March 2008 diff hist +585 A More Perfect Union (speech) →News media and pundits: Ralph Reed
28 March 2008
- 21:5821:58, 28 March 2008 diff hist +470 Daniel Pipes rv. Restore clarity as to nature of McNeil smear.
26 March 2008
- 16:0516:05, 26 March 2008 diff hist +95 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Coverage of Obama's church and pastor: later cite, someone else needs to update text,I gotta run
- 15:5715:57, 26 March 2008 diff hist +12 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Coverage of Obama's faith: the issue is politics, not faith
- 14:1114:11, 26 March 2008 diff hist +371 Barack Obama rv. I've seen the Campaign article. What's your point? NPOV is still required here. Obama doesn't get to supply only evaluation of his own speech.
- 14:0614:06, 26 March 2008 diff hist +2,122 Barack Obama →Senate career: Restore info about Obama's voting record during his SENATE CAREER. No sub-article for that.
- 14:0014:00, 26 March 2008 diff hist +371 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: A start on providing more on this issue than Obama's spin.
- 13:5813:58, 26 March 2008 diff hist −8 Barack Obama it's not just the 2008 Campaign section. Also the Senate Career section. And more.
- 13:4713:47, 26 March 2008 diff hist +8 Barack Obama restore entirely appropriate POV tag "Please do not remove this message until the dispute is resolved." It isn't. Don't.
- 12:1512:15, 26 March 2008 diff hist +332 Daniel Pipes The claims are simply false.
25 March 2008
- 22:4522:45, 25 March 2008 diff hist 0 Daniel Pipes →Praise...: And someone removed the evidence McNeil was smearing Pipes. Tsk, tsk. If it was a "not RS" argument, familiarize yourself w/non-interpretive use of primary source policy.
- 22:3922:39, 25 March 2008 diff hist +611 Daniel Pipes →Praise, criticism and controversy: Did someone perform a steo-tep removal of this? First replace cite w "fact" tag, then "uncited BLP vio"? Just asking.
- 22:3622:36, 25 March 2008 diff hist +37 Daniel Pipes →Praise, criticism and controversy: Restore cite. Citing does not require web accessibility. And you lost the issue date.
24 March 2008
- 22:0722:07, 24 March 2008 diff hist −11 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Coverage of Obama's church and former pastor: unnecessary word in this context
- 22:0522:05, 24 March 2008 diff hist +226 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Coverage of Obama's church and former pastor: Someone complaining about"out of context" shouldn't leave impression Wright was just quoting Peck,not elaborating on Peck in his own offensive manner.
- 21:3621:36, 24 March 2008 diff hist +22 Edward Peck (American diplomat) →Jeremiah Wright: We shouldn't give the impression Wright was just quoting Peck and not agreeing with him wholeheartedly
- 13:5713:57, 24 March 2008 diff hist +7,137 Barack Obama restore POV tag, ratings of Obama's voting record, and undo gross POV censorship of Wright section.Obama's spin CANNOT be only POV expressed on Wright catastrophe.
- 13:5113:51, 24 March 2008 diff hist +435 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Coverage of Obama's church and former pastor: add context; a little tightening.
- 13:4113:41, 24 March 2008 diff hist 0 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Coverage of Obama's church and former pastor: move poll results to bottom
- 13:3113:31, 24 March 2008 diff hist +8 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Coverage of Obama's church and former pastor: to get corpsman bit you need to cite bio at TUCC site
- 13:2213:22, 24 March 2008 diff hist +223 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Coverage of Obama's childhood and heritage: restore cite
- 13:1913:19, 24 March 2008 diff hist −48 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Coverage of Obama's childhood and heritage: rmv dup header
- 13:1813:18, 24 March 2008 diff hist +191 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Coverage of Obama's childhood and heritage: Remove Nation mag's smear of Republicans. They've never selected Martin as a candidate.
