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*The ISBN for the Oliver book should also be ISBN 13 not ISBN 10 (use [https://www.isbn.org/ISBN_converter the converter])</s> |
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*Everything else looks good, these are such minor things that I'm just going to do them. '''Pass''' for source review, cheers! [[User:Aza24|Aza24]] ([[User talk:Aza24|talk]]) 07:26, 8 September 2020 (UTC) |
*Everything else looks good, these are such minor things that I'm just going to do them. '''Pass''' for source review, cheers! [[User:Aza24|Aza24]] ([[User talk:Aza24|talk]]) 07:26, 8 September 2020 (UTC) |
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Wales national football team results 1876–99
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The first of a possible series of Wales international football results lists. I've used the format for the one promoted Scottish list as a template and brought this list up to a level I believe is worthy of FL status. I look forward to any comments. Kosack (talk) 21:29, 18 August 2020 (UTC)
- Comments
- "Wales player their first home fixture " - spot the typo ;-)
- "played 62 fixtures, winning 11, drawing 8 and losing the remaining 44" - that doesn't add up to 62
- First three general refs (statistics) need access dates
- Thunk that's it from me - great work! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 21:06, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
- @ChrisTheDude: Thanks for the review Chris, I've addressed the points above. Kosack (talk) 14:35, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:16, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
Harrias
- Per MOS:OVERLINK, delink well-known places; certainly London, Cardiff, Glasgow, Edinburgh and Belfast. Honestly, given that the location will be linked from the ground page, there is an argument for removing them all. - Removed
- I assume match #12 should be in 1882? - Fixed
- In light of the recent RFC on table captions (closed back in May) and how FLCs have to follow MOS:ACCESS, a table captions should be included in all tables. This quote by PresN might apply to this list:
"In the case that the table is the first thing in a section where the section header is essentially the same as what the caption would be, and therefore looks duplicative visually, you can make the caption screen reader-only with the {{sronly}} template, e.g. "|+ {{sronly|Example table caption}}" instead of "
- The "Head to head records" table also needs row and column scopes adding.
- Add a WP:Short description.
- "..losing 4–0 at Hamilton Crescent in Partick." The table says "Hamilton Crescent, Glasgow": be consistent. (I know Partick is in Glasgow, but the article should pick one or the other.)
- "The match makes the Welsh side the third oldest international football team" I'm not keen on this phrasing: maybe rephrase the whole thing to: "The team are the third oldest in international football, behind only Scotland and England. They played their first match on 18 March 1876 against Scotland, losing 4–0 at Hamilton Crescent in Glasgow." (or Partick, whichever you're going with.) It might just be me: don't feel obligated to change if you don't think it is an improvement.
- "..with Scotland winning.." Avoid noun plus -ing.
- "..with the British Home Championship, a round-robin tournament, holding.." Same again.
- "..with Jack Doughty scoring.." And again.
- "..higher than third in the British Home Championship.." As it is clear what competition you are talking about, I think you could optionally shorten this to "..higher than third in the Championship.."
That's it from me: a nice list, I look forward to the rest of the series! Harrias talk 12:15, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
- @Harrias: Thanks Harrias, I've amended all of the points above. Let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 14:35, 20 August 2020 (UTC)
Resolved comments from ~ HAL333 21:11, 25 August 2020 (UTC) |
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Everything else looks great! ~ HAL333 19:52, 25 August 2020 (UTC) |
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Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 19:00, 3 September 2020 (UTC) |
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WikiCup points will be claimed etc etc
That's my lot. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 10:09, 31 August 2020 (UTC)
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- Support nice work. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 19:00, 3 September 2020 (UTC)
Source review - Pass
I'm not sure if this is actually a guideline but I almost always see the specific refs above the general ones, you may want to do so here – I'm fine with either way though.- Amazon says that the Guinness publisher is officially "Guinness World Records Ltd"
The ISBN for the Oliver book should also be ISBN 13 not ISBN 10 (use the converter)- Everything else looks good, these are such minor things that I'm just going to do them. Pass for source review, cheers! Aza24 (talk) 07:26, 8 September 2020 (UTC)
- Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:13, 13 September 2020 (UTC)