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|text = On [[Wikipedia:Recent_additions#18 July 2020|18 July 2020]], '''[[:Template:Did you know|Did you know]]''' was updated with a fact from the article '''''[[The Sky Is Pink]]''''', which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ''... that [[Priyanka Chopra]] planned her wedding to [[Nick Jonas]] in between filming scenes for '''''[[The Sky Is Pink]]'''''{{-?}}'' The nomination discussion and review may be seen at [[Template:Did you know nominations/The Sky Is Pink]]. You are welcome to check how many page hits the article got while on the front page <small>([[User:Rjanag/Pageview stats|here's how]], [//tools.wmflabs.org/pageviews?start=2020-07-08&end=2020-07-28&project=en.wikipedia.org&pages=The_Sky_Is_Pink The Sky Is Pink])</small>, and it may be added to [[Wikipedia:Did you know/Statistics|the statistics page]] if the total is over 5,000. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the [[:Template talk:Did you know|Did you know talk page]]. |
|text = On [[Wikipedia:Recent_additions#18 July 2020|18 July 2020]], '''[[:Template:Did you know|Did you know]]''' was updated with a fact from the article '''''[[The Sky Is Pink]]''''', which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ''... that [[Priyanka Chopra]] planned her wedding to [[Nick Jonas]] in between filming scenes for '''''[[The Sky Is Pink]]'''''{{-?}}'' The nomination discussion and review may be seen at [[Template:Did you know nominations/The Sky Is Pink]]. You are welcome to check how many page hits the article got while on the front page <small>([[User:Rjanag/Pageview stats|here's how]], [//tools.wmflabs.org/pageviews?start=2020-07-08&end=2020-07-28&project=en.wikipedia.org&pages=The_Sky_Is_Pink The Sky Is Pink])</small>, and it may be added to [[Wikipedia:Did you know/Statistics|the statistics page]] if the total is over 5,000. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the [[:Template talk:Did you know|Did you know talk page]]. |
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Bluffmaster!
A few notes on my GOCE copy edit of Bluffmaster!, and advice towards GAN.
- Some sources seem to use an exclamation point in the title and others do not. Try to get a good sense of what the official title is (not a stylized promotional title) and use that consistently throughout the article.
- Most of the article is unsourced, so I feel that you've got a ways to go before GAN.
- There's a slight problem which I think is common in shorter articles, where editors have started writing with the lead. A better practice is to write the body of the article, sourcing everything, and then summarize the most notable sourced statements in the lead. The same goes with the infoboxes. There generally shouldn't be anything in the lead or infobox which isn't cited in the body of the article.
- There were tone issues with the Story section. Our aim is to provide a neutral summary of the events of the story, including spoilers, not to tease the story. Unless the movie suddenly ends with Roy's cancer entering its final stages, more should be explained. Rhetorical statements like "Can the greatest conman con death itself?" are to be avoided.
- A plot summary generally doesn't need a citation because it is attributed to the subject of the article (with the writers and producers mentioned elsewhere), but be careful of other statements which do need sources.
The movie has borrowed heavily from Nine Queens (Argentina), The Game (US) and Matchstick Men (US).
This definitely needs an inline citation, as a matter of policy for verifiability and to show that it isn't original research. - I pretty much left the Allusions section alone. I feel that a GA reviewer may ask for its removal as trivia, not essential to a summary of the subject (GA criteria for focus). If you want to justify keeping this content in the article, I would highly recommend citing it to reliable secondary sources. If RSS report it, that can support the notability of the information.
- MOS:NUMNOTES says to group digits in Western thousands-based style regardless of the subject of the article. Rather than doing that, I wrote out the soundtrack sales with words and a conversion.
- The mini-infobox in Soundtrack is unsourced and contradictory – it has a release date of 19 Nov while the prose has 20 Nov. I would suggest removing the box and concentrating on getting facts established in the prose. Then, if necessary, restate the sourced key facts in a side box. But the prose should always come first.
- I was going to put the track listing in a {{track listing}} template, but it was unsourced and I couldn't confirm the roles for all of the names alongside the tracks. It should be made clear whether they are writers, performers, composers, lyricists, or what. (The track listing template will make this easier.)
