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Revision as of 18:27, 8 February 2009
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was not promoted by Scorpion0422 23:36, 7 February 2009 [1].
List of Metallica concert tours
- Nominators: Nergaal & Igordebraga
Asides from minor cleanup, I believe this list is ready to be featured. Constructive comments are welcomed. Nergaal (talk) 00:46, 25 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose from Truco (talk · contribs)
- Metallica is an American heavy metal band, founded in 1981 by Lars Ulrich in Los Angeles. - state that he is a drummer
- Since 1982, Metallica has performed numerous times in North America and Europe, but has also performed in other parts of the World such as South America, East and Southeast Asia,[1] Australia, New Zealand, Israel, and South Africa. - 1)unlink the countries/continents, they are too common terms 2)decapitalize World
- As of 2009, the band has performed live gigs during each year with the exception of 2001, in a total of over 1500 shows. - gigs is not an encyclopedic word, should be events (as well as other occurrences of this)
- The prose needs to be expanding substantially, by summarizing the list more and telling more on the background of Metallica
- All phrases in the notes in the tables should be in past tense not in present tense
- Unlink the countries/states/continents in the table
- What makes Metallicaworld.co.uk , Metsanitarium.com, Encycmet.com., All Metallica. , Last.fm., and Metroactive.com. reliable?
- Consistency is needed in the publishers for the references, like the encyclopedia reference
- Add |format=PDF to the PDF files.
- The notes need to be seriously copyedited, they need to be in complete sentences or in a better worded fragment.--TRUCO 01:07, 25 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Followup comments
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- The notes need copyediting still need copyediting First gigs as a band is not grammatically correct.
- The intro should have the first, most recent tour, and other significant tours.
- The sourcing issues need to be resolved--TRUCO 02:15, 1 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Some more copyediting is needed in the notes, example: Festival tour. (this is not a complete sentence, so no full stop needed, there are others also with grammatical errors, this is just one. Some of the notes are sourced, while others aren't, so some are being verified with references, and others aren't, which makes the list unverifiable. Some of the references also look unreliable, but check with User:Dabomb87 for a check on those.--TRUCO 00:23, 7 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- The lead is too short and not very well written or organized.
- metallicaworld.co.uk is a fan site, as is AllMetallica and encycmet.com (AllMetallica is the only one of the three that does not admit this on their main page) and is Last.fm useable?
- The format appears to be modelled after List of Kylie Minogue concert tours, but personally I like the format used at List of Nine Inch Nails tours (although listing the band members would not be necessary). -- Scorpion0422 19:12, 27 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comment Please fix the dabs. Dabomb87 (talk) 02:40, 29 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I'm in the process of replacing fansites and Last.fm refs, but else do you suggest in the intro? I picked that format to add notes on tour events, specially because not all tours have their pages. igordebraga ≠ 17:58, 29 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I've improved the prose of the notes significantly. Please give specific suggestions for the introduction, because I have no idea what is missing right now. Nergaal (talk) 01:43, 1 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- "Since 1982, Metallica has performed numerous times in North America and Europe, but has also performed in other parts of the world such as South America," – "Since 1982, Metallica has performed in North America, Europe, South America,"
- "As of 2009, the band has performed in live events during each year with the exception of 2001, in a total of over 1600 shows." – "As of 2009, the band has performed in live events each year with the exception of 2001, in over 1600 shows."
- Please provide more information for the image captions, such as what city they are in. Frankly, we should learn something new from the image; an image of a concert is just like the image of any other concert, unless we learn more about that specific image.
- "was
the"Kill " - The lead is three short paragraphs. Either expand them or merge them logically.
- The en dashes should be spaced if not between two elements of the same type, like two numbers or two months. So "Mar 14–Nov 30, 1982" to "Mar 14 – Nov 30, 1982". Also, I would very much prefer seeing full month names.
- "Saxon, [4]" – Remove the space after the comma.
Gary King (talk) 02:49, 7 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Done all but two - the original source for the Damage Inc. photo is a dead site, so I can't find the location (but expanded the captions a bit), and need to know what could be done in the lead. igordebraga ≠ 15:32, 7 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- For the lead, talk about their concerts, perhaps typically how much money they gross, and so on. There is only 1000 bytes of prose in the article right now, surely there can be more. This is the only article about Metallica concerts, so let's make it good. Nine Inch Nails has an entire article dedicated to their live performances at Nine Inch Nails live performances. Gary King (talk) 18:03, 7 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I will review fully tomorrow, but what makes http://www.rockthebayou.com/Bio.aspx?id=27 a reliable source? Dabomb87 (talk) 03:54, 7 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
It's a festival website. If it's not written by the organizers, it's a press release from the band. Either way doesn't fail WP:RS. igordebraga ≠ 15:32, 7 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Quick question: is this site reliable: http://www.ilikethat.com/metallica/ ? Nergaal (talk) 02:39, 8 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was not promoted by Scorpion0422 23:36, 7 February 2009 [2].