- 13:0513:05, 24 March 2008 diff hist +193 Daniel Pipes →Praise, criticism and controversy: add meat to Pipes clarification
- 12:5612:56, 24 March 2008 diff hist +854 Daniel Pipes →Praise, criticism and controversy: '''The Nation''' 's "fact-checking" process had problems
- 12:1712:17, 24 March 2008 diff hist +10 Daniel Pipes →Campus Watch: prep
- 11:5211:52, 24 March 2008 diff hist −14 Daniel Pipes →Praise, criticism and controversy: not a "quote"
- 11:5011:50, 24 March 2008 diff hist −25 Daniel Pipes →Continued friction: meaningless subheader
- 11:4811:48, 24 March 2008 diff hist +948 Daniel Pipes →Praise, criticism and controversy: Obviously belongs in Crit section, if anywhere.
- 11:4411:44, 24 March 2008 diff hist −904 Daniel Pipes →Views and positions: Wrong section.
- 10:3610:36, 24 March 2008 diff hist −436 Daniel Pipes →Praise, criticism and controversy: Duplicates earlier mention
- 08:2608:26, 24 March 2008 diff hist +7,137 Barack Obama rv revision 200404966 by Bobblehead Obama fans don't get to maintain POV unbalance by witholding consent. And they especially don't get to censor POV tag.
23 March 2008
- 13:1313:13, 23 March 2008 diff hist 0 m Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →March primaries: ce
- 12:5012:50, 23 March 2008 diff hist +7,137 Barack Obama rv biased edit from Scjessey: "Have you considered that the reason the article contains little criticism is because there is little to criticize about Obama? -- Scjessey 20:43, 22 March 2008 (UTC)"
- 11:1611:16, 23 March 2008 diff hist +214 Barack Obama →Senate career: here, dammit
- 11:1511:15, 23 March 2008 diff hist −214 Barack Obama no, did it wrong again, somehow
- 11:1111:11, 23 March 2008 diff hist +214 Barack Obama →Senate career: goes here
- 11:1011:10, 23 March 2008 diff hist −214 Barack Obama →110th Congress: self-rv wrong section
- 11:0711:07, 23 March 2008 diff hist +214 Barack Obama →Senate career: Give Obama his say. It's called NPOV. Try it sometime.
- 11:0211:02, 23 March 2008 diff hist +3,562 Barack Obama Undid revision 199827628 by Scjessey (talk) restore material necessary for NPOV
- 10:5810:58, 23 March 2008 diff hist +8 Barack Obama Undid revision 199863939 by Sceptre (talk) POV tag obviously justified. FA status clearly undeserved.
- 10:5410:54, 23 March 2008 diff hist +3,321 Barack Obama rv revision 200192645 by Scjessey Bogus claim of consensus cannot justify POV treatment of subject where Obams gets first, last, and only word.
- 08:0108:01, 23 March 2008 diff hist −33 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Coverage of Obama's childhood and heritage: This is what Martin said.
21 March 2008
- 21:4821:48, 21 March 2008 diff hist −23 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign rv. Reread the 3O exchange. Claimed BLP vio is nothing new,and remains bogus. WP:BLP:"Get it right." Martin did not limit himself to heritage. He said O was a Muslim. We say he's wrong.No BLP vio.
- 21:3621:36, 21 March 2008 diff hist +5 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Coverage of Obama's church and former pastor: Gallup's exact words are "nearly tied"; "dead heat" does not appear in source.
- 21:3321:33, 21 March 2008 diff hist −11 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Coverage of Obama's church and former pastor: McCain's leads date back only to Mar 15th and 18th; he had trailed both before, followed by short periods of tying.
- 21:2121:21, 21 March 2008 diff hist −23 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign Undid revision 199894548 by 72.0.180.2 We used talk. We got a third opinion. You were adjudged wrong. Get over it.
- 10:5910:59, 21 March 2008 diff hist −47 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Coverage of Obama's church and former pastor: not supported by either cite
- 10:4110:41, 21 March 2008 diff hist −23 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Coverage of Obama's childhood and heritage: Martin didn't limit himself to heritage.
- 10:3310:33, 21 March 2008 diff hist +900 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: NPOV requires other POV on subject than just Obama's
- 10:3010:30, 21 March 2008 diff hist +1,908 Barack Obama →Senate career: Restore info about Obama's voting record during his SENATE CAREER.
