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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: rejected by Narutolovehinata5 (talk) 13:35, 16 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Talk page discussion has been closed with a consensus to merge.
Overall: Solid article. Earwig checks out; QPQ unnecessary here. The hook has a few issues. First, the bolded link needs to be redone per MOS:EGG. Article title itself could be reworked into a piped bolded link. Secondly, there's the image. I understand that one of the opponents in the arcade Punch Out!! is called "Pizza Pasta", but an image of such commonly known food isn't necessary. It's also not directly relevant. (After all, why not also include a photo of a Honda car and a piston for you-know-who?) Some more quibbles: 1.) The article ought to make clear that at least the arcade, NES, and SNES installments were made in Japan. The quote from the Escapist suggests that it was made in the US ("As you go through the game, you gain an encyclopedic knowledge of ignorant American sentiments"). Either that passage needs to be cut, or there needs to be a clarification (with citation). 2.) The passage "Stereotypes have been prominent in Punch-Out!! since the release of the eponymous arcade game in the early-mid 1980s" is not confirmed in the cited source. —CurryTime7-24 (talk) 19:16, 5 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@CurryTime7-24: I propose this as an alternate hook:
ALT1: ... that Stereotypes in Punch-Out!! include long-standing negative stereotypes of Russians prevalent in both American and Japanese culture? Source: Schwenkbeck, Rahima (June 23, 2017). "Soda Popinski". In Banks, Jaime; Mejia, Robert; Adams, Aubrie (eds.). 100 Greatest Video Game Characters. 100 Greatest... Lanham: Rowman & Littlefield. p. 177. ISBN 9781442278134.
I also edited the page to make the changes you suggested. CJ-Moki (talk) 22:22, 5 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for letting me know. Will look over in a few minutes. Sorry for the delay: national and personal holidays. —CurryTime7-24 (talk) 19:30, 10 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
With apologies to the nominator, I've closed the talk page discussion with consensus to merge. theleekycauldron (talk • contribs) (she/her) 22:57, 15 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]