List of One Piece episodes (season 9)
An anime episode list. -- Goodraise (talk) 06:47, 19 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- A couple things, mostly WP:MOS-JA related:
- Kônosuke Uda → Kōnosuke Uda: circumflexes are deprecated in favor of macrons (the page linked to should be moved as well). In the same vein, Eiichirô Oda → Eiichirō Oda.
- Title emphasis and WP:MOS-JA#Titles of books, CDs, movies, etc.: BRAND NEW WORLD → "Brand New World"; the tildes in "We Are ~7 Straw Hat Pirates variant~" need to be replaced with something more appropriate (parentheses, maybe); ADVENTURE WORLD → "Adventure World".
- "seiyūs" → "seiyū": non-naturalized Japanese words are not pluralized with "s".
- Rōmaji titles should be title-cased, as seen in episodes 313 on. And some fixes along with that:
- episode 302, 305: "Rucchi" → "Rutchi": っち is "tchi", see Hepburn romanization#Double consonants
- episode 303: "oozakura" → "Ōzakura"
- episode 311, 320: "zenin" → "zen'in": んい and に need to be disambiguated, WP:MOS-JA#Body text #5
- episode 319: "Jī-san" → "Jii-san": WP:MOS-JA#Body text #1, kanji/hiragana *aa/*ee/*ii are not macronned unless used with ー (e.g. らーめん rāmen)
- episode 320: "Tsuini" → "Tsui ni": don't attach particles to the preceding word
- —tan³ tx 22:32, 19 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Weak support from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs) Needs a copy-edit. Depending on whether I can take care of my other real-life and wiki obligations, I may return to look at the prose again.
- "The Special Chapter contains episodes, recapping the back stories of the Straw Hat Pirates, and five omake adaptations of short comics by Oda, originally published in the One Piece Log fan magazine. "-->The Special Chapter contains episodes, which summarize the back stories of the Straw Hat Pirates, and five omake adaptations of short comics by Oda, which were originally published in the One Piece Log fan magazine.
- "over fifty-seven episodes" Numbers over nine should generally be written in numeric form (57).
- "These episodes seamlessly continue the story of season 8." "seamlessly" as opposed to what...?
- "
Togetherwith the sea train conductor Kokoro" - "They crossed the yearly occurring storm" Why are is the past tense suddenly used here?
- "
in orderto" (multiple occurences) - "Enies Lobby drawing near"-->As Enies Lobby draws near
- "and as his friends gaze in awe"-->While his friends gaze in awe (add a period before this phrase)
- "All goes smoothly at first, but by the time the" Who are "they"?
- "ten-thousand men. "-->10,000 men.
- "The Galley-La foremen and the leading members of the Franky Family arrive late at the second gate, but they are bringing with them the family's king bulls mounted on caterpillar tracks."-->The Galley-La foremen and the leading members of the Franky Family arrive late at the second gate, and have brought along with them the family's king bulls mounted on caterpillar tracks.
- "With their combined forces" comma after this phrase. Dabomb87 (talk) 22:44, 23 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Striking oppose, will come back to copy-edit over the weekend. Dabomb87 (talk) 00:39, 30 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Sources look good. Dabomb87 (talk) 22:44, 23 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
The general ref is missing a publisher.Refs 3 to 7 should not have the title in all caps. Make it in sentence case.Dabomb87 (talk) 03:50, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this page.
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was not promoted by Scorpion0422 23:37, 4 February 2009 [3].
Wind power in Romania
Please note that peer reviews should be closed before coming to FLC... I closed it for you this time. Dabomb87 (talk) 22:22, 3 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Now, pertaining to the list, I don't think that the title "Wind power in Romania" is accurate. It sounds like the article is an overview of wind power in Romania, which it is not. Wouldn't it be "List of wind farms in Romania"? To that end, what was the inclusion criteria for the wind farms? Dabomb87 (talk) 22:26, 3 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- The criteria was all wind farms over 10 MW installed capacity. Mario1987 09:31, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- The name should stay as it is to be consistent with other Wind Power in Country articles. One quick comment is that "in romanian" in the references needs to be capitalized. Reywas92Talk 23:06, 3 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- But those are not considered lists. See Wind power in the United States. This article should either be copy-pasted into a new article or moved. Dabomb87 (talk) 03:05, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Should i move it to "List of wind farms in Romania"? Mario1987 09:35, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Don't move per se, maybe create a new article through cut-and-paste, and leave some info (the lead) here. Dabomb87 (talk) 14:14, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I created a separate article List of wind farms in Romania. Should i propose that as a featured list? Mario1987 17:12, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Should i move it to "List of wind farms in Romania"? Mario1987 09:35, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- But those are not considered lists. See Wind power in the United States. This article should either be copy-pasted into a new article or moved. Dabomb87 (talk) 03:05, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
(outdent) Yes. Do not remove the FLC template or withdraw this nomination yet. Let the FLC director take care of it. Dabomb87 (talk) 22:51, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
For article history purposes, it would be better to close this one, then start a new one for the List of wind farms in Romania. This one is closed. Mario1987, you can create a nom for the new list whenever you are ready. -- Scorpion0422 23:36, 4 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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