At the box office, the film had a below average opening but recovered through its theatrical run, becoming a moderate commercial success.
The source boxofficeindia.com gives raw figures only. You need a source for the analysis and commentary.
I hope that this is of help. – Reidgreg (talk) 13:52, 21 June 2020 (UTC)
DYK nomination of The Sky Is Pink
Hello! Your submission of The Sky Is Pink at the Did You Know nominations page has been reviewed, and some issues with it may need to be clarified. Please review the comment(s) at your nomination's entry and respond there as soon as possible. Thank you for contributing to Did You Know! Yoninah (talk) 18:54, 22 June 2020 (UTC)
Sky is Pink DYK
Hello again. I just wanted to say that I was disappointed by your response to my proposed hooks for the Sky is Pink DYK. I found your general attitude to be quite rude, especially since I went out of my way to try and help this as much as possible. I just wanted to express that point to you. It honestly made me sad. Aoba47 (talk) 22:25, 25 June 2020 (UTC)
- Aoba47 Sorry if my response hurt you but it was not for you/not meant for you. It was for the editor who opposed my hook just because according to him Chopra is unknown outside India and the DYK is supposed to get views. I appreciate what you did in my absence for that DYK nomination. I would like to apologise to you again. That was not my intention, never was and never will be.Krish | Talk To Me 22:31, 25 June 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you for the response, and apologies for my message. For some reason, I took it way too personally and I should have instead walked away from it to cool down. Apologies for that, and I hope you are doing well. Aoba47 (talk) 22:46, 25 June 2020 (UTC)
- Aoba47 Yeah, I'm doing good but am super busy with my work. So much so that I'm unable to come on Wikipedia. I have also not looked at the peer review page where you have posted so many suggestions because of my busyschedule. I hope to return to finish my work there. And, I hope you too are doing well.Krish | Talk To Me 22:52, 25 June 2020 (UTC)
- Take as much time as you need with the peer review. I will most likely take a break from Wikipedia in the near future myself. I hope the work is going well. And I am trying my best lol. Aoba47 (talk) 23:23, 25 June 2020 (UTC)
- Also, if you need help with anything Wikipedia-related, please let me know. Aoba47 (talk) 00:27, 26 June 2020 (UTC)
- Aoba47 Yeah, I'm doing good but am super busy with my work. So much so that I'm unable to come on Wikipedia. I have also not looked at the peer review page where you have posted so many suggestions because of my busyschedule. I hope to return to finish my work there. And, I hope you too are doing well.Krish | Talk To Me 22:52, 25 June 2020 (UTC)
Krish!, the nomination has been approved, pending your submission of a QPQ review. Please take care of that right away. Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 18:24, 11 July 2020 (UTC)
DYK for The Sky Is Pink
On 18 July 2020, Did you know was updated with a fact from the article The Sky Is Pink, which you recently created, substantially expanded, or brought to good article status. The fact was ... that Priyanka Chopra planned her wedding to Nick Jonas in between filming scenes for The Sky Is Pink? The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/The Sky Is Pink. You are welcome to check how many page hits the article got while on the front page (here's how, The Sky Is Pink), and it may be added to the statistics page if the total is over 5,000. Finally, if you know of an interesting fact from another recently created article, then please feel free to suggest it on the Did you know talk page.
Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:02, 18 July 2020 (UTC)
ARBIPA sanctions alert
This is a standard message to notify contributors about an administrative ruling in effect. It does not imply that there are any issues with your contributions to date.
You have shown interest in India, Pakistan, and Afghanistan. Due to past disruption in this topic area, a more stringent set of rules called discretionary sanctions is in effect. Any administrator may impose sanctions on editors who do not strictly follow Wikipedia's policies, or the page-specific restrictions, when making edits related to the topic.
For additional information, please see the guidance on discretionary sanctions and the Arbitration Committee's decision here. If you have any questions, or any doubts regarding what edits are appropriate, you are welcome to discuss them with me or any other editor.
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