20 March 2008
- 15:2215:22, 20 March 2008 diff hist +809 A More Perfect Union (speech) →News media: Another negative reaction to changing the subject.
- 15:0715:07, 20 March 2008 diff hist +932 A More Perfect Union (speech) →News media: Not everyone is ecstatic
19 March 2008
- 15:3715:37, 19 March 2008 diff hist +2,775 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign rv unidentified sock. see WP:SOCK."one editor, one account"Terminology reveals not a new editor. Identify yourself.
- 15:2815:28, 19 March 2008 diff hist +1 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: ce
- 15:0815:08, 19 March 2008 diff hist +2,775 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign RV mass revert by sockpuppet anon SPA with no history of contrib to article
- 14:4914:49, 19 March 2008 diff hist +2,775 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign Undid revision 199348685 by 76.214.211.56 restore NPOV treatment of controversy
- 14:0314:03, 19 March 2008 diff hist −29 Barack Obama rv Wrong template."Cleanup issues that this project covers may include wikification, spelling, grammar, tone, and sourcing." n/a
- 13:5913:59, 19 March 2008 diff hist +2,775 Barack Obama 2008 presidential primary campaign →Rev. Jeremiah Wright controversy: Was more detail on real issue -- what did Obama know and when did he know it -- in bio than here. Importing it.
- 13:3413:34, 19 March 2008 diff hist −29 Barack Obama →"A More Perfect Union": no, this is wrong place for a full header -- maybe subheader just before Wright, tho.
- 13:3113:31, 19 March 2008 diff hist +202 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: explanation of disinvite
- 13:2613:26, 19 March 2008 diff hist −16 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: better sequence material
- 13:1713:17, 19 March 2008 diff hist −9 Barack Obama →"A More Perfect Union": rmv judgement of speech in Wikipedia's voice (a bit premature)
- 13:1413:14, 19 March 2008 diff hist +275 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: Again, date of awareness is crucial to crit of Obama. He admits Feb 2007. Critics ask about prev 20 yr. NPOV req their POV be given due weight,
- 13:1013:10, 19 March 2008 diff hist +304 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: make anonymous crit specific
- 12:5212:52, 19 March 2008 diff hist +18 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: Date is significant (10 months after Obama claims he became aware of Wright's unacceptable remarks)
- 12:4812:48, 19 March 2008 diff hist −3 Barack Obama →Presidential campaign: ce
- 12:4312:43, 19 March 2008 diff hist +460 Barack Obama →Senate career: resupply contextual info
- 12:2712:27, 19 March 2008 diff hist +257 Early life and career of Barack Obama restore Barker
- 12:2512:25, 19 March 2008 diff hist +257 Barack Obama →Early life and career: restore Barker, one of series by Barker on Obama's life
- 12:1712:17, 19 March 2008 diff hist +4,505 Barack Obama Undid revision 199309202 by HailFire unacceptable to begin with revert
- 11:2611:26, 19 March 2008 diff hist −115 Madrasa →Madrasahs in Pakistan: cite is duplicated following next sentence
- 11:1411:14, 19 March 2008 diff hist +42 Yuri Nosenko note audio version
- 11:1111:11, 19 March 2008 diff hist +78 Yuri Nosenko clarify cite
- 11:0911:09, 19 March 2008 diff hist +2 Yuri Nosenko →Aftermath: ce
- 11:0711:07, 19 March 2008 diff hist −65 Yuri Nosenko →Aftermath: rewrite, better
- 10:5910:59, 19 March 2008 diff hist +1 m Yuri Nosenko ce
- 10:5810:58, 19 March 2008 diff hist 0 m Yuri Nosenko ce
- 10:5710:57, 19 March 2008 diff hist −3 Yuri Nosenko →Assertions about the Kennedy Assassination: ungarble
- 10:5610:56, 19 March 2008 diff hist −417 Yuri Nosenko →Assertions about the Kennedy Assassination: remove apparent rewrite redundancy artifacts
- 10:4910:49, 19 March 2008 diff hist −31 Yuri Nosenko →Assertions about the Kennedy Assassination: ce
- 10:4510:45, 19 March 2008 diff hist +136 Yuri Nosenko →Biography: details on $