GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 12:52, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:52, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
- Infobox looks good; images are free to use.
- However, I would suggest adding a caption.
- "as the recurring role" doesn't sound right. Try rewording.
- Certain claims don't need sources if they are already in the body of the article.
- "that is set to" → "which is set to" or "set to"
- Add a comma after "December 22, 2021" in the last sentence.
Early life
- The first sentence needs a source.
- You can't cite IMDb per WP:IMDB.
- That second paragraph is just a quote. Is it necessary?
- Here and in other sections, change uses of "..." to "[...]" (visually pleasing).
- The second-to-last paragraph is unsourced.
- The reference after "begin his career" is dead.
Career
- Add commas after "December 11, 2005", "May 19, 2006", "August 21, 2010", "September 9, 2012", "January 20, 2013", "September 20, 2013", "November 19, 2013", "May 25, 2014", "July 13, 2015", "September 17, 2019", per MOS:DATECOMMA.
- The use of "musical" in the last sentence of the 1st paragraph feels repetitive.
- "filmed a first episode" doesn't sound right so try rewording.
- The sentence ending with "in 2019" needs a source.
- "Upcoming Projects" → "Upcoming projects"
Personal life
- This section looks good.
Filmography and discography
- Per consistency with other GA-articles, each of his projects needs a source.
Awards and nominations
- Every single award nomination/win needs a reference as well.
- It would also make it easier to simply have a references column.
References
- Archive all archivable sources (either manually or with this tool).
- Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
- Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
- Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
- Mark references from Vanity Fair with "|url-access=limited".
- Mark references from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
- USA TODAY → USA Today
- The reference after The Voice is missing several parameters.
- Optional, but linking websites using "|website=" can help future readers.
Progress
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